FF: Temptations- Chapter 29: Page 143 (21/09/09) - Page 2

Originally posted by: shabo24

FIRST TO COMMENT! =] Hey Shabo!! 😃

I don't know what you are talking about. Franky, I love Prem in this one, all haughty and self-loving. To tell you the truth, I love him too, I have made him sound very irresistable, lol! Going to make it even more fun to read when Heer enters the picture. It certainly will- just you wait and see what happens next! But wow, he seems to love himself a lil too much no? Hehe, yep he has a 'bit' of an ego! Can't wait for Gayatri to return so they can find him a wife!! =] But I haven't told you yet whether Gayatri will be the one to find him a wife, or whether he will find one himself! =P

Good luck Z! Love ya! Thankoo, *hugs*

--shabz

Originally posted by: sadizzle

omg this is such a cute FF!!

Im dying to read next..great job!!

Prem's attitude is so HOT!

we all know that only one girl can tame him..lol

plz continue soon!

if your going to have a PM list - plz add me!

thanx

-Sadi*

Originally posted by: indiandoll89

Mine! 😃

*unreserved*

I was giggling the minute I got your pm to be honest, only cus that's how I felt when I posted the preview of Never Fade Away! 😳 As for disliking Prem....I'm very hard sway like that...I usually don't hate him...ever!😆😆 Yeah, it is really hard to stop yourself!! I get too excited too easily!! You may not go as far as hating him, but you will feel a pang of dissapproval!

Oh and the Temptation to write joke, was good! 😛😳 And ooh ooh Good Luck!! *hugs* You liked the joke? I thought it was rather lame, but I couldn't stop myself with this either! 😆 And thank you, university is really getting me down at the moment 😔, I wish I could just get married (seriously!)

He couldn't resist money and woman? *raises eyebrow* This is going to be interesting!😆😆 Oh....okay...so everything I said in the first sentence or second sentence.....might be a lie....my stomach feels weird! 😳😛 It will be interesting, just you wait until Heer enters the picture! My stomach feels weird too, I didn't like writing the bit about the woman lying in his bed, but I had to!!

You're making my emotions go haywire here Z!!! 😆 You......made.....him.....sound.....sooooooooo ☺️ Hehe- irresistable Prem!! I certainly got temperatures rising with that description- of course I told you that my favourite bit was his wet torso *blushes like crazy and swoons*

I like Lalit here! 😛 He's being good! 😃 Or well WAY better than his son right now!😆😆 This line though...had me giggling! 😛 "you have...needs... "😆Yep Lallit is good, whereas his son is like 'Maa Da Laadla Bigadh Gaya' 😆 That line is pretty funny isn't it?! 😆

So all in all, I love it! 😃 As much as it hurts me to see my Prem like that!😆😆😆Awww, thank you Meeru, means a lot! I gave you the hurt, I will make it dissappear!

Love you loads Z! 😃Love you too, Zahra xx

Meera😳

Originally posted by: shafaq92

Zahra! You're going away on a month's break eh?? How come I didn't know about this 😆 hehe? Anyhow good luck with everything dear! Yeah, I am going on a break!! Have loads of university deadlines to get on with, and as you must know, this forum gets pretty distracting, hehe! As for your latest FF, I've only managed to read the intro and its absolutely amazing! Well done 👏...I love it 😳 already!! Awww thank you Shafaq, glad you like it so far!!

Will read the 1st chapter soon and comment back. That is okay, take your time!

Keep it up!

Shafaq 😃Thank you again, Zahra xx