FF: Temptations- Chapter 29: Page 143 (21/09/09) - Page 5

Originally posted by: dryflower000

nice one..pls continue

Originally posted by: bd670816

hey zahra, amazing update. loved it.
tc.

Originally posted by: munam_13

Ok I know I am late ...I love this not so holy Prem...quite contradictory... I loved the way you described the character. A really different take on Prem and would love to read it... So I guess the new maid going to be Heer...I am desperate for the nest part😆

Originally posted by: vrinda16

Hai, Hello Vrinda!

Thanx for the PM. Awww, no need to thank me!

So, Prem despite being well influenced by both women & money, still holds high certain of his virtues like respect for parents, being a thorough professional & extremely focussed in his work without falling to his temptations & his extreme love & care for his mother & her emotions. I truly liked it. Yes, because he is what he is because of them, the success he has achieved is because of his father's hard work and his mother's blessings. His only fault is his inability to see women as humans rather than toys! He doesn't really believe in love...yet!

Even, why do I have a feeling now that Heer's entry into Prem's life is as a domestic help for G3?(That's the case if she hasn't already entered his life - u know, maybe, in the past😉 u can't say with Prem & his behaviour with women) Ummm, you will find out in the next chapter! And no, he hasn't met Heer beforehand.

Whatsoever, I'm eagerly waiting for the next update & hope Heer makes her much awaited entry then. Awww, thank you, you will see her entry in the next chapter.

Of course, do continue to be so generous to us often bcos we don't mind this generosity if it means having the chance to read such wonderful updates. In that case, such generosity is always welcome with open hands.😉😆 But of course, studies are important & don't do anything which can affect ur studies indirectly bcos we can wait for the updates till u r free. Hehe, depends how I feel, I am busy with my assignments at the moment, so we will see! Thank you for the lovely comment! Love Zahra xx

Vrinda.

Originally posted by: fungrl

It just keep on getting better. I loved How well Lalit knows his son and loved Prem and G-mom's relationship.👏

I hope you feel generous again and update soon😃

Originally posted by: Anhdara13

Sylar is awesome. I like him a lot more than I like this Denko dude. Sylar, at least, has style. And is pretty damn hot no? *giggles* Hey Radz- good to see you here!! 🤗 And yes, Sylar is totally awesome, Denko is just no match for him!! The answer to that question- YES!! Extremely hot- I get attracted to the bad guys ☺️😆!! Not that I don't love the good guys- Peter Petrelli has the same effect on me! 😳

I love this story so far! I cannot wait to see what happens next. Add me to the PM list. Thank you- I am glad you like it so far!! Will add you to the list!! Love Zahra xx

Love,
Radz

Originally posted by: zaibun

great update cant w8 to read more keep it up

Originally posted by: shabo24

LOL Z, don't worry about school! We are all in the same boat - me just WAITING for mid-June so I can just SLEEP! =] Hey Shabz! 🤗 Yeah it's university- getting on my nerves- I wish I was back at school, those days were so much easier!! 😆 Exactly, from the start of June it's going to be me sleeping endlessly and doing absolutely nothing!! 😛 It's going to be so much fun, I can't wait until summer break, only a month left!! *dreams*

Fantastic part, I really love the way you wrote Prem's character and his parents of course, but I have this instant dislike for Tanisha, Just ew. Let's keep her at a minimum shall we? ;) Thank you Shabo, I think everyone will dislike Tanisha- total bimbo, but yes I will keep her at a minimum, but I cannot guarantee that she won't pop up occasionally! 😆

Good luck with everything! Awww, thankoo!! Love Zahra xx

--shabz