FF: Temptations- Chapter 29: Page 143 (21/09/09)

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Sadia87

@Sadia87

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Posted: 16 years ago

#31

im predicting the entry of Heer is to come soon..but as a maid? wow!!

i bet prems gonna be so rude to her!! lol

so cant wait to see whats next

u have done an amazing job!

keep it up!

Thanx

-Sadi*

Edited by sadizzle - 16 years ago

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Zahra

@Pyari_Zahra

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+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: sadizzle

im predicting the entry of Heer is to come soon..but as a maid? wow!! Yes her entry will come soon- you will have to wait and see how! 😛

i bet prems gonna be so rude to her!! lol Rude? Ummm, no he won't be rude, that is all I can tell you at the moment! 😉

so cant wait to see whats next

u have done an amazing job! Awww, thank you, you're too kind!

keep it up! Your encouragement really does help a lot, so thanks again!! Love Zahra xx

Thanx

-Sadi*

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bd670816

@bd670816

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#33

hey zahra, amazing update. loved it.
tc.

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Priyadarshini Basu

@munam_13

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 16 years ago

#34

Ok I know I am late ...I love this not so holy Prem...quite contradictory... I loved the way you described the character. A really different take on Prem and would love to read it... So I guess the new maid going to be Heer...I am desperate for the nest part😆

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vrinda16

@vrinda16

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#35

Hai,

Thanx for the PM.

So, Prem despite being well influenced by both women & money, still holds high certain of his virtues like respect for parents, being a thorough professional & extremely focussed in his work without falling to his temptations & his extreme love & care for his mother & her emotions. I truly liked it.

Even, why do I have a feeling now that Heer's entry into Prem's life is as a domestic help for G3?(That's the case if she hasn't already entered his life - u know, maybe, in the past😉 u can't say with Prem & his behaviour with women)

Whatsoever, I'm eagerly waiting for the next update & hope Heer makes her much awaited entry then.

Of course, do continue to be so generous to us often bcos we don't mind this generosity if it means having the chance to read such wonderful updates. In that case, such generosity is always welcome with open hands.😉😆 But of course, studies are important & don't do anything which can affect ur studies indirectly bcos we can wait for the updates till u r free.

Vrinda.

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fungrl

@fungrl

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#36

It just keep on getting better. I loved How well Lalit knows his son and loved Prem and G-mom's relationship.👏

I hope you feel generous again and update soon😃

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Aradhna

@Anhdara13

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#37

Sylar is awesome. I like him a lot more than I like this Denko dude. Sylar, at least, has style. And is pretty damn hot no? *giggles*

I love this story so far! I cannot wait to see what happens next. Add me to the PM list.

Love,
Radz

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@flowers4u

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Posted: 16 years ago

#38

great update cant w8 to read more keep it up

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Meera

@indiandoll89

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+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#39

My spot! 😛

*unreserved*

*kaan pakering* I'm soooo cholly I took so long, I just had loads to do and then I forgot about it!😳😳

But dude....THAT WAS AWESOME!!!!👏 And wow....Tanisha...VERY desperate!😆 Like EXTREMELY!😳

But oh I loved the way you described how much his parents mean to him!😳 I'm glad you've kept all that proper at least!😛😳 Even though the rest of him is all over the place! 😛

Awwww G mom's all cute here! 😃😳 That makes me happy! 😛😳 And dude...bad servant!😆😆😆 Although I wonder how all this is going to tie in with Heer coming into the story!😃

Can't wait to see what you're going to do next Z! 😃

Love you loads and will wait super patiently till end of may! 😃😳

Meera😳

Edited by indiandoll89 - 16 years ago

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@shabo24

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#40

LOL Z, don't worry about school! We are all in the same boat - me just WAITING for mid-June so I can just SLEEP! =]

Fantastic part, I really love the way you wrote Prem's character and his parents of course, but I have this instant dislike for Tanisha, Just ew. Let's keep her at a minimum shall we? ;)

Good luck with everything!

--shabz

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