BARHAMCHAARI New FF UPDT pt2 pg 2 april 27th

hey guyz its me agianand i ma strting another fanfic along wid my other FF..well Barahmchaari is a story of ofcourse of our prem but in totally different personality or character... i was just sittin on compuiter and then suddnly this idea of FF hit my head... i m working on the first part rite now and i iwll post it whenever i m done.. it will be short thought but till then encourage me to write this FF... dats ur job😳 and let me noe if u want a PM list..

take care

luv

Tina

Originally posted by: Momana

sounds interesting can't wait for the first part.. and wat do u mean "our prem but in totally different character"

hey guyz well thanks for replying guyz.. here is the first part. ope u guyz will like it.

It's a beautiful day in Ambala…. Everyone is busy wid there daily chores and likely luving wat they r doin…. Lalit comes out tying his turban really quickly. He stands on his desck to see the beautiful golden crop of wheat and think about his life from past to present. Lalit is the most repected man in Amabla. Having a prosperous with amazing family he his really down to earth and loved by almost every1 around the town. Lalit owned most of the land in Ambala and along with that he owns huge hotel chain across India and Canada. Even tough most of his land work was done by his workers but he starts his day by working in the farm he luvs most. The land which connects two hearts together… the land which was the first purchase by him and his best friend Balraj. Balraj is Lalit's best friend since they remember. They did everything together in their life. They studied in same school, collage, worked on the same place as their first job and even they got married on the same day. They worked hard for their future and purchased their first land together. they did everything together except one thing. A financially crises separated to best friends… Balraaj had to leave india in order to help his family and his friend in their business… its bin 20 years since Balraaj left India… he did not get a chance to get back to india as he got so busy wid their business in Canada. Now Balraaj takes care of their business in Canada and lalit take care of India… Even though Lalit nad Balraaj havnt seen each other in years but they always maintained their relationship in the same shape as they did all along. A smile appeared on Lalit's face as he remembered his old days wid his friends. He tries to imagine his friends face and his family after 20 years..

Suddnly Lalit realises the time and he hurries back to his living room.

Lalit: Gaya3, Gay3 jaldi Lassi le ke aao. Mujhe der ho rahi hai….

Gaya3: ji abhi aayi…

Gay3 is a wonderful wife of Lalit and mother of Two boys…. She is the proud mother of Two most eligible Bachelor in Punjab. Preet and Prem..

Preet is the famous hunk of his collage and he is doin business last year… He is a cool guy and every girl's dreams. Beside being a business student he is an artist.. he luves to paint and play fluet…. He respects his culture but also like to walk with today's society rules.

Gaya3: yeh lijiye aapki Lassi….Preet Preet uth beta. Its time for collage….

we see a guy try to cover his head wid the pillow as he hears Gaya3…uhhhh not again…

Gaya3: Preet …… utho beta else u will be late.

Finally some1 is getting up spreading his arms and yawned. He takes of the white blanket from his Face… and we see an annoyed Preet.

Preet: ufffo . yeh mom bhi na. coming mom…

Lalit: yeh nalayk abhi tak so raha hai?

Gay3: actually he slept late lst nite. He was finishin the painting he made for Prem's B-day. But don't tell prem . it's a surprise. So SHHHHHHHH…..

Gaya3 indicated that with finger on her lip smiling at Lalit.

Lalit: so for this he is not nalayk at all…. BTW Prem kahan hai??

Gaya3: aur kahan hoga? He is doin his morning prayers. As usuall.

Sighed Gaya3: pata nahin mere prem ka kya hoga?

We see some1 praying

ram lakhan sita sahita hrdaye basahu sur bhoopa

the man got up and its our Prem(sorry I m bad at doin entries lol)

Prem: hey Sankatmochan( another name of human g) mujhe hamesha apna brahamchaarya pura karne ki shakti sen aur just keep evry kind of women away from me…. So I can fulfill my brahamcharaya.

Well dats all for he first part.. do reply criticize anything but reply.

Thanks

Luv

Tina

Originally posted by: luv4bb

itz really lovely ff.i love to read it.
update soon.if u dont mind then add me to the pm list plzzzz.
Thanks.
lots of luv

Originally posted by: blackdaughter

will comment later!!! =) *hug*