BARHAMCHAARI New FF UPDT pt2 pg 2 april 27th - Page 2

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Posted: 16 years ago
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updated a bit of it!!!!! =)
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Posted: 16 years ago
#12
hey
interesting concept
awesum
oh so balraj is in canada and lalit in india nice
wow prem is reallly different
loved it
add me to pm list please

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey guyz thanx for ur comments here is the next part. hope u will like it.
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"
Prem jaldi kar beta tu office k liye late ho jayega beta." Yelled gaya3 frm lungs.

Prem popped his eyes open wen he heard the word OFFICE….

"what office oh no. not again" a worried prem thought. "ummmmm, aaya maa. An is musibat se kaise nahar niklun agar office chala gaya toh phir se wohi sab. No no no." prem shut his eyes and try to shake everything from his head….

"ufff, this boy I tell u gaya3, he is perfect and all but wen it comes to getting married he drives me crazy. Kya hoga bhagwan jane?" lalit nodded his head in diapoointment.

" jo hoga acha hoga. Abhi nahi toh kabhi toh manega woh. Hum nahin toh who manaygi jo uske layi bain hai." Smiled gay3.

" I wish that person comes soon gaya3."said lalit with a lil hopw in his eyes."yeh lo naam liya or janab haazir."

" gud morning bauji, gud morning maa." Wished prem quietly.

" morning son." Replied lalit and gay3 togther.

" maa wohh main aaj ofiice nahin jaunga."prem said.

" kyun kya hua?" asked lalit with a lil shock

"teri tabiyat toh theek hai na beta?" gay3 try to feel his forhead.

" maa I m perfectly alrite bas yun hi." Prem assured his mother.

" mujhe pata hai k bhaiyaa kyun nai jaan chahate."preet appered from no where. "kyun bhaiyaa"

"shut up Preet" said prem hesitantly." Maa ap iski baat mat suniye, he is just lying"

" arre usse bolne toh de, tu bata preet kyun nhai jaa raha prem?" asked lalit

" umm actually hamare prem bahiya itne hot hain k every single girl from our office tend to u noe come close to our lil barahamchaari." Grinned preet.

" ahhhhhhhhh now we get why prem used to make excuses to leave early form the house." Nodded lalit.

" shukar hai is chand k dimaag mein koi baat toh ayi na." preet mumbeled. Prem glared at him.

" kya kaha tune?" glared lalit @ preetm.

" umm kuch nahi bauji. Main toh aise hi…." Preet tried to finish his sentence.

" shut up Preet, and prem beta u should got ot the office. Well we cant really blame the girls who are I luv wid ur looks afterall u r a handsome young man dat every girl can dream of." Gaya3 explained.

" maa mujhe nahi banna kissi ka dream boy.. jab bhi office jaata hun. Ladkiyaan u noe how they are…. Mere liye toh unko dekhna bhi paap hai aur who hain ki har wakt dekhti rehti hai aur even mere haath ko bhi touch kiya kayi baar. But it's a gud thing that I never get my feelings carried way thanks to hanuman g. he always gave the strength that help me to keep my barahchaariya up. Jai hanuman" sying this prem closed his eyes and prayed again foldin his hands.

" not again bhaai. Arre apki toh umar hai ke u go out wid girls and have fun… u noe it's a great feeling wen a girls cheks u out and say that u r cute and u now jaise chipak k baith ti hai bike pe. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh" dreamed preet.

" my god kitna besharm ho gaya hai yeh ladka, ma bauji k saamne hi yeh sab. Dekha yeh sab in ladkiyon ki wajah se ho raha hai. Preetu mere bhaai dekh tu inka peecha chod aur hanuman g ki sewa mein lag ja." Prem tried to make him understand.

" eh eh eh ek minute bhai, agar aap ko brahmchaari ka roop pasand hai to its gud but don't drag me into this stuff. I m enjoyin my life like this." Said preet.

" ok enough of u two guyz. Preem u go get ready and leave for the office and Mr. luver boy preet u go to collage." Ordered Lalit.

"yes sir." Said preet while saluting and looked at prem who tried to protest but stoped wen lalit and gay3 glared at him.

" tum log tayar ho jao main breakfast lagaati hun. Aur aap . I think its time wen u go to ur farm." Gay3 said lookin @ lalit.

" uff inki baton ne toh mujhe late karwa diya." Lalit got up and walked toward the door…

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At the office:

"Mr. Varma zara wohh blue ribbon k shipment ki file bhijwaiye jaldi." Prem discontteced the phone after demanding.

Then after 5 min someone knocked on the door. Prem was busy lookin at the other file wen he called the person out.

" thanks, layiye mujhe dijiye." Prem tried to pull the file frm the person but the person didn't let it go.

Prem looked up and left the file quickly wen he saw miss leena. Leena is accountant at prem's office but bcz of being a brahamchaari he would never pay attention. On the other hand miss leena was crazy over him and would nevr leav a chance for being alone and touching him by "accident" . leena would do anything to attract hi attention. Like wearing short cloths… try to bump into him or passing him winks.

Prem: umm uhhh, where is Mr. Varma? I asked him to bring the files not you.

" who kya hai na sir, actually he was busy and I was getting bored and lonely so I thought I would help u out." Said leena looking at him all dreamy.

Prem was getting uncomfortable with her gaze. But he gather his courage to speak.

" umm,,, have u read our dressing code for he office. Umm u noe it is acceptable to wear those kind of cloths dat u r wearing." Told prem calmly but hesitantly.

" yeah even I was thinking that. Kuch zayada hi pehn liya na mene. Kal se change kardoongi." Said leena grinning at prem and moved closer to him.

" what nonsense is this? stay at ur place." Said prem moving back.

" oho common my chipmunk I have been trying to get to noe u better from almost 2 years. Aur ek aap ho k mujhe dekhte hi nahi." Said leen while try to move the hair from his forheard with his fingers.

" ram ram ram ram ram ram ram ram ram." Mumbeled prem while trying to move his head back.

" common mr. prem u noe u want me… I noe I m pretty and I dress this way just for you." Said leena leaning over him.

"Mr. Varmaaaa. Mr. varmaaaaa, help please bachaoooooooooooo. Please get away." Prem tried to move away from her while yelled as hard as he could.

" leena , leena get away form him… wat r u doing" MR. Varma came in running and yelling at leena after he heard prem's screams.

" oh common Mr. Varma I was just kidding." Said leena getting away from prem who was shoved in the wall.

"ok yeah well here is another one for u to joke at YOU ARE FIRED!!!!!!!!!!!!!" yeld prem at leena after getting him straightened up.

" Wat u cant fire me like dat." Said a shocked leena.

"oh yeah watch me , I just did and I will say it again just to be more clear, YOU ARE FIRED MISS LEENA!!!!!!!!!!" yelled annoyed prem.

Leena left the office furiously. Mr. Vamra tried to help prem to straighten the mess.

" Mr. Varma how cn u hire something like her? And wen I told u to bring the file why did u send her even though noeing about me." Said a furious prem.

" I m sorry sir, I dint noe how she heard about the file and wen she came to u? I apologise." Mr. Varma pleaded.

" yeah yeah its fine but make sure it does not happenagin. Keep away every single girl frm me until I m here." Ordered prem.

" yes sir" nodded Mr. Varma.

Prem closed his eye and thanked hanuman g for saving him form the kanaya…. Ufff girls I tell u.

Dats all for now. Hope u guyz will like it.

Luv

Tina

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey
awesum super update
ha ha yay prem fired her yipeeee
loved it
thankz for pm
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Posted: 16 years ago
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soo cute update.plzzz update next part asap.
lots of luv
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey i just luv ur ff its so funny and different dan da rest i hope he finds his solemate soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: zaibun

hey i just luv ur ff its so funny and different dan da rest i hope he finds his solemate soon

thanks hun will update soon😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: blackdaughter

will comment later!!! =) *hug*

Baal Bramamchaari Prem......................... i LOVE it!!!!!!!!!!!! This is amazing!!!!!!! I think this is the first time this concept is being used!!!!!!!!! Awesome!!!!!!!!! šŸ‘
Oh ho, Preet is my hero after today's episode!!!!!!! I can't wait to see where you are going with this!!!
Will add more detial later!!!!! =)

hey hun hugs hugs hugs... ok stop being so hyper tina...šŸ˜†šŸ˜† well yeah it just hit my head... i was imagining heer being romantic and prem is our cute baal brahamchaari.. omg 😳 its goign to be gr8.... i guess. well thanks alot hun..
luv
tina😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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This so cool. Please keep writing. Its very interesting.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: T.hana

This so cool. Please keep writing. Its very interesting.

thanks hun😳

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