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jyothi

@jyothi25

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: kis desh Rocks!

wat kind of horrible track do they have in mind.. it's really scarying me now...plese if u could give out some hint.. please please... I am not a good writer my self but i do agree with some members and the track that they have come up with... please don't scare us.... it's heart-breaking..

true i am getting scared.😭... tell us what track it is.so that we will become strong...............😭

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Nandini

@nandini27

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+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: kis desh Rocks!

wat kind of horrible track do they have in mind.. it's really scarying me now...plese if u could give out some hint.. please please... I am not a good writer my self but i do agree with some members and the track that they have come up with... please don't scare us.... it's heart-breaking..

we're very sorry dear....but we cant tell wat the story is out....and even if we told...its very horrible....we were shcoked for a long time...but then....plss dont loose hope and get scared wid wat we told...like we said....dey r ready to take suggestions from us.....so plss cum up wid sth gud.....no probs if gud writer or bad writer...but we need onli a story for long run.....just write it in ur words....we'l make it clear for them!!!!!

Luv Nans

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swathzie

@swathzie

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#73

^^nans di i can sort of guess wat dey r planning dats y i don want to hear abything abt their future track and spoil my mood ...will PM u di abt wat i think dey r gonna show...

Edited by nitzi - 16 years ago

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Nandini

@nandini27

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: nitzi
^^nans di i can sort of guess wat dey r planning dats y i don want to hear abything abt their future track and spoil my mood

spoil..😳...we were shocked for so long.....we had onli 😲 in our convos....but its better we dont divulge into it....

PLEASE members......we realli cant tell that to anyone......PLEASE understand......

and instead think of the story ahead....we hav VERY LESS TIME!!!!!!

Luv Nans

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swathzie

@swathzie

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#75

^^ di iksha,and hopeo8 's track is gud...dey can extend it for a long time...i hope they giv in to our pleas

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224529

Suspended

Posted: 16 years ago

#76

Guys...we were told the future track with a promise..we can't break it..you guys understand na..acha, it doesn't matter what a good writer or bad writer you are...just write what YOU would like to see in the serial in future😊 Ok?

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vandana

@VandyP

Trailblazer

+ 6

Posted: 16 years ago

#77

OMG.....is the future track that scary triv??????

well let me try...i don't know whether you people like it or not....you asked for suggestions....here is mine.......

starting from yesterday's epi....prem calls the doctor and the doctor confirms that veera did go for an abortion......everybody is shocked....including gmom......preet tries to shout at veera for doing such a thing but everybody calms him down.....

veera then tries to justufy her act that she did it coz she is not happy with nihaal......she doesn't love him.....and nihaal is just a middle class person who doesn't even earn enough to fulfill all her high class demands which she is used to.....gmom here supports veera...saying that she is right....( as it is her mind has been totally contaminated by mara).....gmom tells everybody that if veera is not happy with nihaal then its better that they both separate.....premeer are shocked......heer tries to persuade gmom from doing such a thing....coz by doing that both nihaal's and veera's life will be spoilt...but gmom shuts up heer saying that she is her mom...and she knows wat suits her daughter best.......prem tells heer to keep quiet and tells everybody to agree to watever gmom has said.......

everybody leaves along with nihaal..premeer stay back...heer is very upset coz her brother's house is breaking......prem comforts heer there apologising for his behaviour and assures nihaal that he should not worry abt his sisters after all this....for he is there to see that no harm comes to their relationship after this incident...and premeer leave......

at home gmom telle everybody to behave normally with veera and treat her as the same...like the little sis she was before her mrg......

veera is elated along with maya as their plans are successful.......

nihaal comes in after few days to meet his sisters and tells everybody that he is leaving the city forever.,......

life continues smoothly for the juneja's.....prem setting up the business successfully with the help of preet......meher being allowed to fulfill her dream of being a lawyer......premeer relation becoming stronger as days pass by.....coz mara are there to create day to day probs in the family....gmom at times being normal....at times siding.....not only with mara but with heer and meher also......whoever is right......

veera in the meantime realises that although she is being treated like before...she can't be the same with the family...she has a feeling of being an outsider....she also realises that kuldi gets more respect and realises that you get love only wen you give love......and if ur hubby is not there with you.....you'll never get the same respect be it from your own family( in other words i want her to realise the importance of the love of nihaal and want her to go back to hihaal coz of her growing love and respect for him...not just becoz he will become a successful businessman in future)....

we can see the meet relationship grow too!! with the help of premeer( maybe prem or heer come to know that their relationship has not developed like that of a man and wife and premeer making the realise their love)....

then we can have veera missing nihaal and craving to go back to him( who in the meantime is a successful businessman with the help of prem)...and then gmom raising the curtain of the fact that she and prem had decided to teach veera a lesson like this ...heer all awed with this side of her wonderful hubby.......

heer can be pregnant too.....and we can also have rr back in the lives of premeer....business problems......but premeer united against him......then the truth being revealed abt sanjans....sanjana rising from that bed...and making rr realise his mistake.....good premeer and sanju relation..as sanju is prem's best friend......maybe if maya 's intentions are revealed......harman might just divorce her and get married to sanju...

bas....i'm running out of ideas now...the last idea was...i guess....bhangaar in my words

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Farru

@-Farru-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#78

Originally posted by: -Triv-
Gals..gals! You all are giving out your expectations and demands..we need storyline! For eg: I sent this:

Prem doesn't go against his mom and neither against the Maan's and his Heer. He remains neutral. He supports Heer silently when his mom is a little cold towards the Maan sisters. Nihaal can apply for divorce and Prem will wonder why Nihaal looks like he has suffered a mortal blow instead of the other way around. After some days, Heer can feel a little dizzy and Prem can take her to the same doctor who was Veera's doctor for her abortion. In between consultation, somehow Heer/Prem will let it slip that Veera Maan is his sisters and the doctor will tell him about her abortion, how her pregnancy was perfect but she aborted the child since she wasn't happy with her life. Prem will be shocked and he and Heer will confront Veera and Maya in front of the family. Veera will turn the tables on him and bring out the stepbrother angle and how he is favouring his wife over her. Gmom will believe Veera and start suspecting Prem but her heart won't believe it..but evidence from ones own eyes will be hard to ignore. Veera and Maya will keep feeding the fire of saga sautela and finally Gmom will ask for butwara..Prem will bow down and will leave the house instead of butwara. Preet will follow him with his wife. They will go to Ambala where Heer and Meher have the house and the land. They will rent out the land to farmers for money and for specific time. They will break the bond that Prem had kept for Heer when he was going to leave and Prem will start his own small company(can be of anything) with Preet. Gmom meanwhile will miss Prem and Preet a lot and lalit will visit them periodically and tell her about them and how she is going to be a Dadi like she had always hoped to. Prem-Heer can somehow face Gayatri mom and she will bless the child....somehow in the latter days Gmom will hear Maya-Veera discussing how their plan was succesful and Gmom will be shattered. Everyone will have a huge confrontation and Prem-Heer will be brought back to Juneja House. After this..you can bring some other twist like Maya's new plan or Rishabh Rampal coming back to hurt Prem-Heer and their unborn child or Ashlesha trying to hurt Juneja house due to Preet and Meher.

We need FUTURE tracks and not suggestions and expectations..give us a story! I know my storyline will need some changes after yesterday's episode...they can handle that..we need a story right now! we have already told them WHAT we want unchanged and stuff like Premeer's oneness! Now it's all on them...after hearing that Ipshita asked for future track suggestions and we posted here asking for it...

But what you guys are writing are not storyline!

I like this prediction but from where when Premeer moves to Villlage...

Seriously Triv ur beginning is Lame...

No THE Prem and HEER....

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ayushi

@Ayushi_78

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 16 years ago

#79

Is the track thaat scary triv???😲

My suggestions and story:

Thanks a sidrah for this.There are many points given by others so i don't hace much to say but then also would like to share my suggestions.
First of all,let premeer be one.Thet should never be separated.
They are eternal lovers and they are made for each other
Its an eternal love story so please don't make it a typical saas-bahu show or any other sensless or nonsense drama.Please its a request.
Please please don't spoil Prem's character as we saw in 21st april's episode.Prem should always support Heer whatever it is.Premeer are one and will always remain one.We don't want Prem disbelieving Heer or any other misunderstandings between them.Remember when veera took poison during her engagement with someone elae so Prem told Heer that did she think he won't believe her coz of his sister.We want this Prem.We want OLD PREM BACK.Premeer are eternal lovers.They both have a strong believe between then so to say VISHWAS.We want premeer to be together forever.Their love has fought death also so HOW CAN THEIR RELATIONSHIP BE DESTROYED BY KITCHEN POLITICS.Now please let then spend happy and romantic moments.This link has ideas of premeer scenes created by us.You are free to use them.Here's the link https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kis-desh-mein-hai-meraa-dil/1007175/romantic-premeer-scenes-create-your-own
On this forum there are many fanfic's from which u can take ideas.We will be rather happy.FF writers are great and write beautifully.
Please progress meet's[meher and preet]relationship also.
Many tracks have bee left incomplete please comlete them so as to finish them.Many characters are also missing like daljeet,kuljeet,ashlesha[she had to get married]and many more.
Vamps like daljeet are liked by us.Veera and maya suck.Please don't show their rubbish scenes.One more thing please show all premeer scenes in one segment meaning all together and not splitted in the whole episode.Like it was done in the most important premeer scene.All maya veera scenes and sensless scenes show be shown in a single segment and not splitted all over the episode.ONE very important thing please SHOW US A PROPER PREMEER WEDDIND,HONEYMOON which wasn't done properly.We are watching the show only for the lead couples so please give them importance rather than giving importance to vamps.Another important thing please please please NO TEARS.When premeer are happy they cry and always when they are sad they also cry.We have seen vamps also cry like daljeet.Please a serious request of no tears.Please no saga-sautela track.Veera and maya should get punished for whatever they have done.Their truth should come out and this TRACK SHOULDN'T BE STRETCHED.The show has something which has attracted us towards this show and that is premeer's unique love.Premeer used to talk through their eyes.We love those eye conversations.When vikas gupta was the head the show was going brilliant you must have realised this but now its going down the drain but i m sure aftyer reading all our comments u will surely improve the show and come on track and back with a bang on no.1.And please for now no leaps and no premeer kids.Let them spend time together first.Hrashad and Aditi are brilliant and super talented actors.They make a very sweet and cute couple.They r made 4 each other.Their chemistry id out of the world,awesome.Every scene done by them specially premeer love scenes are so passionate.It feels that we aren't watching them on tv feels that its all happenning in front of us.You have found gems so please use then nicely.They portray their characters very well on screen.
Please give us one scene at a time and not fragments scattered all over the show.... Eg: April 20th 2009 Epi.... Prem & Heer's first night was interupted by other tragic scenes.... You could have shown this in whole 1st part and Premeer's moment in whole 2nd part..... This would keep us glued to the show and not touch the remote to change the channel.
Its irritating and we don't like this.So please......
Please retain the essence and soul of characters which was there in the beginning.Please gine good dialogues to the Prem last year he had so passionate and strong dialoguesIf possible then please give rest to actors.They also need rest.They work so hard and so much only for our entertainment so please try to give them rest as their physiqye is also really important as it affects the show also.
Please show certain flashbacks that are really needed as to complete the left over tracks and to answer our questions.A suggestion for better interaction of viewers and the creatives-please if you could start something like during the show asking certain questions during the show related to the show so as to you can come to know our views or coming to facebook or any other site to interact with the viewers,knowing their views will really help it according to me as rajan shahi has also launched a blog and during balika vadhu they are questions related to the show and ask viewers to sms-only to interact with viewers.
And ya please show different things as its a very unique show and we don't want old tracks which have been shown in kyunki and all.We want something new.You can come here regularly or atleast through any source if we viewers and u creatives can interact it will be great.Please don't spoil gayatri mom's character as we love her character but now a days.........we want to love and not develop hatred for her.Please please don't change the title montage let it remain the same.We don't want to wach something which sucks.Where are the doves and jugni missing.They portray premeer's love.They are significance of premeer's love.We are missing the doves and jugni's predictions.Please don't forget them and show them.Thank a lot for giving us this show,premeer and their eternal love.
Hope you will understand our feelings and will agree and see our suggestions and work over it.Thanks a lot for giving us this chance to voice our views.😃

Again thanks a lot sidrahh for this golden chance to voice our views.

Story:

Doc tells prem that veera did the abortion he will tell everyone,everyone is shocked and angry over veera.........But then nihaal saves her and she realises nihaals love for her.She goes back happily with nihaal.Gayatri apologises to Heer and then premeer r in their room.Prem apologises heer.They have a hug.[premeer moment].In the future...maya's truth comes out then she will be kicked out of d house.Then comes rr and that sanjana's track.RR comes to know the truth so he apologises.Ash marries harman.Then the story continues....

Just a try.

Its my longest post ever.😆

Edited by ayushikdmhmd - 16 years ago

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Nitty

@Nitty2910

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#80

Ok I totally and completely understand that u all are bound by the promise given by them abt revealing the future track they have in mind.. but my request to u guys is if you could just tell me how long will that horrifying track last for and will the track end happily like everything getting back to normal I mean prem and heer together?????... please atleast reply to this.. so that i can prepare myself for the upcoming episodes that we have to come accross....

I would be really grateful to you.. if you could help me out on this

Thanks alot...

Edited by kis desh Rocks! - 16 years ago