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farahs_6

@farahs_6

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Posted: 16 years ago

#91

No no we dont want him to leave heer whatsoever. They can just show a flashback that both Premeer know of Maya Veera intentions and both are tryi ng to solve it i their own way. And we the audience should be shown this a soon as possible. Later they can stretch the track and give whatever twists they want to give. Later they can bring Gaurav Sharma track.

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swathzie

@swathzie

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Posted: 16 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: Soaps1
niti even if they show it afterwards we would be really lucky ...they are such duh!!! They really don't understand what Premeer are all about sighs

yup i know even if dey show it later we will be lucky but by d time dey wud have cried buckets😭..y can't we hav happy moments 4 once atleast during IPL

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Soaps1

@Soaps1

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+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#93

This is my suggession i don't even feel like giving suggessions to them who care the least abt what their viewers want but my hands are tied with the love of Premeer!!!

First of all i don't know how much they have shot in advance and what they have shot.....if they show today that prem sides with veera and leaves or insults heer ...they need to later show that Prem only pretended to do it because gyatri was not ready to believe otherwise!!! Redeeming prem is must!!!

Now if they show that the doc doesn't speak the truth and Prem left heer for the time being this is how they can take the story forward!

Prem left heer only for time being till he could find proof and prove gyatri and veera wrong (its better if he secretly informs heer abt it, to keep premeer are one intact) Prem should over hear maya and veera talk abt the success of their plan.................and later tell gyatri about it.................gyatri ofcourse won't believe him and Maya and veera would fill her ears further that Prem is doing it because of heer and he is sautela and all! Gyatri would bash Prem and would ask him to leave as he has seized to be her son!!! Prem leaves all heart broken and he and heer start life from scratch, not totally happy but taking life as it unfolds! Their struggle should be shown on how they start their life together from scratch with the pain of what their family has done to them! In the mean time RR can be brought back to create further problems in their lives, while they are already struggling with life's problems! Also sanjana angle can come up to further increase prem's emotional problems!

On the other hand in j-zoo after having rid the zoo of heer, maya and veera are now after Meher!!! Preet and Meher's relationship is progressing but gyatri does not treat meher well! Preet who is already upset at what gyatri did to prem decides to leave as well! In the meantime Kuldi and Kiran move out as well! Once Preet leaves Maya starts to show her true colors to gyatri and veera........infront of Harman she is all nice to her but when he is not around she mistreats her like anything! Making Gyatri realise what she has done! Gyatri and Lalit have become financially dependent on Harman who ofcourse would operate through her wife being the bahu of the family!

Gyatri would realise her mistake but it would be too late.................Harman not being a good businessman...would loose the family business again!

Prem being a family man is although away but keeps an eye on his family............he comes to know of gyatri and Lalit's condition and feel sad and is deeply hurt! He starts sending them money through Preet! He asks Preet to go back to j-zoo since he himself can't because gyatri kicked him out and he can't disobey his mother! Preet refuses! Prem in the meantime has become a successful businessman again!

Maya finally kicks Lalit, gyatri and veera out of the house as she has total control over Harman! She convinces Harman that they mistreat her and all! Prem comes to know of it and asks Preet to bring them to his (Preet's ) home..................once they move in Preet tells them what Prem has been doing for them secretly! Gyatri regrets and tells Preet that she wants to meet Prem! Preet talks to prem and prem being prem can't refuse his mom! So the family finally comes together again! The ad of auction of juneja house is published as harman has become totally broke! Prem buys the house and gifts it back to Lalit and Gyatri!

Heer can become pregnant in the meantime as well and they can have a baby! And nehal becoming a successful businessman

If the handle this well enough they can go on for atleast 6 to 9 months with this track!

Note: Also when prem is asked to leave the house you can bring up his life as gaurav too...that he remained away from family even though his memory was intact and he knew gyatri is sick, he still did not come back and only came back to stop heer RR wedding to further support gyatri that he does not care abt her and is sautela

Humble request to BT creatives!

I have never written a story before but i would prefer to watch this much more than a seperation track! I can't understand why BT creatives don't realise that the period of soaps with leads seperating is over....the period now is all about them living together facing life's hardships hand in hand! Why are they stuck where they were 9 years back is beyond me! I mean if people wanted to see a seperation track why would they protest and struggle so much to force BT to bring back prem? If viewers wanted a seperation track why would they create havoc after prem's death?😕

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Farru

@-Farru-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#94

My Prediction:

Well I am not good in it...

It will started like this...

Prem will call doctor and will ask about the abortion and the doctor will say Yes...Veera had gone thru abortion thing, Then he will tell GMOM and she will slap Prem... and will take Veera to J ZOO. On the other hand Prem will say sorry to Nihaal and will watch Heer thru his eyes which were also Sorry...

Later when Prem and all members including Heer and Meher will return J ZOO...

And GMOM will stop Prem at the door...

And she will Yell on Prem....That he supported Nihal...coz he is Soutela to Veera and Nihaal is heer's brother...

Than Stupid Maya will come and start bashing about Heer..That how clever she is...She had ruined the whole essence of Baisakhi and Fun and Liveliness of this House...She is jealous of Veera's happiness therefore she asked Nihaal to torture her mentally and Physically...

This will make Prem angry and he will shout loudly on Maya and will support Heer like he did on 18th June...He will say that Heer is innocent and I dont want anyone to blame her innocence...

Then GMOM will get angry and will ask Prem to choose one...Either his Wife Or His Mom....

Then Prem will say I cant leave u both coz I love u both (While crying)...If heer is my heart then u r my Dhadkan...If u r my eyes then these eyes love Heer...If u had taught me Love then my Love is Heer and so on...But this will not satisfy GMOM and she will ask Prem to leave the House....

But Lalit will stop him and will slap GMOM....

GMOM will go insane....and then Lalit will announce that tomorrow he is launching a new Hotel and wants Prem to get there early....

This will make Maya shocked and she will start saying"Why Prem!!" Why not Preet and Harman....

Greedy Harman will also gets angry and will think of his benefit and will Yell at Lallu...

GMOM will also say that Lallit loves Didi's children more...

And after seeing this much hatred in GMOM, Prem will decide to leave the house and will name all of his property to Veera....In this way they will leave the J Mansion...

If u guys liked this I will continue....

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farahs_6

@farahs_6

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#95

Nadia i just want one change in ur story. Today or tomorrow at least they show the audience that its BOTH Prem and Her are faking and showing it aflashback as soon as possible and NOT afterwards. I just want this point to be stressed in your story. Rest i dont care abt anythiong.

Farah

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swathzie

@swathzie

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#96

^^soapiee awesome story i wud prefer watching it over separation track..y do dey do dis to prem ..his character sidelined..remember during prem cuming cak frm death track too dey never showed us wat prem went through

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Farru

@-Farru-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#97

Then Preet will also decide to leave the J ZOO but Prem will stop him and will ask him to look after Maa and Bauji...Preet will take Promise from Prem....

When Preet and Meher will be entering the house...GMOM will stop Meher and will ask her to leave with her sister...Preet will try to defence but Meher would remind him of his Promise...and Poor Meher will also leave with Premeer...

Prem, Heer and Meher will go to their Village and will start a new life...Meher and Heer will think of their parents and will cry...But Prem will come and said jo hogaya usko peeche chor kar hum agay ki zindagi start karte hain....

Prem will start farming and then they will show some romantic scenes of Premeer...

Like Heer cleaning Sand from Prems face with her dupatta...

Heer fetching Water from Well and Prem comes from her back and hug her...

Heer taking lunch for Prem in farms....

Premeer doing perfect Phingoli in Farms at Night....😆

Heer massaging Prem's Head after he had return from fields...

Prem carry heer in her arms and take her on Roof and start PHEYOOOH all the night...

Shirtless Prem bumps into Heer....

Prem kisses Heer's hand coz she had cooked so nice Meal....

Heer imagines Prem teasing her with his lips and Finger while cooking...

Prem brings a saree from his first kind of salary and ask heer to wear it and they both PHEYOOOH all the entire night....

Prem imgining Heer in farms all day....😳

And watching Premeer Love Meher also realizes how much she loves Preet...

Edited by Farru... - 16 years ago

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hope08

@hope08

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#98

@nadia: this is an excellent track. I really hope they do something on these lines.

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Uzma005

@Uzma005

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#99

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Originally posted by: Farru...
Then Preet will also decide to leave the J ZOO but Prem will stop him and will ask him to look after Maa and Bauji...Preet will take Promise from Prem....

When Preet and Meher will be entering the house...GMOM will stop Meher and will ask her to leave with her sister...Preet will try to defence but Meher would remind him of his Promise...and Poor Meher will also leave with Premeer...

Prem, Heer and Meher will go to their Village and will start a new life...Meher and Heer will think of their parents and will cry...But Prem will come and said jo hogaya usko peeche chor kar hum agay ki zindagi start karte hain....

Prem will start farming and then they will show some romantic scenes of Premeer...

Like Heer cleaning Sand from Prems face with her dupatta...

Heer fetching Water from Well and Prem comes from her back and hug her...

Heer taking lunch for Prem in farms....

Premeer doing perfect Phingoli in Farms at Night....😆

Heer massaging Prem's Head after he had return from fields...

Prem carry heer in her arms and take her on Roof and start PHEYOOOH all the night...

Shirtless Prem bumps into Heer....

Prem kisses Heer's hand coz she had cooked so nice Meal....

Heer imagines Prem teasing her with his lips and Finger while cooking...

Prem brings a saree from his first kind of salary and ask heer to wear it and they both PHEYOOOH all the entire night....

Prem imgining Heer in farms all day....😳

And watching Premeer Love Meher also realizes how much she loves Preet...

😍i wish they show us that

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Farru

@-Farru-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#100

On the other hand Preet will also be missing Meher and will decide to go and Meet her one day....

Therefore he will name all Power of Atterny to Harman....

Harman will take all J Zoo....and Then Maya will poison his ears against his sisters...That Preet had gone to live with Prem, and Prem will never return...Now he must Throw out Veera and Kuldi out if the house....

Harman will easily ask the Help of Maya and will name all Veera's properties on his name....

And one day Veera will realize the SAAZISH of Harman and Maya and will start fighting with Maya....

Then Harman will show up and will slap Veera...Then GMOM and Lallu will also come there and will ask whats going on...Then Maya will tell that Veera is plotting a game against Harman...And no one will blv Veera...And so Harman will kick Veera out of the house then GMOM will yell at Harman and Maya but Harman will say "Main Prem bhaiyya nahin hu jo sab kuch Veera k liye chor k chala jao, Agar aapko Veera ki itni fikar hai to chali jaayein us k saath"

When Gmom and Lallu were packing their suitcase, GMOM will go to Veera's room and will overhear all Maya and Veera's chat that how they aborted Veera's baby and everything... GMom will realize her mistake and will ask Lallu to take her to Prem...

GMOM and Lallu will also move to Village and Prem will forgive them...

Then Prem will start his hardwork more to achieve and earne more money....

Prem will go more Passionate about Heer as he saw Heer taking care of his Zoo...

Edited by Farru... - 16 years ago