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Posted: 16 years ago
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Gals..gals! You all are giving out your expectations and demands..we need storyline! For eg: I sent this:

Prem doesn't go against his mom and neither against the Maan's and his Heer. He remains neutral. He supports Heer silently when his mom is a little cold towards the Maan sisters. Nihaal can apply for divorce and Prem will wonder why Nihaal looks like he has suffered a mortal blow instead of the other way around. After some days, Heer can feel a little dizzy and Prem can take her to the same doctor who was Veera's doctor for her abortion. In between consultation, somehow Heer/Prem will let it slip that Veera Maan is his sisters and the doctor will tell him about her abortion, how her pregnancy was perfect but she aborted the child since she wasn't happy with her life. Prem will be shocked and he and Heer will confront Veera and Maya in front of the family. Veera will turn the tables on him and bring out the stepbrother angle and how he is favouring his wife over her. Gmom will believe Veera and start suspecting Prem but her heart won't believe it..but evidence from ones own eyes will be hard to ignore. Veera and Maya will keep feeding the fire of saga sautela and finally Gmom will ask for butwara..Prem will bow down and will leave the house instead of butwara. Preet will follow him with his wife. They will go to Ambala where Heer and Meher have the house and the land. They will rent out the land to farmers for money and for specific time. They will break the bond that Prem had kept for Heer when he was going to leave and Prem will start his own small company(can be of anything) with Preet. Gmom meanwhile will miss Prem and Preet a lot and lalit will visit them periodically and tell her about them and how she is going to be a Dadi like she had always hoped to. Prem-Heer can somehow face Gayatri mom and she will bless the child....somehow in the latter days Gmom will hear Maya-Veera discussing how their plan was succesful and Gmom will be shattered. Everyone will have a huge confrontation and Prem-Heer will be brought back to Juneja House. After this..you can bring some other twist like Maya's new plan or Rishabh Rampal coming back to hurt Prem-Heer and their unborn child or Ashlesha trying to hurt Juneja house due to Preet and Meher.

We need FUTURE tracks and not suggestions and expectations..give us a story! I know my storyline will need some changes after yesterday's episode...they can handle that..we need a story right now! we have already told them WHAT we want unchanged and stuff like Premeer's oneness! Now it's all on them...after hearing that Ipshita asked for future track suggestions and we posted here asking for it...

But what you guys are writing are not storyline!
Edited by -Triv- - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: -Triv-

We need FUTURE tracks and not suggestions and expectations..give us a story! I know my storyline will need some changes after yesterday's episode...they can handle that..we need a story right now! we have already told them WHAT we want unchanged and stuff like Premeer's oneness! Now it's all on them...after hearing that Ipshita asked for future track suggestions and we posted here asking for it...

But what you guys are writing are not storyline!

Sorry, I could only give my ideas in short, but I think I wrote the gist of some future tracks they could follow. Btw, I also updated my suggestion after yesterday's episode, to include Prem and Heer both knowing about Maya and Veera's plan.
Edited by iqbalrox14 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Ya Bee, we did get some gist of a stories..some members even PM'ed us wanting it to be a secret but we want a proper track..not just a gist of the track.

We all have better ideas then them...plz think on it na?
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Posted: 16 years ago
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@ Triv: I don't know if you read my suggestion. but please check pg 3. I have tried to give a track - do let me know if this a viable track or not. If it is then i'll try and come up with also another angle keeping the characters intact.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Let me check Hope...we are asking it on the forum coz of desperation, because the track they have in mind is horrible...I was so scared when I came to know...I'd rather see Premeer die then the track they have in mind..utterly scary and disgusting.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Triv-

Ya Bee, we did get some gist of a stories..some members even PM'ed us wanting it to be a secret but we want a proper track..not just a gist of the track.

We all have better ideas then them...plz think on it na?

I expanded mine now (it's on page 2), and I think it's enough to last a full fledged track... Is it enough? but now, I have to go off and study, I can't believe I'm doing this... 😆
I just wanted to know, though. From your words and Sid's, it seems that the creatives had soemthing really gruesome planned. Are we still going to be subject to that track, or will the creatives actually listen to our ideas?
Edited by iqbalrox14 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Triv-

Let me check Hope...we are asking it on the forum coz of desperation, because the track they have in mind is horrible...I was so scared when I came to know...I'd rather see Premeer die then the track they have in mind..utterly scary and disgusting.

so dat means heading for premeer separation🤢...well i will post my part of story too
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Triv-

Let me check Hope...we are asking it on the forum coz of desperation, because the track they have in mind is horrible...I was so scared when I came to know...I'd rather see Premeer die then the track they have in mind..utterly scary and disgusting.

Trivy if they have a horrible track in mind that means they are already following it right? And in today's epi Prem's character would be further destroyed........so will our suggessions and story lines be of any use? Because i am sure they shoot atleast for 3-4 epis i advance
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Posted: 16 years ago
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dere are so many ff writers here.....we need a story for the LONG RUN......not just to solve the current track...or wid a chindi track ahead....need a solid story tht can move ahead for a long time!!!!



and plss make it fast members!!!!!!

Luv Nans
Edited by nandini90 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Guys..they are shooting cut to cut..meaning today's episode will reach SP ka office not before 7 pm..so don't worry..they can change the track.

And I can't tell you guys...the track they had it mind...it's horrifying..even more then a mere separation 😕😔

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