||Beete Lamhe|| Premeer Song Fic - Page 2

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: shabo24

KIMZ! YOUR SIGG BOX! 🤣



I know, its sexy, you got a prob? 😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awww..it was so sad and intense.. I was feeling like hugging both Prem and Heer..specially Heer...poor girl has suffered a lot.. and gr8 song selection..I just love Beetein Lamhe😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: munam_13

awww..it was so sad and intense.. I was feeling like hugging both Prem and Heer..specially Heer...poor girl has suffered a lot.. and gr8 song selection..I just love Beetein Lamhe😃



Awww thanks Priyo! 😊 glad you liked the song! 😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Wow, Meera, I'm breathless, and speechless right now. That was brilliant, it was really good.

Each and every of Prem's emotions were expressed so well, him wanting more than anything to be with Heer. Him being angry with God and Fate, not for himself, but for the injustice to Heer that will be done. So Prem-like. And then with him finding out the truth, and finally, finally allowing himself to return fully to Heer. Absolutely wonderful!

Love,
Radz

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anhdara13

Wow, Meera, I'm breathless, and speechless right now. That was brilliant, it was really good.

Each and every of Prem's emotions were expressed so well, him wanting more than anything to be with Heer. Him being angry with God and Fate, not for himself, but for the injustice to Heer that will be done. So Prem-like. And then with him finding out the truth, and finally, finally allowing himself to return fully to Heer. Absolutely wonderful!

Love,
Radz



Wow Radz, those comments mean the world to me, that you could depict the moments in there! 😳 I'm really glad you liked it!😳😳😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hahaha..weak brother like harman and 'difficult' sister like Veera..so true!!!🤣 but getting to the serious parts..so sad!! reminded me of all the precious premeer moments like the lighter one..*sigh *goes into lala land...erhmm and not so great one..heer faking memory loss...the way u described heer and her emotions was just..pricless..so much despair and like u said..angst lol..and now i agree..too much agnst buildup there meeru!! haha..anyways, i think the him getting to know the truth was a bit rushed but loved how he said that he'd deal with the doctor later ....
and the ending...well wat can i say..awesome!👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: urworstnitemare

hahaha..weak brother like harman and 'difficult' sister like Veera..so true!!!🤣 but getting to the serious parts..so sad!! reminded me of all the precious premeer moments like the lighter one..*sigh *goes into lala land...erhmm and not so great one..heer faking memory loss...the way u described heer and her emotions was just..pricless..so much despair and like u said..angst lol..and now i agree..too much agnst buildup there meeru!! haha..anyways, i think the him getting to know the truth was a bit rushed but loved how he said that he'd deal with the doctor later ....

and the ending...well wat can i say..awesome!👏



Awwww yeah I totally was just ugh with those two so I had to write it, as for the moments, I'm glad you liked them!😳😳😳 Yes Angst... is my main way on one shots!😆😆😆 awww thank you so much, I'm glad you told me what didn't work!😳😳 I'm glad though that you liked the end!😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi Meera,
Just read this oneshot......
And i think this time u do deserve some jhoote....lolzzz im just jokeing..... i totallyyy luvedddddddd IT!!....
But why did u have to make Prem feel so bad?... he's so perfect he can't ever do anything bad.. :( ...
-Hehehe me just jokeing...... dnt mind!!...
Luv Pari
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Palkhi_08

Hi Meera,

Just read this oneshot......
And i think this time u do deserve some jhoote....lolzzz im just jokeing..... i totallyyy luvedddddddd IT!!....
But why did u have to make Prem feel so bad?... he's so perfect he can't ever do anything bad.. :( ...
-Hehehe me just jokeing...... dnt mind!!...
Luv Pari



I'm sorry Pari! 😳😳 But It just seemed to work, this song just suits Prems pain so well! 😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: indiandoll89



I'm sorry Pari! 😳😳 But It just seemed to work, this song just suits Prems pain so well! 😳

Its ok i didn't mind at all...hehehe...... it does toally express his pain tho.....
-Luv u Loadssssss Pari

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