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sugii

@sugii

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#31

wow!just read the two parts u r amazing....both parts r suprb👍🏼 and exellent👏👏👏.loved and enjoyed it vry much.its vry intersting 😛and vry vry funny😆😆😆.plzz continue asap...

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vrinda16

@vrinda16

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#32

Hai Priyo,

A totally different Heer is in view in this ff.Oh i loved the Meher-Balraaj part too. A Very sweet part.Now waiting for our Prem to meet his andekhi anjaani ladki,Heer. I s it going to be a meeting at the station - u know catching the train(DDLJ u see?)? Wait a minute, if it's so then is it Heer who is gonna stretch her arms out to pull Prem into the Train?😉 😆Would be fun to see how u recreate the scene. Waiting for it.

Do you have a PM list for this ff.Then add me to it plz.

U haven't updated the other 2 ffs since long right? or have i missed it?

Vrinda

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Priyadarshini Basu

@munam_13

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 16 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: zaibun
hey very gud part but dint rlly get da scene shift

thanks dear... extremely sorry u didnt get the scene shift..it was the introductory part😃

@ maddy - will wait for ur comment.

Originally posted by: sugi77
wow!just read the two parts u r amazing....both parts r suprb👍🏼 and exellent👏👏👏.loved and enjoyed it vry much.its vry intersting 😛and vry vry funny😆😆😆.plzz continue asap...

Hey sugi glad you liked the last 2 parts and found them funny....😃

Originally posted by: vrinda16
Hai Priyo,

A totally different Heer is in view in this ff.Oh i loved the Meher-Balraaj part too. A Very sweet part.Now waiting for our Prem to meet his andekhi anjaani ladki,Heer. I s it going to be a meeting at the station - u know catching the train(DDLJ u see?)? Wait a minute, if it's so then is it Heer who is gonna stretch her arms out to pull Prem into the Train?😉 😆Would be fun to see how u recreate the scene. Waiting for it.

Do you have a PM list for this ff.Then add me to it plz.

U haven't updated the other 2 ffs since long right? or have i missed it?

Vrinda

Hi vrinda... thanks for commenting...glad u loved the Meher Balraaj part and Heer's part.. ya she's very diff in this ff.they'll meet soon dont worry... well I do have some different plans for that histori train scene...let's see what can I do.

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@shabo24

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#34

Great update, with showing the relationship between Heer and her family members, looking forward to see how Heer and Prem's characters will fall in love OR clash? *wink*

--shabz

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Meera

@indiandoll89

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#35

Awesome work Priyo! 😃 Loved it! 😛

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poonam

@P.Kamaljit.Sean

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 16 years ago

#36

hey
super update
soo lovely
loved balraj pov

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Priyadarshini Basu

@munam_13

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 16 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: blackdaughter
tango!!!

Ok, i'm sooo sorry i took so long to reply!!! *holding my ears* aw that's ok dear...😳

Yay, we finally got to see Heer!!! Oh yeah, the roles are definately switched!!!!! 😆 ya they are...

I really liked how you potrayed Meher and Balraaj's relationship!!!! It was basically like she is his daughter and not someone who works at home!!! She is also Heer's best friend!!! That's sho shweet!!! *pinching cheeks..... though not sure who's!!! * 😳😉😆 ya they are adorable ..wait until you see them more...

Haha, Heer doesn't even know what she was chanting!!!! ROFL 🤣!!!!! That would probably something i would do as well!!!! I lived outside India for so long and we only do Pooja and special occasions so....... (i think you get my point)!!!! 😳😆 ya dear... I totally understand...and this is what I wanted to portray

Awwww, she might not be a study keedha but she definatley respects her Bauji a lot!!! *thumbs up* Glad that was incorporated in so well!!! Thanks a lot

Well, i can't wait till the next update!!!!! Please make it soon!!!! will post soon😃

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Priyadarshini Basu

@munam_13

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 16 years ago

#38

Great update, with showing the relationship between Heer and her family members, looking forward to see how Heer and Prem's characters will fall in love OR clash? *wink*

--shabz[/quote]

Hey SHABZ... thanks for liking this part....ok let's see what happens when they'll meet.... ;)

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Priyadarshini Basu

@munam_13

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 16 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: indiandoll89
Awesome work Priyo! 😃 Loved it! 😛

thanks a lot Meera..😃

Originally posted by: pooji12345678
hey
super update
soo lovely
loved balraj pov

thanks a lot Poonam😃

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Priyadarshini Basu

@munam_13

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 16 years ago

#40

Hi!!!!! Friends!!!! I hope you have not forgotten me, well the days being really hectic nowadays, I hardly reply to any posts but today I felt like updating my ffs, maybe I'll update others as well😉, here's part 3 for you

PART-4

Heer's POV

"aaj mein upar… aasman neechen …aj mein aagey…zamaana hai peeche",

YAHOOOOOOOOOO!!

I passed , I passed I passed…. With 35% marks… O Bhagwaan Ji …you are the greatest….I love you…I just don't believe , I passed in Mathematics…and like a cherry on top, I GRADUATED!!!
No more boring lectures and no more jaldi uthna and heading for university, I am a free bird , azaad paanchi.

I run inside my house and hug Meher tightly, thanking her for making me get up at 4 am during the last one month of my exams (though I used to get back to sleep, the moment she left, yet she deserves a thank you )

"Papa….Papa" , I scream at the top of my lungs and run everywhere searching for my dude with Meher following me confusedly.

A steaming cup of adraak chai catches my sight and I see my papa smiling at me knowingly, I bet he knows I passed and therefore is ready with Mann's style of celebration "A cup of steaming hot Adraak chai by The Balraaj Mann himself"
I run and hug him and in return he pats my head.

"Papa , I graduated", I scream , oops!!! I screamed a little louder, he is clearing his ears.
"I knew Heer you will, come let's raise our toast to your success" and hands a cup to me and Meher.

We clink our cups together and sit down, drinking the liquid.

"Ummmm!!!! Wow Mr. Mann awesome chai", appreciates Meher and in return papa raises his collar proudly. "then why do you yell my name everyday for tea, you can make it yourself right?", Meher smrikes and my dad frowns, he was about to say something but I stopped him in between.

"Papa, your daughter, your Heer graduated, where's my gift?" I ask him bringing his attention on me.

"I knew this one's coming", he speaks in between his sips.

"so?", I question.

"so….", he stresses a bit and directs towards the coffee table with his eyes.

I following his gaze look over the table top where a booklet type of thing is resting. I pick it up and stand up in shock.

A trip to Europe???? That too for a month?

I look at my papa wide eyed, while he smirks "Pack your bag girl, you are leaving for Europe tomorrow"

"tomorrow?", I scream.

"akele?", Meher screams.

I look at Meher with a du-uh expression, am I a toddler? Mere haath mein kya jhunjhuna hai? Let me be alone with her once, I'll shread her with a shredder.

"Nope not akele", papa concludes.

No way!!!! I am not taking Mann's official spy Meher with me…please keh do yeh jhooth hai, my mind prays in Hema Malini style, gosh!!! I am turning too filmy now a days.

Papa breaks my trance and hands over two more tickets with me. "you are not going alone but with your afat ki puriyas, your best friends, inform them" and leaves.

I jump and perform a victory dance sticking my tongue out to Meher, Europe I am coming …YAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!

so how was it???? I hope you liked it... please do comment I love reading them 😃 and now pleas can any one assist me regarding the Geography of Europe, serously dont have any idea 😆 ...and who wants to be Heeriye's best friends???? I have only space for 2, so fill in jaldi jaldi,and do comment like always

Priyadarshini aka Priyo 😊

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