FF: Hostage- PG 45- Part 19 (11/22/09) NEW!!!

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Maddy

@blackdaughter

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#111

salsa!! =)

As usual, wow!!! That was a fantastic update!!!!! I loved how when Prem wakes up the first thing in the morning a beautiful and sweet Heer is there for him!!! That was so nice, the way you explained her!!!! *thumbs up* Haha, she blackmailed him!!!!! Go Heer!!!! 😆

Oh ho!!! Prem has already started teasing Heer has he!?!??! 😉😆 Of course he would like the food, after all Heer made it!!!!!! 😳 Ooooooh, G-mom is so adorable!! I wish they had kept her essence in the serial too.... they have completely ruined her!!!!! 😭

If she is going to Haridwar then Premeer have some alone time together!!! This should be good for some progress in their relationship!!!!! *fingers crossed* Waoh................. a NICE Maya!?!?!?!?? 😕😉😆 Such a good change from what we have to endure!!!! *sigh* She sounds like a doll!!! *pinches cheeks*

Awwwww, Prem is so sweet!!! He was so worried about the cut!!!! 😳 At least they are friends!!! The first big step towards love!!!!!!!! 😆 It was so nice how they understood each other so well, in such a mall amount of time!!!!!

Chipkali!!! That is adorable!!!!!! 😆 Maya sounds like such a small cute adorable child!!! I can't wait to see more of her!!!! Wow, never thought i'd say that!!!!!! 😲😆

Great chapter and can't wait till the next part!!!!

Love you!!!! *hug*

Edited by blackdaughter - 16 years ago

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Angie

@angel82

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#112

hey Palchin,

just caught up with this FF...I am very happpy you decided to continue it and I must say you have done it in a very interesting way...I loved how you twisted the story and made it more attractive...I'm very eagerly waiting to read ahead....

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Ishita

@iditri

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#113

really really amazing...loved it to bits.....:) waiting for the next update....:)

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poonam

@P.Kamaljit.Sean

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 16 years ago

#114

hey palchin
wow that was awesum...super
loved thw way you described it
prem fallin love yay
loved it every bit of the update

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harpreet sekhon

@nslove

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#115

one again it was beautiful, wonderful\

thx 😊

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vrinda16

@vrinda16

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#116

Hai Palchin,

That was such a cute update.Awwww,I just loved it - all the Prem Heer parts were just so sweet.

So, GMom is off to Haridwar leaving the 2 together & alone?Now things are certainly gonna spice up.

They r going for dinner now? For once, Maya seems a sweet character.Thank u.

Finally Prem has admitted of falling for her.Hope she too realises the same at her end.

Waiting for next update.

And yes, thank u for the chocolate cake Palchin.😊

Love,

Vrinda

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Svetalana Singh

@-svetalana-

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#117

wow nice update..I hope prem soon realises his love for heer and they get closer.Superb writeup

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Mus@

@Mus@

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

#118

😊hi,wow what an update yaar?beautiful,awsome ,cute and vvveeeeeeeeerrrrrrrrrrrrrrryyyyyyyyyy gggggggggoooooooooodddddddd😃. 👏.
when prem said he liked to stuff those parathas into heer mouth😆 when heer offered his mother that she would like to go😆 and when heer directly said it was like she is black mailing him 😆,f he would not drink the lemon juice😆.hope prem and heer accept their feeling,and they live happily everafter😃.loved every part 😳😊.

update soon as i am eagerly,despertly waiting for ur update dear😃

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missindia26

@missindia26

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#119

Hiya Palchin just caught up with your FF 👏
So glad that you continued cos it was such a great concept 😃
Absolutely love it!!! 👏
Ugh why did Ranvir have to turn out to be bad lol but no prob now instead of Ranvir from Bidaai I'm imagaining him as Ranvir from Kasam Se 😡
Loved the passion betweent them at the beginning whoa I can feel Prem's anger and frustration 😲
Love how Heer's helping Prem 😛
Love their sweet awkwardness together😳
And they're married wow 😛
That hug scene was so cute 😳

Aw Maya's so cute love her here 😛
Heer's so thoughtful with her lemon juice and strawberries 😊
And poor Prem always feeling guilty 😕
But made me laugh when he said: "I just wanted to stuff all the parathas into her mouth" 😆

Update soon 😉
Love TJ x