PremHeer || Suraj Hua Maddham (a oneshot)

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Meeru, this one is for you. You even managed to sneak into it. 😉😆 I'm not entirely sure how. Anyways, I hope you all enjoy this. It's short, I know, but it was what I came up with while hearing the song. I'd recommend hearing it while reading.

Enjoy!
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Prem sat at his desk, staring blankly at the papers in front of him. He was unable to process any of his work, reading the same sentence for the fourth time. He sighed in frustration, closing his eyes wearily. A sudden movement in his cabin caught his attention, and his eyes snapped open to see her, standing by the file cabinet, dressed simply in a white anarkali suit. Her eyes were twinkling, and she was laughing at him. God, he loved that sound.
"Kyun janab, kahan kho gaye they tum?"
He stood, and took a step forward, colliding with the desk. He looked down hurriedly, catching his laptop before it could drop. When he looked up again, she was gone. He looked around, wondering just where she could be before realising that it had all been his imagination. He ran his hand through his hair, amused at himself. "Tu bhi na, Prem," he hit the back of his head lightly. "Focus."
Kya Yeh Mera Pehla Pehla Pyar Hai
Prem loosened his tie, tossing his jacket onto his bed. He yawned, rubbing his face wearily. He'd gotten next to nothing done, as had been happening for the past few days. He had to get her out of his head. She was consuming his thoughts. But he could not stop thinking of her. Just imagining her laugh brought a smile on his face. He could hear it now. He shook his head in an attempt to clear it. Her laugh was still ringing in his ears. Shocked, he realised that the sound was coming from outside. He ran to his window, and there she was, in the garden next door.
"Meera," he heard her call in joy as she embraced his neighbour. His breath caught in his throat. The same girl he had been unable to forget since their unfortunate first meeting in the airport, the same girl he had then spent an entire flight next to, just talking, was going to be living next door. He grinned, his eyes not once leaving her form as she hugged Meera's husband, Gaurav, next. Her eyes were lit up with joy, and the obvious affection she was showing the couple made it clear to him that they were close.
As though sensing someone looking at her, she paused before entering the house, looking around, and then up. A blush crept up her cheeks as she recognised the man she had bumped into at the airport, and a tiny smile crept onto her lips. Neither could tear their eyes away. She waved slightly, and Prem responded in kind. She made her way inside, and Prem punched his arm in the air.
He had no need to be thinking of her constantly, not when she would be living right next door. He was rejuvenated, now that Heer was no longer invading his thoughts.
"Ma," he called, rushing to the kitchen. "Let's call the neighbours over for dinner!"
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Do let me know what you think, and please, don't suggest anymore songs. 😆 I need to focus on my FFs too. 😉😆
Love,
Radz
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Posted: 16 years ago
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mmmm.....that was superbb.....i really loved it😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey yo.
First, I need to get this off my chest. OHMAIGAHPREETINASUIT!! Heh. I know he's not in your fic, but yeah. You know I'm watching the rerun. 😛
I liked the last bit of the story, with the dinner thing. That sounds like something Preet would say, but it works for Prem too! This was really sweet though. I like how he imagined seeing and hearing Heer. It would've been nice if she really was there, but it worked this way too!
I'm all out.
Love,
Bhav (:
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow radz!!!
that was so good...
i really liked it...
takecare,
regards,
Suhana.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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OMG radz..😲...today I had been humming this very tune everywhere and now I log in and find you did a one shot on that song...Ek seeti Maaru??? *loud whistle* ..I sympathise Prem😆 bechaara..have been imagining Heer everywhere... and was about to break his lappie too..(careless fellow)😆....and Heer blushing at his sight...*deep sigh*... it was so sweet...can we have a dinner one shot pls???*batting eyelids with a cute pout*...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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so sweet oh so cute prem will be prem
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Awww Radzie, it was soo damn cute! 😃 😃 😛

I loved the way you incorporated the whole them both being shy, after seeing this blunt Heer on the show, I kinda missed the nice innocent sweet Heer! 😳

Teehee....I did love the additon of the neighbours! 😛 Aww Gaurav! 😳 Teehee...I shouldn't have read this first thing, it's not going to be good for the whole day now! 😛

The song just fits them na? Kinda like how Shayad Yehi to totally fit Meet! 😃 Don't worry, I won't suggest any more songs, even though I do got some stored up! 😆

Thank you for writing this one Radzie! 😃

Love you,

Meera😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow that was aewsome
loved prem aw hez so cute
Posted: 16 years ago
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I agree with BD, OHMYYDAMN9god)PREETINTADAMNBLACKSUIT!!!!!!!!!

*sigh*

'kay moving on, really cute song, loved how you started the shot with Prem not being able to focus and all, the whole mood of the shot was so well written! =] And I got tons of songs, but me shall let you foucs to write more fab parts for those FF's ;)

--shabz
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Fantastic, very nice one shot.

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