PremHeer || Suraj Hua Maddham (a oneshot) - Page 2

Originally posted by: shabo24

I agree with BD, OHMYYDAMN9god)PREETINTADAMNBLACKSUIT!!!!!!!!!

*sigh*

🤣 You too? Oh thank (god) Preet! I thought I was the only one! *drool* 😍

Originally posted by: annea

mmmm.....that was superbb.....i really loved it😳

Originally posted by: indiandoll89

Awww Radzie, it was soo damn cute! 😃 😃 😛 Aw thank you!

I loved the way you incorporated the whole them both being shy, after seeing this blunt Heer on the show, I kinda missed the nice innocent sweet Heer! 😳 Yup, first meeting, kind of. So we will get shy-shy buddha-buddhi PremHeer no? 😆

Teehee....I did love the additon of the neighbours! 😛 Aww Gaurav! 😳 Teehee...I shouldn't have read this first thing, it's not going to be good for the whole day now! 😛 I blame you for that. I have no idea how you managed to sneak yourself in! 😆 And I'm glad you liked it. 😉

The song just fits them na? Kinda like how Shayad Yehi to totally fit Meet! 😃 Don't worry, I won't suggest any more songs, even though I do got some stored up! 😆 Yup, it fit. 😉 Good suggestion. And thank you, I want to focus on DTHM first.

Thank you for writing this one Radzie! 😃 Aw, you are most welcome. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Love you, love you too!

Meera😳

Originally posted by: shabo24

I agree with BD, OHMYYDAMN9god)PREETINTADAMNBLACKSUIT!!!!!!!!! *sighs dreamily*

*sigh*

'kay moving on, really cute song, loved how you started the shot with Prem not being able to focus and all, the whole mood of the shot was so well written! =] And I got tons of songs, but me shall let you foucs to write more fab parts for those FF's ;) Aw, thank you! Once I'm done with DTHM, I'll do a few more oneshots before continuing with CC kay? 'Cos that has a long, long, long way to go. 😆

--shabz

Love,

Radz

aww dat was soo cute .... Prem thinkin of Heer n thn knowin she is his neighbour n her wavin 2 him 😛 it was awesum 👏

Originally posted by: 268143

aww dat was soo cute .... Prem thinkin of Heer n thn knowin she is his neighbour n her wavin 2 him 😛 it was awesum 👏

Originally posted by: blackdaughter

Awwwww!!!!! That was shoooo shweeet!!!! Aw, Maddy, thank you!

You write really nice one-shots!!!! That was sooo well written!!! 😳 Thank you so much.

It's so cute how Heer is invading all his thoughts!!! And in the end when he punches his fist in the air (that was awesome)!!!! 😆 Yup, he's gone fida. 😉

Really nice, hope you write more!!! Thank you! Maybe I will. 😉