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Posted: 16 years ago
#81
so what's next Shabo bhabo? 😃 (don't ask...I'm hyper! 😆 which is weird considering the dard bhara part I wrote! 😛)
Posted: 16 years ago
#82
LOL, once I comment on these, for nect weekend I got a comedy one planned with lil Tannu. 😉

Bhabo sounds like bhabhi. 😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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ooooo fun with Tannu! 😃

I don't know...khabo sounded weird! 😆 and in gujju it means like shoulder...so bhabo worked better...or maybe thabo? 😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
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AWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This was so sweet and sad at the same time!!

Just loved the way you described Ashlesha's situation!! It almost brought tears to my eyes!!! It was very very VERY well written!! hats of to you!!

Keep writing wonderful one-shots!! They're awesome!!

luv,
Garmzz
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: shabo24

Thank oo! 🤗You rock my socks....

Yes I do😎 I'm surprised you didn't say anything else😆
Posted: 16 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: -Ravjot-

BLAH! <- I was trying to post before everyone else and that was the first thing that came to mind😆I so needed to know that naa? 😆

SHABOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! RAVJOTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT!
Omg I LOVED it! It was....amazing. No it was better than that! it was....shoot I can't think of a word. I love how you described Ash's pain when she found out that the one she loves belongs to someone else and how she realised that it was probably never meant to be and is ok with it. And I love how the lyrics went with it too! The whole song fic sort of made me want to cry...Aww thanks Ravz. I thought that since I was writing a sad fic after a long time, it would be no good but I guess not. 😆
I would write more but I can't express how much I loved this and how I love the way you wrote it. Thanks Ravz for commenting! 😉

Posted: 16 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: indiandoll89

allo! 😃

Shabo!🤗
Meera!
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I want to say sooooo much about this, but it's just too overwhelming, so I'm just going to say that it was honestly beautiful!😳😳😳 The song really fit both situations perfectly, and even helped me understand what you're kind of going through, because ultimately until I'm in that type of situation I won't really know, but seriously the way you wrote this was so powerful, I think for the very reason that you relate to it! 😳
Thanks Meera, it was really short but it was straight from the heart and usualyl I write hoping everyone else would like it but this time I didn't give a damn, I was like this is for ME! 😆But thanks a ton Meera!


Love you loads,

Meera😳

P.S. Yes the comment was short, but I don't want to say too much and ruin the simplicity of the whole thing...😳Not quantity of the comment, the quality matters.😉

Posted: 16 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: Anhdara13

Shabz, Bhav's just making excuses, she's just plain weird. 😆

No wonder she is your friend. 😆

Anywho, see, tragedy, when it does not have to do with Meet and PremHeer is totally acceptable by me. I love writing tragedy too! 😉 Just not here. I shall send that one story to you sometime, and you've already read 'No More Tears'. (You know, now it makes sens why that was your favourite. Why didn't I think of that before? 😆)
No, I still LOVE it with Prem and Heer, and Meet and uff,,,it's AMAZING! Ohhh send me it soon, and I am SHOCKED you didn't pick that up before! 😆
But seriously Shabz, you expressed Ash's feelings and thoughts so well. She had to let herself express all that anger at her fate, at the world, all that pain, before she could ever let go and move on. And you expressed that beautifully. It also explains where Ash has gone. I mean, I understand Mihika is busy with other shows, but come on, when characters (that are not Dheer/Veera/Maya/KJ/DJ) drop off the face of the planet without an explanation, it's annoying. 😆
It's is man, I mean HELLO, at least tell us they went like to the beach or something, its like POOF they are gone and POOF they are back! 😆Pick oNNNNNNNNNE! But thanks for liking/reading/.commenting!
Loved it, despite it being tragic. Or maybe because of that.. I'll get back to you on the why sometime.. 😉
Thanks di! 😉
Love,
Radz

Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: blackdaughter

Oh...... that was really nice...... and heartbreaking (sob)....

I felt sooo bad for Ash...... but i never blamed Meet for it..... i guess from Ash's point of view, her dignity, pride, ego and most importantly her heart was damaged badly.
first Prem left her, then Preet (who she LOVED) left her....... must have been so hard on the poor girl... (not that i don't like Meet , in fact i love them!!!)
Thought you captured how Ash probably felt really well!!!! you should continue to write, because you write beautifully!!!!
Great job. really nice update!!!
P.S. Add me to your PM list please!!!



Thank you SO much for the amazing comment, I think this is the first time you are commenting on something I wrote! 😃I agree, although Ash is a toad, think about it, left TWO times....give the girl a break....! Thanks and I added you! 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: shabo24

BLAH! <- I was trying to post before everyone else and that was the first thing that came to mind😆I so needed to know that naa? 😆 Yes you did😆 I thought it was important to tell you =)

SHABOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! RAVJOTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT! Hello =)
Omg I LOVED it! It was....amazing. No it was better than that! it was....shoot I can't think of a word. I love how you described Ash's pain when she found out that the one she loves belongs to someone else and how she realised that it was probably never meant to be and is ok with it. And I love how the lyrics went with it too! The whole song fic sort of made me want to cry...Aww thanks Ravz. I thought that since I was writing a sad fic after a long time, it would be no good but I guess not. 😆 Shabz, whatever you write it always good😊
I would write more but I can't express how much I loved this and how I love the way you wrote it. Thanks Ravz for commenting! 😉 No problem😃 Do I get a cookie for commenting?😃😆

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