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@shabo24

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#111

Watch Meera be next to reserve then Zahra...? That's practically always the order!

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-Garima-

@-Garima-

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#112

I ish Here!

*Edit*

Kya yaar...kisi ko rulaana koi tujhse seekhe😭 Dekha! Rulaadiya na!

It was soooo saddd duddeee!!!!! I'm like still crying over it!!!😭😭 But once thing's good that you can right a FANTASTIC tragic story!!! you should really send ur work in to Balaji...I bet Ekta will luv ur stories to make another tragic seriall LOL!!😆😆 Im not evening kidding!

The last part really had me on the verge of tears...I was so about sob...but then my stupid sister barged in the room and I quickly wiped my tears away...but i still felt really sad I hate sad endings...*sigh*...

Anyways, nice job at writing it though!! You hve wonderful skills!! Keep up the great work!!👏👏👏

luvs,
Garmzz😳😉

Edited by Garima93 - 16 years ago

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Sona

@sparikh

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#113

Shabo!

😭 😭 😭

That was cruel. 😭

Now, I have to write paper on "Unhealthy food in School Cafeteria". I was looking for some uplifting story after reading the episode update....I should have realized it from the title, tho.

-Sona

P.S. U r a great tradegy writer. The emotions of dying person.....that was sad but intense one-shot. 👏 👏 👏

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And I should tell you because...?

@shabo24

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: -Ravjot-
Shabz you jinxed it!😆

*whistles* Who me? 😆

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Ravjot

@rainydays.

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#115

Yes you!

Are you gona say couldn't be and then we end up singing the who stole the cookies from the cookie jar song?

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Jwalamukhi

@-Jwalamukhi-

Stunner

+ 9

Posted: 16 years ago

#116

Shabs, who's ever idea this was, it was good, awsome...mindblowing but whoever wrote it, that means you..is such a BAD writer! Apne readers ko angry karte ho kya?

I now DEMAND that you write an ending part to it, where Heer magically comes awake...

or or or, Prem is all sad-ish after loosing Heer, when after 10 years, he meets Heer's humshakal...*nice no?*

Acha...write one-shot on either Heer waking up and smelling Prem's love or she actually comes back in someone else's body..*angel wala muh*

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purplestar22

@purplestar22

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#117

That was sooooo sad.. 😭 I felt like crying!!!

You should write more!!!

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Meera

@indiandoll89

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#118

My *sniff* spot!

I don't know what to say....😳

As much as I LOVE and HATE tragic endings, love them for the emotions that evoke in me, and hate them cus well....they're tragic....but seriously that was mind numbing!!!👏👏👏

The way you incorporated all the dialogues was totally superb!!!😃

I think the end killed me though....and oh the line about her never hearing the word "mama" That physically hurt me to read...😭😭😭

😭

Write some happy fluff soon! 😃

Love you,

Meera😳

👏

Edited by indiandoll89 - 16 years ago

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And I should tell you because...?

@shabo24

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#119

Originally posted by: sparikh
Shabo!

😭 😭 😭

That was cruel. 😭

Now, I have to write paper on "Unhealthy food in School Cafeteria". I was looking for some uplifting story after reading the episode update....I should have realized it from the title, tho.

-Sona

P.S. U r a great tradegy writer. The emotions of dying person.....that was sad but intense one-shot. 👏 👏 👏

Thanks Sona, I'm glad you liked it, and thanks for COMMENTING! 😃 Awww well I like fluff as much as the next person...but I have a passion for tragedy...😆sorry for messing you up with your essay!

Originally posted by: *Shifali*
Shabs, who's ever idea this was, it was good, awsome...mindblowing but whoever wrote it, that means you..is such a BAD writer! Apne readers ko angry karte ho kya?*whistles innocently*

I now DEMAND that you write an ending part to it, where Heer magically comes awake...*pouts* But that's so BT'ish....

or or or, Prem is all sad-ish after loosing Heer, when after 10 years, he meets Heer's humshakal...*nice no?*Hmm...wanna write it??

Acha...write one-shot on either Heer waking up and smelling Prem's love or she actually comes back in someone else's body..*angel wala muh*How about just a fluff filled Premeer shot soon? 😛 I can't go BACK on my evilness....😆