FF-MISTAKE part 8 p:10

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annea

@annea

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Posted: 16 years ago

#71

note:

due to some personal reasons i wont be here for nearly one month.....i'm really sorry...i sware to update it as soon as i return....

Edited by annea - 16 years ago

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sugii

@sugii

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Posted: 16 years ago

#72

ok😊.. cum bck soon and continue asap..will be waiting....

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@flowers4u

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Posted: 16 years ago

#73

hey no prob will miss u have a gud time and continue soon

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Maddy

@blackdaughter

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Posted: 16 years ago

#74

don't wory too much!!!! Will wait till you come back!!! Hope everything is ok!!!!

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Sadia87

@Sadia87

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Posted: 16 years ago

#75

so understand!!

Hope all is well

cya in one month! - plz PM me when you finally update

Good luck with everything

-Sadi*

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annea

@annea

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Posted: 16 years ago

#76

part 8:

prem followed rahul to liberary.....where she was supposed to be....

"are yaar tum keesi bhi karke us ladki ko baahar le aa......

tum toh jaanthi hu na...........mein liberary mein pair nahi rakhoongha........mera image gharab ho jaayeegha yaar".....told prem.........

just then heer came out with a load of book in her hand........she was looking uncomfortable..........

prem was dumbfound when he saw the beautiful angel before him.........he stood there like a statue...........

suddenly heer sandal slipped and she was about the fall down when a pair of strong hands held her by the waist.............

her books were all shatered........she closed her eyes tightly......thinking that she will be collapsed at any minute........

she slowly opened her almond shaped eyes only to see a choclate brown eyes stairing at her...........

she felt lost in it...................

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he was enjoying her beauty when he found her falling with all her books.........

he quickly grabbed her waist.........he felt like he was complete when she was in his hands.........she had her eyes tightly closed.........

he watched her eyes slowly opening...and found the most beautiful almond eyes looking at him...........

they were lost in each others eyes...............

heer came back to reality and stood staight......but can still feel his hands over her waist...........

"excuse....will u please......."she told calmly to make him leave her.........

prem came to reality.......her sound sounded musical ..............

"umm sorry......wow actually.....aap ki pair fisal gayi thi aur......"prem tried to explain.............

it was for the first time he was feeling nervous in front of a girl.................

she left.........

"prem.....arre yaar....tum kaha kho gayi.........vohi thi voh ladki............"told an annoyed rahul.........

prem came back from his dream world......

"she was the girl who hurted my best frnd......and i'm dreaming about her?????"thought prem........

"rahul yaar.....tum chinta mat kar.......voh to tumhe ek tapad mara tha na.........mein usse eisa thapad maarungha...ki voh sindaghi bhar nahi bhuloongha........"told prem winking at rahul

sorry guys......for being so late..........i am trapped with so many works that i didn't get time...........i'm sorry........and i know it is small....but stilll plsssssssss replyyyyyyyy

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swati

@sweta2005

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+ 8

Posted: 16 years ago

#77

its awesome too good very nice part waitinggggggggg for next asap.

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sugii

@sugii

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#78

wow excellent part.thnk u soo much for updating..premeer meeting is superb...loved it soo much..can't wait to see wht happens nxt..plzzzz continue asap...

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annea

@annea

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: sweta2005
its awesome too good very nice part waitinggggggggg for next asap.

thnx dear....i'll update as soon as i can

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annea

@annea

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Posted: 16 years ago

#80

Originally posted by: sugi77
wow excellent part.thnk u soo much for updating..premeer meeting is superb...loved it soo much..can't wait to see wht happens nxt..plzzzz continue asap...

sorry for the delay.....and happy that u liked it

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