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Posted: 16 years ago
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Heylo! So I'm back with another one shot. I know, I know, I have two FFs in need of updating, but I'm stuck. Again. *sigh* It's annoying.
Anyways, I had told Ravzie I'd write another one-shot if I had a song to write it to. She suggested 'Hum Tum'. So I wrote it. 😆 Got to admit though, this is not as 'sensual' as the song. In fact, - never mind, you'll see!
So this shot is dedicated to Ravzie and Meera who encouraged me to write it! Hope you guys enjoy!
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Meher's eyes drifted to her husband's sleeping form. He looked so innocent in his sleep, with his mouth slightly open, and - was that drool? She grinned. There was no way she could let this opportunity pass. Slipping out of bed quietly, she rooted in his cupboard for the camera.
"Ah-huh!" She crowed triumphantly when she found it, before pausing in fright, checking to make sure that Preet was still asleep. He harrumphed in his sleep, before turning to lie flat on his back. She giggled. This was even better.
She stood at the foot of the bed, pulling the blanket down a bit to show Preet's hands, where they'd caused his shirt to ride up. (And partially because she just liked the view.) She smirked slightly as she got him in frame. And, holding her breath, she clicked.
"Argh!" Preet jumped, blinking furiously as he tried to get rid of the lights still reflecting in his eyes. But the fact that he was tangled in his sheets meant that he fell right out onto the hard ground. Meher, who had until this moment managed to stifle her laughter, burst out in helpless giggles as she watched her husband swear up a storm, attempting to free himself. Preet looked up in some embarrassment, but that soon changed to shock, and then annoyance when he spotted the camera in her hand.
"Meher, tu -" he began to complain, but Meher took no heed.
"Preet, you've got something here," Meher managed to get out between bouts of laughter, indicating his chin. Preet wiped at the area, and flushed darkly when he realised what she had been doing. He managed to spring up, and lunge at his wife, who easily ducked away from his reach.
He was at an advantage though, as Meher was helpless with laughter. She tried to shy away from him, and managed to evade him for awhile, both of them running around the room, knocking over the chairs, and causing clothes to fall. They'd even climbed over the bed, before Preet managed to corner her against the door. Meher held the camera behind her back, biting her lip to keep from laughing even more. Preet tried to reach around her to grab the camera, which only had Meher giggling. Preet raised his eyebrows at her, and smirked naughtily, to her horror.
"Preet, don't you da - aaahhh!" Meher's warning broke off into a squeal as Preet began to tickle her side. She wriggled, trying to get away, instead colliding with him. He grabbed hold of her waist to keep her from falling. She was breathing heavily, cheeks pink, and he could not look away. She looked up at him, and blushed as she took in their proximity. But Preet did not let go. He leaned in, and her eyes widened. She looked away hastily, not noticing his little smirk.
His breath was warm on her neck, and she squeezed her eyes shut, her breath coming up in short gasps. Preet did not know he held so much power over her, filing it away for future knowledge. He leaned closer and closer, until they were barely a hair's breadth apart.
"I win," he whispered in her ear, and then he snatched the camera from her now-slack hand.
Meher's head whipped around to look at him, her hair brushing past his face. He inhaled deeply, before grinning goofily at his wife's enraged look. He pecked her on the cheek, enjoying the play of emotions on her face. "Love you, darlin'."
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It's shorter than I had expected when I started it. Anyways, comments are greatly appreciated!
Love,
Radz
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey there love this
so sweet
have to agree that meet are just the most sweetest and cutest couple on tv.love them yaar
love how preet says in the end "luv ya darlin"
sooooo sweet
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Boo.
Yeah, you're right, it is waaaaaaaaaaaay too short! But they are so cute together! How do you come up with all these different situations for them to be in? Well however you come up with them, they rock. Meet rock. And...you r...you r...you...you rock. There. I said it. Happy? *grumblegrumble* 😆
Love,
Bhav (:
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow that was amazing... and preet ahhh u took my heart away
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hello...that was good....i like the way u have written it....preet was so cute....ans meet were so cuteee....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Aww you're dedicating it to me and Meera? Thanks =)
Btw, I love it! Love how Meher decides to take a picture of him and how he gets tangled up in the bedsheets when he sees the flash😆 And the running around bit sort of reminded me of Dil Toh Pagal Hain (probably cuz I was watching it yesterday😆) and I love how he cornered her. And the last part was awesome! The way he took the camera away, he knows what kind of effect he has on her. I guess Meher won't be winning much now😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey relly gud naughty meher luved it so cute
Posted: 16 years ago
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I started a one-shot fever! No complains though...

Really cute, and right now, with Meet in the show, I don't think they are completely ready for the whole sensual stuff yet...but this song still was a perfect choice, and such a MEET scene man...honestly...why they hell are we not the creatives?? I loved it di, you captured the characters to perfection!!

--shabz
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Posted: 16 years ago
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my spot! 😛

*edited*

A dedication?😲 to me and Ravz? How sweet!😳 I just liked the idea, Ravs suggested the song and all!😛

Oye Hoye! Miss Meher liked the view huh??😉 why am I not surprised?😳 I love the fact that she's taking a picture of his drool and torso!😆😳 Me and my friends ALWAYS do that on sleepovers!😆😆

Oohh I could totally visualize them running around the room!!!😃😆😆 Totally cute, and then Preet being a boy results to the only weapon they ever have...tickling!😆

This line....was awesome! "Preet did not know he held so much power over her, filing it away for future knowledge " He's sooo gonna use this now!😆😆😆

But ahhh the way he said I win!😳 Made me blush A WHOLE LOT!😆😆😆 It was fantabulous Radzie! 😃

Write more of them soon! 😃

Love you loads,

Meera😳

P.S. I knew there was something I was forgetting to edit!😆
Edited by indiandoll89 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: fijiana

hey there love this

so sweet
have to agree that meet are just the most sweetest and cutest couple on tv.love them yaar
love how preet says in the end "luv ya darlin"
sooooo sweet

Thank you so much!

Originally posted by: sourpuss

Boo. O.o You and your odd ways of saying 'hi'. 😆

Yeah, you're right, it is waaaaaaaaaaaay too short! But they are so cute together! How do you come up with all these different situations for them to be in? Well however you come up with them, they rock. Meet rock. And...you r...you r...you...you rock. There. I said it. Happy? *grumblegrumble* 😆 Aw, thank you! The next shot(s?) I've planned will be longer. hopefully. I know which song I'm using, the one I told you about? I'll write it soon. 😉 And yeah, I know I rock. 😆 That's why you didn't want to say it right? Inflate my already-overinflated ego? *ebil laughter*
Love, love you too!
Bhav (:

@ shikha87, miss_hyper, zaibun: Aw, thank you!

Originally posted by: -Ravjot-

Aww you're dedicating it to me and Meera? Thanks =) koi shaq? If it weren't for the two of you, I wouldn't have written this!

Btw, I love it! Love how Meher decides to take a picture of him and how he gets tangled up in the bedsheets when he sees the flash😆 And the running around bit sort of reminded me of Dil Toh Pagal Hain (probably cuz I was watching it yesterday😆) and I love how he cornered her. And the last part was awesome! The way he took the camera away, he knows what kind of effect he has on her. I guess Meher won't be winning much now😆 Thank you! I'm so glad. It just seemed like a very Meet thing to do no? The way they're always teasing one another, not quite 'just friends' and not quite 'lovers' yet. So I had a bit of both. 😆 Meher might. I actually have an idea for Meher's retaliation, but I won't be writing that yet. I want to try and finish the next part of DTHM first. 😉 Am so glad you liked it!

Originally posted by: shabo24

I started a one-shot fever! No complains though... Yes you did! And I have another idea for the sequal to this thanks to Ravzie's comment. 😆 Plus an idea for another song-fic that I want to discuss with Bhav. *sigh* How am I supposed to get 'round to updating DTHM when I'm getting hit by the oneshot bug?

Really cute, and right now, with Meet in the show, I don't think they are completely ready for the whole sensual stuff yet...but this song still was a perfect choice, and such a MEET scene man...honestly...why they hell are we not the creatives?? I loved it di, you captured the characters to perfection!! Aw, thank you so much Shabzie! 😳 The song was Ravzie's idea, and I was a bit stunned with the way the story came together, despite such a song. 😆 I'm glad though, because the song and story did fit, in a way, and suit the place they are at the current storyline. 😃

--shabz

@ Meera: Waiting to see what you have to say! 🤗
Love,
Radz

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