[FF] Pichle Saat Din [Prem-Centric][One-shot] - Page 3

Originally posted by: Sunehari*Rose

i luved the way u put ur fanfic out there. everyday moment and meeting was perfect.... i thot u wll be tkaing some time like ekta does for the first meeting of the lovers..... but luved that u didnt

Thanks! Hmm, I just kinda felt like the minute he saw her he'd be all, "ooooh she's purdy..." kinda thing. 😆 So I didn't wanna take my time with it! 😃

keep postin

luv

tina

Originally posted by: Khushi34

Haila Bhav....wt awsome work!! Im impressed... Thanks! 😃

Only one shot but it was realli well writtenn!! OMG Prem is shhoo shweet...Lol hes even more cute when he loosing things and dusnt have a clue wer they r going to.

It's the helplessness, isn't it? 😆

I was actually wondering half way through how this is going to end...but the ending was superb. Good u didnt change your mind abt it and left it the way u thought suited the story...The ending is so simple bt it actually makes a real strong point *SIGHH* Luvd the situation wer he loose the king of hearts. That situation cud actually kind of indicate wts going 2 happen in the end..like u no He's the king of hearts and his heart gets stolen by Heer....Lol Onli realised afta readin it thrice.....

Haha I didn't realise that until I read your comment! The king of hearts card was what I chori-ed from the song because I was running out of things for him to lose! 😆 But awww you read it three times! 😳

Preet and harmans room fight was really funny no idea why...awww Bless themm

Hmmm...because it was so realistic? Come on, you can so imagine two random siblings fighting over the same room! 😆

Anyways Luvd the shot.. Again, thanks! 😃

take Care xx

I have to reserve! 😆 I take too long in my comments now, because I realize how much effort you put in to write things, so I don't jut wanna say "Awesome job! Write more soon!" 😆

But ahhh Yeh Tumhari is my FAV one! 😃

Originally posted by: indiandoll89

I have to reserve! 😆 I take too long in my comments now, because I realize how much effort you put in to write things, so I don't jut wanna say "Awesome job! Write more soon!" 😆

But ahhh Yeh Tumhari is my FAV one! 😃