Kis Desh Mein Hai Mera Dil FF Pt 6 Updated Pg 9 - Page 7

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Posted: 16 years ago
#61
hey durga..

nice upadte..
heer scared prem...
that was hillarious..

continue soon...
Posted: 16 years ago
#62
hey awesome FF.. durga
i just caught up with this FF andi really liked it..
cont soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#63
hey awesome FF
i just caught up with this FF andi really liked it..
cont soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#64
i read this FF
this sounds gr8 2 me!!!!!!!!

loved the way u gave the intro /promo n the way its heading!!!!!!!!!!

continueeeeeeee sooooon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Kis Desh Mein Hai Mera Dil Part 5
Heer walks over to Nirendra and stands beside him. She lets Prem's singing take her away into another world. She keeps staring at him with a look that she never gave anyone before. With a feeling that she never felt before for anyone. Prem looks up and sees Heer standing in front of him. He waves at her and she waves back. Nirendra changes the song. He was about to start singing, when a peon came into the room.
"Ms. Maan, the superintendants are here."
"Now? But they were suppose to be here tomorrow."
"Well, they're waiting downstairs for you right now."
"Okay. Chalo."
She follows the peon downstairs. She sees a group of men sitting down on the couches talking about something very important. She goes up to them.
"Hello."
They all get up and greet her. Heer sits down on a couch herself and the rest of the men sit down after her.
"This is kind of akward. I was actually expecting you guys tomorrow."
"Yes, and we would have been here tomorrow if it weren't for something that we found out." explains Sunil.
"Oh really," says Heer sitting back. "And what is it that you found that was so important that forced you to meet me today instead of tomorrow. You guys know how busy I am."
"Yes, and we're extremely sorry for bother you like this but the matter is that big." explains Surinder apologetically.
"What's the matter?" inquires Heer now worriedly.
"We have just found out that you're gonna be going on a tour with two new people. We've already met with Ms. Meher and we're quite impressed with her acting. Therefore, we sent her over to an ad agency. And now we're here to see your new singer." explains Sunil.
"Why? So you can steal him away from me too? Thanks but no thanks I'm not interested." says Heer getting up.
"Ms. Maan please try to understand. We're not stealing anyone away from you. All we're trying to do is give them an identity. Give them a chance to become somebody." says Sunil.
"Well that's what I'm doing as well. Infact I think that by working with me they would become even more recognised."
"But that's the thing. They would get recognized because of you. Not by what they're doing. You after this tour ends who's gonna remember them? All they're gonna remember is the smashing performance that you gave. They won't even remember that they were there." Sunil tries to persuade.
"I'm sorry. Deal is off. There is no way that I'm gonna lose a gem like Prem to filthy people like you guys. Especially you." she says looking at Sunil.
"I think we should leave now." says Surinder.
"Yes, I think you should." says Heer leaving.
"Well that went smooth." says Surinder.
"Don't worry. Let her have what she wants for now. Mein bhi tho dekhoon ki yeh apni maan maani kab tak chala thi hai." smirks Sunil.
End.

Durga
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Kis Desh Mein Hai Mera Dil Part 6

Heer goes back to the studio & sees Prem packing up. She goes over to him & informs him about Meher & how Sunil wanted to steal him as well.
"Really?" he asks amused. "I never knew that I was that special."
"Well, you are to me." answers Heer.
"Really." he asks leaning in so close to her that their faces were just inches apart. "You're really special to me as well."
They both stare at each other. A door opens & the peon comes. Seeing them both together that close he leaves while Prem & Heer step back away from each other akwardly.
"I meant to say.. my career is in your hands... so obviously you'll be special." he corrects himself.
"Yeah, if it's not for me, then you wouldn't even be here." she encourages.
"Right." he agrees.
He puts away some remaining things in his bag while stealing a few glances towards Heer while she sorts some files that didn't need to be sorted. When he's done, he stays there for few seconds not wanting to go.
"Well... I guess I should be leaving now." he states.
"Yes... you should."
"I'll come early tomorrow." he suggests.
"Yes.. for practice. You should." she replies.
"Alright, then. See you tomorrow."
"Bye."
"Bye."
Heer watches Prem leave & sighs.
"I wish tomorrow comes fast." she wishes to herself.
Next morning...
There are a bunch of clothes on the bed & more are being added to the pile as Heer rejects everyone of them. Disappointed, she sits down on the bed & pouts.
"Itni amir hoon, aur kuch bhi acha pehne ke liye nahi hai."
Meanwhile...
Prem is uncertain as to what he should wear as well. He then remembers that Preet has a shirt that he really likes but he'll never give it to him without teasing him first. He thinks of an idea of how to get the shirt & he won't even get caught.
He walks over to his room & sees Preet laying on the bed listening to his walk man. He enters the room & sits down on the bed smiling at him. Preet gets scared seeing him looking at him like that. He takes of his head phones & sits up looking at him.
"What's up?" he asks.
"Date." answers Prem.
"Date. Aap ki." Preet asks shocked.
"Why are you so shocked? Why can't I get a date? Am I that bad?" he asks getting up & looking at himself in the mirror.
"No. But you have a date?" he still asks shocked.
"No. You do." Prem answers while fixing his hair.
"Me." Preet asks with all smiles. "Who?"
"Surprise."
"Come on bhaiya." he whines coming over to him. "Ab bhai bhai ke kam ni aiye ga toh phir kaun aiye ga."
"Yeh toh sayi hai. Par kya kere. Meine pehle se promise kiya hai."
"Oh."
"Par mein tumhe yeh zaroor bata sakta hoon ki woh kaha mile gi."
"Kaha." Preet asks all excited.
"Park."
"Park." he repeats all dreamy.
"Nana Nani Park."
"Nana Nani Park!" he asks surprised.
"Ha. Woh kya hai na ki yeh ladki bohot smart hai. Kya hai na ki, iss ke Mummy, Papa bohot strict hai. Agar unhe pata chal gaya ki woh kissi ladke se milne aiyi hai toh phir woh toh gayi. Par yeh tumhe bohot pasand kar thi hai, toh phir meine socha chalo, agar bhai bhai ke kam ni aiye ga toh phir kaun aiye ga." he says stealing his line. "Aur vaise bhi aaj kal hum sab milne ke liye kahan jaate hai. Discos, restaurants, mall, coffee shop... hai na."
"Han."
"Par Nana Nani Park. Yaha par koi nau jawan jaa sakta hai, kissi ne socha hai kya."
"Nahi toh. Meine yeh pehle kyun ni socha. Phir mujhe itni baar Maa se maar thodi na khani par thi." he touches his cheek remembering his mother's slaps.
"Kyunki tu Preet hai, aur mein Prem."
"Huh?"
"Kuch ni. Zyaada zor mat dal. Acha ab meine tumari itni madat ki hai, toh tumara bhi toh farz ban tha hai na ki tum meri madat karoge."
"Ha."
"Toh phir mein tumse bina pooche ek cheez le jaane wala hoon aur tum aaj ke baad yeh bhool jaye ga ki yeh tumari pehle thi aur bafaas bhi ni maange ga."
"Kya lekar jaoge?" asks Preet.
"Ah. Tumhe date par jaana hai ke nayi."
"Jaana hai."
"Toh phir deal."
"Done."
"Aise nayi."
"Toh phir kaise."
"Inn papers par sign karo." Prem says taking out some papers.
"Aap bhi na bhaiya." says Preet while signing the papers.
After signing the papers, Preet leaves a smiling Prem behind. He quickly goes to his cupboard & takes out the shirt. He starts heading back to his room.
Back at Heer's house....
Heer is still sitting on the bed, thinking about what to wear. She lays back & stares at the ceiling. While staring, her eyes shifted towards the top of the cupboard & she saw her suitcase there. She gets up & brings it down. She opens it & sees a picture of her role model holding her.
"You're so beautiful. You know that." she says to the picture.

She hugs the picture. Remembering something, she quickly opens another suitcase & starts digging through it, throwing out whatever was coming in the way. She then picks up a dress that she thought she'll never wear.
Back at Prem's house...
Prem is already to spend the rest of his day with Heer.
"Watch out Heer Maan because Prem Juneja will blow you away." he states smiling.
At Heer's house....
Heer looks at herself in the mirror happy with herself.

"Not bad Heer. Prem you better watch out. Heer Maan is here to enchant you." she says smiling.
End.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#67
i just watched the promo i havent watched it before and i luved ur promo...and the ff is nice too...gud work..i liked it specially the promo is awesome...
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Posted: 16 years ago
#68
very interesting!!! i read all the reamining parts i had, and superb! love where the story is going. cant wait to read more of wat is coming up. update soon, n take care
~nikki
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Posted: 16 years ago
#69
hi durga
my name is sia, a new member at this forum. today I read your ff in one go and liked it a lot. can you add me in your pm list. waiting for your next update.😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#70
@Pooji Thanks!
@CAqueen
Thanks! I'm glad that you liked the promo.
@nikki
Thanks! I'm sure you'll love what's gonna happen next. I'll try not to keep you all waiting. Take care. <3
@Sia
Hi! & welcome to the forum. I'm so glad that you like my ff. I'll be sure to pm you the next time I update it.

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