Yay! You updated! And only a part left huh? Ohh yeah, I read in the CC you were going on holiday! Have fun! Yes I did have fun, in August π€£ I can't believe so much time passed and I didn't update! π I hope you're doing well π
I loved that line "The past two weeks getting tortured by Prem had been amazing." Soooooo funny! πHaha, sorry I had to pour rain all over your favourite line- you can imagine 'tortured' being there instead of 'tutored' π
The anticipation of the exam was written so well, loved how you showed the changed in how the two of them were preparing for their exam and the results day. There was such a peace filled feeling as Heer just whispered "I passed." Awesome part! Thanks Shabz π³ I'm glad you liked the part π
LURVED how she defended him and poor Heer, too late huh? Fingers crossed for the last part! :) Yeah, go Heer!! π Exactly- a bit too late for Heer, I hope you won't be dissapointed with the next part π Love you, Zahra x
--shabz
Originally posted by: cute_bear
noo dont change it...its superb...
Originally posted by: indiandoll89
My spot! π
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π² I'm semi shocked that you updated! π And now...you're right it hasn't been that long this time!π Anyways...*giggles* Tortured would sound better! ππ You'll be COMPLETELY shocked when I update the last part then π Well, this time I took ages! π Sowwie!! π³ Lol, it would sound funnier, but I'm gonna leave tutored, cuz it would sound better in the context of the sentence π
But yes tutored, and awwww Heer's soooo fallen for him! π³ It's sweet, I just wish Prem could understand his feelings already, unless he adorably already has and will just not mention it to anyone till the day of the ball, not that it's a problem! π I think he does understand it, but he understands Ravz's feelings too, and wouldn't want to hurt her, since they've been friends for so long! π³
Anyways the whole bit about the exam was really well written Z! π³ That's how I felt when I wrote my 12th ones....sadly I didn't have a Prem to come tutor me! *pouts* Thanks Meera π³ I'm sure everyone feels like that before an exam, I've always had butterflies before sitting an exam π Yes, poor us will never have a Prem to tutor us π π
AWWWW she asked him to the dance? and he's such a good guy already admitting he has a date otherwise most guys tend to be jerks and then dump off the other date, but Prem's not most guys is he? π³ But awww he knows she's hurt, it's all good. Z'll make it better at the ball! πExactly, that is exactly what most guys would do, but he is way to sweet π³ If only all guys were like this π I will most definitely make it better at the ball! π
Can't wait for the last update! π *sniff* It feels like you jsut started it! π³I know π I've had the most fun writing this FF, I guess because it had you guys in it, so it was nicer to pen down π³ I will miss it, but it had to come to an end, I had the ending planned out right from the start π
Love you, Thanks again Meeru, I love you too, Zahra x
Meeraπ³
Hey
Awesum update
omg 1 part left
finally heer asked prem to go to the ball yay
can't wait for next update
Originally posted by: -Ravjot-
Yay π Heer passed π That's awesome! And aww she's falling for Prem. And I bet he's falling for her too. Love how she stood up for him in front of those guys. And she's right, he is too nice to everyone π
Aww he had to say no to her? π Make him go with her π I don't wanna go no more π
She passsssssed! π I understand what Heer's going through, because before an exam I actually eat my breakfast in the morning and wake up on time....π but anyways, one more part? I cant wait to read it ! I'm pretty exicted to know what will happen between Prem and Heer...they would be a very cute couple ( π ok well DUH, stating the obvious here...) but anyways great job, keep it up!
Originally posted by: Intellienough
wow !! after long time.love this update...amazing part .don't you think that it should have few more parts rather than concluding in next part...