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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: shabo24

Yay! You updated! And only a part left huh? Ohh yeah, I read in the CC you were going on holiday! Have fun! Yes I did have fun, in August 🀣 I can't believe so much time passed and I didn't update! πŸ˜› I hope you're doing well πŸ˜ƒ

I loved that line "The past two weeks getting tortured by Prem had been amazing." Soooooo funny! πŸ˜†Haha, sorry I had to pour rain all over your favourite line- you can imagine 'tortured' being there instead of 'tutored' πŸ˜†

The anticipation of the exam was written so well, loved how you showed the changed in how the two of them were preparing for their exam and the results day. There was such a peace filled feeling as Heer just whispered "I passed." Awesome part! Thanks Shabz 😳 I'm glad you liked the part 😊

LURVED how she defended him and poor Heer, too late huh? Fingers crossed for the last part! :) Yeah, go Heer!! πŸ˜› Exactly- a bit too late for Heer, I hope you won't be dissapointed with the next part πŸ˜‰ Love you, Zahra x

--shabz

Originally posted by: cute_bear

noo dont change it...its superb...

Thank you I won't change it πŸ˜† I'm happy you liked the update πŸ˜ƒ x

Originally posted by: indiandoll89

My spot! πŸ˜›

*edited*

😲 I'm semi shocked that you updated! πŸ˜› And now...you're right it hasn't been that long this time!πŸ˜› Anyways...*giggles* Tortured would sound better! πŸ˜›πŸ˜† You'll be COMPLETELY shocked when I update the last part then πŸ˜† Well, this time I took ages! πŸ˜† Sowwie!! 😳 Lol, it would sound funnier, but I'm gonna leave tutored, cuz it would sound better in the context of the sentence πŸ˜†

But yes tutored, and awwww Heer's soooo fallen for him! 😳 It's sweet, I just wish Prem could understand his feelings already, unless he adorably already has and will just not mention it to anyone till the day of the ball, not that it's a problem! πŸ˜› I think he does understand it, but he understands Ravz's feelings too, and wouldn't want to hurt her, since they've been friends for so long! 😳

Anyways the whole bit about the exam was really well written Z! 😳 That's how I felt when I wrote my 12th ones....sadly I didn't have a Prem to come tutor me! *pouts* Thanks Meera 😳 I'm sure everyone feels like that before an exam, I've always had butterflies before sitting an exam πŸ˜› Yes, poor us will never have a Prem to tutor us 😭 πŸ˜†

AWWWW she asked him to the dance? and he's such a good guy already admitting he has a date otherwise most guys tend to be jerks and then dump off the other date, but Prem's not most guys is he? 😳 But awww he knows she's hurt, it's all good. Z'll make it better at the ball! πŸ˜ƒExactly, that is exactly what most guys would do, but he is way to sweet 😳 If only all guys were like this 😍 I will most definitely make it better at the ball! πŸ˜‰

Can't wait for the last update! πŸ˜” *sniff* It feels like you jsut started it! 😳I know 😭 I've had the most fun writing this FF, I guess because it had you guys in it, so it was nicer to pen down 😳 I will miss it, but it had to come to an end, I had the ending planned out right from the start πŸ˜ƒ

Love you, Thanks again Meeru, I love you too, Zahra x

Meera😳

Originally posted by: -Pooji-

Hey
Awesum update
omg 1 part left
finally heer asked prem to go to the ball yay
can't wait for next update

Hey Poonam!! Haven't talked to you in a long time 😲 Hope you are okay! 😳 Thank you for commenting, I'm glad you liked the part 😳 Will update soon πŸ˜ƒ x

Originally posted by: -Ravjot-

Yay πŸ˜ƒ Heer passed πŸ˜ƒ That's awesome! And aww she's falling for Prem. And I bet he's falling for her too. Love how she stood up for him in front of those guys. And she's right, he is too nice to everyone πŸ˜†

Aww he had to say no to her? πŸ˜” Make him go with her πŸ˜” I don't wanna go no more πŸ˜”

RAVZ!!! πŸ€— Yes she passed πŸ˜ƒ He is way too nice, but that is why she loves him 😳 No, don't be sad Ravz, I am going to make it all better in the last part, no one will be left sad!! YOU DO WANT TO GO!! πŸ˜† Now smile 😳 Thanks for the comment. 😳 Love Zahra x

Originally posted by: meiskan

She passsssssed! πŸ˜ƒ I understand what Heer's going through, because before an exam I actually eat my breakfast in the morning and wake up on time....πŸ˜† but anyways, one more part? I cant wait to read it ! I'm pretty exicted to know what will happen between Prem and Heer...they would be a very cute couple ( πŸ˜† ok well DUH, stating the obvious here...) but anyways great job, keep it up!

Hiya πŸ˜ƒ Thank you so much 😳 I can never sleep peacefully before an exam, so yeah, same, I always get up really early and eat a proper breakfast unlike usually πŸ˜† True, they will be a very cute couple 😳 Shall update soon πŸ˜ƒ x

Originally posted by: Intellienough

wow !! after long time.love this update...amazing part .don't you think that it should have few more parts rather than concluding in next part...

Hey πŸ˜ƒ I know it's been a very long time, I'm so sorry! 😳 I'm really glad you liked the update. After reading the next update you will see that there is not much else I can add to the story, so an ending is inevitable 😊 Hopefully you will enjoy reading the last part! x
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: premeer928

that was amazing...πŸ‘ yay...heer passed....that so great. awww...poor her...that would so cute if they go to the ball together...πŸ˜‰ continue soon. 😊



love
Afreen

Thank you so much Afreen. Yes she passed, they will go the ball together, but you will have to see how in the next part πŸ˜‰ x

Originally posted by: sanju_veni

hey really nice ff...plz update soon n plz can u add me to ur pm list

Hiya- thank you 😳 I don't have a PM list, but I will PM you when I update πŸ˜ƒ x

Originally posted by: Anhdara13

I love the fact that Heer's fallen for Prem as he is, makeover not needed. That's something they rarely show in stories and shows nowdays. So kudos to you for that Z! That's exactly what I wanted with this story, for Heer to see Prem for who he is, his true beauty. This is something that you will see in the last part too 😳 Thanks Radz 😳

And one more part only? I love how you're wrapping it up so nicely. Heer knows her feelings, Prem's a little less sure. And she asked him out. Aww. I do hope you bring Yug in for Ravzie next part. Yup, it's ending more smoothly than I had imagined πŸ˜† But luckily I knew how I was going to end this story right from the start πŸ˜ƒ You will soon see whether Ravzie gets Yug πŸ˜‰ Love Zahra x

Love,
Radz

Originally posted by: mithalio

Excellent please update soon.

Thank you Mithiya, I'm happy you liked the part, I will update very soon πŸ˜ƒ x

Originally posted by: aaminaman

it was really nice one more update wat does it mean is it going to end or wat i can t understand

Thank you 😳 Ending as in the next part will be the last part of this story- the FF is ending πŸ˜ƒ x

Originally posted by: Ashlesha09

hey zahra Hello Ashlesha- good to see that you stumbled upon this story πŸ˜†

so nw i m addicted to ur ths ff too. Last night while surfing the pages just found ths ff n thought of reading it n i read whole in just 1 day * patting my back*😊😊 . I just can't believe tht hw can u manage to keep so many ff at sametym n no similarities between any of tm, just lyk poles apart *applauding*πŸ‘πŸ‘. I just can't believe tht i read whole 19 parts but it seems as if just read only 1 part n happenings in each update is of same day, don't knw why but wth every ff or story tht i read i realised tht frm whr it had reachd whr but with ths no such thoughts occurd to me. Awww, thank you so much Ashlesha, your comment is so lovely, it made my day. I am surprised myself that I manage so many FFs, it is difficult, it's no wonder I take months to update πŸ˜†
I m sad tht u r gng to end ths in 1 more part, would be happier if u could hv continue*pouts* but never mind as it says tht all good things needs to end so is ur ff. I wish it could continue too, but it has to end, I don't want to leave it without completing it πŸ˜ƒ I hope you like the ending.
I luv each n every character of ur ff i knw all othrs r dedicated to forum membrs but its really very fun reading bout MEERA, RAVJYOT,SHIFALI N ASMA though nt much of ASMA but i thoroughly enjoyed myself. Thank you, I had fun writing it because of them in it.
I love the way hw Heer-prem's frndship blossoms n suddenly frm nothng Prem bcums everythng fr heer. Two poles apart character attracted towards ech othr ths much especially heer.I really lyk the update in which prem-heer opened up themselves lyk a book n luvd heer whn consoled him n calm him down. Ur strtng ws hillarious prem disliked heer only bcoz she dislikd statistics n even gave his first tutoring on it only , i think statistics playd important role in their frndship or luv n nt to frgt mr.patel had he nt been thr heer would hv never met prem n would hv never passed her finals n we nvr got to read about their first hug😳😳. Exactly, they were meant to be together that is why despite being so different they came together and fell in love. 😳 Haha, yeah, good old statistics πŸ˜† The first hug was cute 😳
n yeah heer passed out in her finals offcourse credit goes to prem but stll its her hard work.............. It was due to her hard work, and also the determination to impress Prem in a way, I don't think she realised until now that she wanted to pass for Prem just as much for anyone else 😳
i really felt sad tht i m nt in ths ff frm strtng, i missed such a gr88 ff n oppurtunity to comment on the updates * wiping tears* but its btr late thn never. Awww, don;t worry Ashlesha, this comment made up for it, it was lovely to read, so thank you! πŸ˜ƒ
its really topped the list of my fav ffs😊😊Thank you again, so much! πŸ€— Love Zahra x
luv
ashlesha⭐️

Originally posted by: v_nikhita18

superb part! heer asked prem to the ball.....loved it!

i'm so glad you updated after such a long time........
do update the next part soon!

Thanks Nikhita! 😳 Yes, she gathered the courage to ask him, sorry for taking so long in updating the last part, but now you won't have to wait long πŸ˜ƒ I will update the next part very soon 😊 x
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Posted: 15 years ago
Well well well😳 Look who's back😳 I expect an update from you now *hmph*
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Posted: 15 years ago
ZAHRAAAAAAAA 😲 (Ban me for using caps...I don't care)

BUT ZZZZZ!!!! I've missed you πŸ˜” *sniffs*
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Posted: 15 years ago
Didi *stomps foot* *stroppy smile* Yes Yes I am in a strop...one of my magical ones!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: yasu09

hey

love ur ff..............plz update soon

Thanks Yaz, I shall update soon πŸ˜ƒ x

Originally posted by: aati1429

this ff is very different and nice... do pm when u upsate

Hiya πŸ˜ƒ Thank you, I am glad you like the storyline- will PM you when I update 😊 x

Originally posted by: purplestar22

Loved the chapter! Im so glad Heer realized her feelings for Prem!!

Awww Heer passed the exam!! All that studying payed off..
I loved how Heer stood up for Prem when Abhi called Prem a geek.
I felt sooo bad for Heer at the end she wanted to go with Prem to the ball but she cant..
Cant wait for the next chapter!!
Ps: I edited my comment from the last chapter which is on Pg.61

Thank you 😳 We're all glad she realised her feelings πŸ˜† Shame it was a little too late πŸ˜› Heer was great to stand up for him, and he did appreciate it 😳 They'll be together by the end of the story, I promise you that πŸ˜ƒ Will update soon, and thanks for the last comment too 😳 It means a lot 😳 x

Originally posted by: Aaliyah01

That was really good

Aww poor Heer missed her chance to go to the ball with Prem
Cant believe ther is only one part left!
Update soon please!

Hey Aaliyah! πŸ˜ƒ Thanks for reading and commenting 😳 I know, poor Heer, but don't worry, I will make it all alright in the next chapter. πŸ˜‰ x

Originally posted by: 21.snehal

hey..
nice ff.. pls update soon

Hey there πŸ˜ƒ Thank you so much! 😳 Will update very soon 😊 x

Originally posted by: aiska89

This is a great fic!!!!!!! Are you going to update?

Thank you πŸ˜ƒ- I will update very shortly- sorry to keep you waiting! 😳 x

Originally posted by: AditiKiDiwani

u know i read this whole at one go
n d first thing that came to my mind was that 'pyaar impossible'
latest movie of priyanka n uday is based on ur ff
Z congrulations
srsly loved ur ff
y r u finishing it off so soon
never mind
plz update d las par NOW
its weekand........u can
plzzzzzzzzzz

First of all, well done for reading it all in one go! πŸ˜† Secondly, thank you so much for the lovely comment 😳 Yeah, I guess it has similarities to that film πŸ˜› Thanks πŸ˜† I'm glad you liked the FF, will update very soon! πŸ˜ƒ x
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Posted: 15 years ago
YES, I am BACK!! Muahahahaha! 🀣
And update shall come soon, hopefully! πŸ€”
I missed you guys too!! *BUG HUG AND SLOPPY KISSES!* πŸ˜†
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Posted: 15 years ago
^^ di no hug or sloppy kiss is gonna work this time!
but I still missed you *hug* *stern smile*
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Posted: 15 years ago
*sighs* I was thinking about it all last nightttt, how we all were in the summerπŸ˜” Stupid school ruins everythingπŸ˜†
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Posted: 15 years ago
^^ Sorry Aashifa *gets down on knees with her hands clasping her ears*
MEERA!! I know =( We had so much fun then, good times. Seems like a distant dream now! *sigh* Hopefully when Summer comes again we will have that time again...

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