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Posted: 16 years ago
So I am finally updating! 😆 Here is part eleven, it is a bit shorter than usual, but I didn't have much time to make it longer, so hope you don't mind! 😳 xx
Part Twelve
Prem lay on his bed twirling the piece of paper between his fingers. He had picked up the phone almost twenty times before putting it down again. His mind was all over the place, neither was studying helping him feel better, which irked him. The only thing he could see was the image of her dejected face and the only thing he could hear was her voice pleading him for help.

On one hand he wanted to help her, but he couldn't help but feel that things would go terribly wrong in the long run and he would be the one facing the most hurt. Meera's words about following your heart echoed in his ears as he picked up the phone and dialled the number. 'You can do it Prem, after all you'll only be studying and that is the thing you love the most,' he thought to himself. After his little pep talk he took in a big deep breath and pressed the green button, holding the phone to his ear.

Heer sat in front of a book, trying her hardest to comprehend what was written in front of her, yet the words seemed to enter one side of her brain and come out the other. She almost felt like ripping the book into thousands of tiny little pieces, wondering which insane person had come up with the concept of education. The sound of her phone ringing filled her room and reached across to grab it from her bedside table. 'Hello' she answered, as she flung the book across one side of her bedroom to the other in frustration.

It surprised her, to say the least, to hear the timid voice on the other end. 'Er...Ummm...Hi. It's me'Prem' he hesitated. It was that deep velvety voice again, having the same strange effect on her. Heer sat up, holding the phone closer to her ear. She had expected him to call, but not so soon. It had only been a day since she had asked him for help and thought he would need more time. She hoped this didn't mean that he would say no to give her tutoring.

'Hi Prem' she responded.

'I've made my decision' said Prem. Heer smiled, hoping his answer would be a yes.

'So...Will you tutor me?' she asked nervously.

'Ummm...yes...I will tutor you' he stated, to which Heer leapt up with joy. She could not stop the smile that spread across her face.

'Oh Prem- thank you so much! You don't know what this means to me!' she exclaimed.

'It's okay. How about I come over to your house tomorrow or something?' he asked.

'Wait- No- My dad doesn't actually know about me failing classes- is it okay if I come over to your house instead?' she asked 'I promise I will behave' she added in and he laughed. She unexpectedly liked his laugh, it was so hearty, and in a sense brought her closer to him.

'That's fine, around 5 then?' he said, giving her the address, which she noted and they hung up. She twirled around the room, happy that she was going to be able to make her parents proud and would no longer have to bow her head in shame. Maybe then they would agree to the Paris trip as well, she thought.

Prem sat on his bed wondering what he had just done. Did he do the right thing? Several questions ran through his mind. Yet there was no going back now. He had never imagined that the most popular girl of the school Heer Mann would ever come to his home to be tutored by him- it felt like an odd dream. She wasn't as bad as he expected her to be, maybe their little arrangement would work out after all.

But he had something else to do as well and picked up the phone again. He knew he was making the right choice as he dialled her number. As he heard her voice on the other line he started, 'Ravz- can you meet me today?' he asked.

That's it for today! So why is Prem calling Ravz for? 😆 Hope you liked it- can't wait to read comments!

Love Zahra xx

Edited by Pyari_Zahra - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
An update! Yippee! How'd the exams go and everything??

Will update this.

*edited*

Sydney is AMAZING! I've been here before, my cousins live here, but I'm coming after like 4 years. It's so cold, the opposite of Singapore. 😆 I think you would like the place. 😉 Try and come here sometime, you will like it.

And on to the update. So a sort of friendship will build between the two I'm thinking? I love the way you've written them though. Prem is way too serious, but he can be playful and sweet too. And Heer is way too superficial, but that is only what she shows the world.

Why did Prem call Ravz though? To tell her that they'll go as friends to the dance? Or something else?

Love,
Radz

Edited by Anhdara13 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
^^ In architecture we don't have exams but I had this huge end of year presentation in front of all these people- it went really well thanks, so I am relieved! How was Sydney- you back yet? xx
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Posted: 16 years ago
Still here. Sydney is awesome!

Love,
Radz

Pyari_Zahra thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
^^ I wanna go down under *goes green with jealousy* 😆 Awww, hope you're having a great time! xx
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Posted: 16 years ago

Awesome Update....Aww Prem is gonna help heer.. Cant wait for the next chapter!!!

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Posted: 16 years ago
Awesome Update..so Prem is gonna help heer!!!!
Cant wait for the next update.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Reserved
Unserved
Do you knw how many times I tried to unreserve but people kept calling me? Anyway, lets play a game where you guess where I'll add an emoticon and which one cuz I'm too lazy to add em myself.
I love how you added how Prem can't think of what to saw. Poor guy doesn't know what to choose. Good thing he thought of Meera and her suggestion. I bet Heer probbly had a huge smile o her face when Prem said yes. Everything is starting to work for her isn't it? Bet they both don't know where this'll lead them later on.
Ooh Prem called me? Wonder why. Can't wait to read the next update. Continue soon
Edited by -Ravjot- - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
reserved! 😛

*edited*

I loved it! 😃 And I was just very excited when I got your pm!😉😃😃

And oohhh the way you showed Prem's heart doing flip flops was so real...poor guy didn't know if he should or not....and aww Heer....that sounds like me when I'm studying for exams, even though I get the information! 😆😛

Awww he said yes!!!! 😃 *jumps for joy*

And ohhh he called Ravs?? This is intriguing me Z!! 😳 You need to update asap since i really wannt know what's going on now! 😛

Love you laods,

Meera😳
Edited by indiandoll89 - 16 years ago
Posted: 16 years ago
WHY IS EVERYONE UPDATING ON THE DAY I HAVE NO TIME?!?!?!

In short - great update - really taunting your readers here Z, wanna know how this all turns out SO BAD! =] Loved it - wonder why he called Ravz! Bet she feels special! =]

--shabz

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