Fatal Game of Marriage~*Pt 20 Pg 93 20/7*~

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Posted: 16 years ago

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I Love your ff..it beautifully written
Please do continue...
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RINCY

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Posted: 16 years ago

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loved the last part...

plzzzzzzzz update soon!😊

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Thanks for the comment guys, sorry for the delay, i would post now.

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Part 18

Prem felt his heart cry for her to do something for her……He knew nothing about this feeling but he wanted to just console her now….he wanted…..He raised his arm and held her to stop her from crying….

"Heer…………..What happen Hun….???……..Why are you crying like this……why…..?" He asked her feeling the pain feeling too vulnerable….he was also feeling his eyes becoming moist too…!!!!

Heer raised her face and looked at him sighing….as she heard him ask her….What should she tell him…..What…..??? she didn't knows why she was crying…….She didn't knew…..!!!! She grimaced looking at him not wanting to break in front of him

"Prem just go from here. Just leave me alone……" She told him…..

she was mad at herself for telling him all that…How could she tell him her inner turmoil she was going through…..How could she….???? she was herself shocked about what all she had told him…She didn't knew how did that happen…and what all went through her big mouth…..Did she meant it all…..How could she do that….How could she break herself down in front of her……!!!!! She buried herself again…crying slightly….telling him to leave her alone…!!!

Prem growled irritated…..she is telling him to leave….She is just so irritating….he sighed but how do I leave her like this….She would cry all night….i couldn't do that………..He held her and raised her face from the bed where she had buried it….holding her face in his palm cupping her face he asked her again…….!!!!!!!!

"Heer…….Please stop crying……..I am sorry…….But please tell me what did I do…I don't understand…..What I did…which made you cry….please tell me….please…..He nudged her to tell him….he was dying from inside to see her feeling so low….she was broken….and he didn't felt well…..HE didn't…He wanted to know what was going through her mind right now…..!!!!

Heer looked into his eyes he was asking her earnestly….She looked deep into his eyes getting lost in sincerity in them….she felt her heart flutter looking into his eyes….but she grimaced thinking what should she tell him…what…?? She didn't knew what he had done wrong as she herself doesn't knows why she blasted at him…..Yes she agrees that she didn't liked him dancing with Nikkie…which made her mad…….She was jealous with him…..She was….so she ran away….and when she saw him there coming to her she was too angry at him which made her tell him all that…..She was feeling all that…she told…but was he responsible for that….Was he….?? Yes he had Kissed her……but she too responded to it….he didn't forced her to do that….she responded to him in her own will…She was too angry and irritated at her feelings whichmade her to say that….She sighed….Telling him……!!!!!

She looked deep into his eyes and hugged him…..She collapsed into his chest hugging him tight……..She told him……"I don't know Prem……..I Just don't know what is happeining to me……I feel so strange…..i didn't knew why did I tell you all that…….Please forget that…….I don't know anything about that……I was just not in my senses……Leave it……Its not your Fault….I Don't know what is happening……."

Prem heard her saying that she didn't knew too what was happening….She too felt strange……He sighed……..But what is there between us……What…….??? Could it be possible that we both like eachother….he thought…..he sighed…..He made a decision to look into it….He feels something for her and seeing her reactions she too feels something……..yes she does……..other wise she wont react like that…..But how could it be possible we are so different so different………..!!!!!

"Okkkies……….so it wasn't my fault…..But why did you tell all that….why……???"

"I just don't know….i am feeling too strange these days….it all came through my mouth…….i didn't knew what I was telling……..So please don't talk about that leave it…..Plsss……." She sighed…..

"Okk……Now plss stop crying you don't look good crying like this…..so stop crying….." He was still cupping her face he raised his hands and wiped the tears coming out of her eyes…..He looked at her intently….She looks so beautiful….His heart always flutter when ever he looked at her……..She looks so nave and innocent…..so childish……Awww……She looks so cute…..so cute…..He felt it his heart jumped looking at her as he stopped crying…..tears dried…..She was also looking at him……..contently…..!!!!

"Yeah………….Like that…….." He rocked his palm into her chin resting on her nape of her neck….She was looking too beautiful how could one not like it…..How could one…….???

"Comeon now give me a smile…….." He nudged her patting her cheeks……making her to smile……..He looked at her as her lips curved slightly through edges…..she was smiling…..Awwww……He summer saulted looking at her……His heard flipped missing a beat…..seeing her smile through her tears…..Her smile touching her eyes…reaching their…..The glint appearing in her eyes shining due to the pearl of remaining tears in her eyes…..it made him flutter deep……She is too good…..How can she look so good…..!!!!

Heer looked at him……He looks so cute…..so handsome….She felt heat rise to her cheeks….as he was cupping her cheeks….she felt his hands on her eyes….her cheeks rubbing off the tears….shooo…shweet……Awwww………He isn't that bad…..!!!!!!.....she felt her heart flutter as she felt his hands brush the tears…..That same sensation……Why do I feel it always…why….??? What is this feeling I don't know but I like it….Yes I do……She was determined to know about this feeling……Does she really likes him…..How….??? They aren't friend also…..They always fight…..She chuckled or Kiss…..!!!!

"That's Like my Girl…………………Now don't cry……aab rona shone bandh…bahot ho gaya…..…..Heer have you noticed from the time we have met we both just fight with each other…..haan……We fought in the Plane……Then you slapped me……And….."

"Ohhhh…….Boyy………………So what would I do???….Haan…………..You kissed me their………Haan…….What do you expect from me…to welcome you….Kiss you….Hugg you….Haan……0!!!!" She glared…at him…..raising his fingers at him…warning him….

"Okkkkies…..I know…..I was sorry for that…..I didn't knew what happened there……You know it happens sometimes……" HE told her chuckling……

"Sorry huh…………..You kiss me and say sorry"…………..She glared at him….

"And look here you go again…You are again fighting with me,……It happens dear…….what could I do….you were hugging me and sleeping…….Haan…….What do you expect from a normal man….haan…….!!!!! "

"What it happens….Huh……??? It happens a lot with you Mr Khanna……Haan……" She teased him raising her eyebrows at him.….

"Hey don't tell me that………….Thats my dad…..Mr Khanna…..I am Prem………..The Prem Khanna……The hardcore Prem Khanna……" He told her his eyes brows crooked at her….raised…..Telling her not to say him that……

"I will say what I like haan…………SO don't tell me that Mr Hardcore Khanna……" She chuckled….at him……Laughing….getting up from the bed…..

"No………….Dont say that…………"He warned her………"I will kil you………"

"Aww.w……Mr Khanna……Just try you cant catch me……You just cant……" He ran after her as he ran teasing him…..He chased her catching her…..by her shoulder holding her close to him…..

"I Told you don't say that……..Cant you understand……Now I wont leave you….." HE begun tickling her holding her from her waist close to him feeling her touch….

"Awwww……Prem I am sorry ……Plsss…..Leave me don't do that….Plssss……" She was trying her best to do that…..to separate herself from his grip….she sighed at his strong grip……..She Shouted in pain………

"Awwwwwwww………….OOOOUChhhhhhhhh…………….."

Prem realized her hearing her cry….Did I hurt him….??? Then growled seeing her run away from his grip and showing him her thumbs…..Showing him…telling him that she fooled him…..She was giggling, laughing mocking at him…..Running to save her life….

Prem ran after her…..She was laughing…at him…Mocking him….by making fool of him…She messed with Prem Khanna he will show her…..He raised the hands of his shirt and cupped them upwards…and chased her to catch her……Seeing her laughing and giggling he felt too good……..

Heer looked at Prem chasing him….glaring at him…..Omgggg…..What did I do now,…….HE wont leave me….now……!!!!! She ran making him chase her to catch her…..She ran…just to collide with the bed making herself fall on the bed…looking at him coming close to her she was shocked……He was falling right on top of her……..

Prem saw her falling on the bed….before he could control he fell on top of her…..right on the top….Holding her close…….He looked deep into her eyes……She was laughing……His heart felt content….looking at her……She looks too shweet while laughing……She looks soo beautiful when her smile reaches her eys….when those diamond shaped eyes shines with the happiness and glint in them….He grinned in delight looking at her……feeling content…..His heart did skipped a beat……How wouldn't it…..She is looking so beautiful….!!!!!

They both looked deep into each other's eyes…..staring into them finding solace……Heer was also lost in his whirlpool of emotions in those eyes….of his….In the depth of those…..Pearls…..She was lost staring in them….Feeling good……..She was feeling heat arousing into her cheeks as she felt his hot breath on her cheeks……..She closed her eyes…..Her Lips parted in anticipation to receive his Lips to feel them……she parted them…..waiting…..

Prem looked deep into her eyes…..Looking at her parted lips he felt the desire to taste them…to catch them to capture them into his own manly lips….to feel them……He was yearning to hold her to kiss her……But something was stopping him…………Her innocence……He sighed…..NO I wont do it……..She was crying now because of her confused emotions….i wont make it worse for her……Even I don't know what is their between us……I couldn't do it…..He got up from her top…..Nudging her…..in process…..looking at her he smiled as she opened her eyes……..She frowned…..!!!!

Heer looked at him……Standing their smiling at her……Why didn't he kissed me now…….Why…..???? She sighed……What are you thinking Heer……Don't you know what happened now…..just minutes before in the lawn…….She sighed……….Looked at his hands……….waiting for her…………..!!!!!

"Friends…………………………………………" Prem asked her……..Does she wants to be her friend……………He would love to start the relationship with her………The Friendship………………………………………!!!!!

Heer smiled at him……..HE is a true gentlemen……..Awwwww……..HE sis ho…..shweeeeetttttttttt…………………….She looked at his hands….asking for her friendship…she raised her hands and gave it to him shaking it…….

They both smiled……………….It was the start of the new Relationship……………THE STAR T OF NEW FRIENDSHIP……………….WHERE WOULD IT TAKE THEM……………WILL THEY BE ABLE BECOME A TRUE FRIEND……..WILL THEIR FRIENDSHIP SURVIVE……………….WHAT WILL HAPPEN TO THAT HIDDEDN LOVE……………..THE LIKELYNESS……THEY HAD………………..WILL IT TURN INTO LOVE………………………WILL IT………………………..????????????

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Prem was lying on his bed thinking about what had happened at the Party…..He was happy in one way that she reacted that way….it did relaxed him from some confusion that he himself was in from the past few days.……. and he was also pleased as it lead them to become friend…..He smacked himself…What are you doing Prem…..??? Tujhe kya ho gaya hai…..Why do you think about her so much…recently….?? He frowned thinking about that….then chuckled…..and went on to sleep with a smile visible on his face……snuzzling closer to the bed….pulling over the comforter over his face….He slept smiling after the Big day…………!!!!

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Prem was standing in front of his dresser admiring himself…….He has got gotten out of shower…..topless….His well tonned chest displaying his well built physique…..His maleness….He smirked seeing his reflection in the mirror

"Prem you are just too hot…….How can these Indian girls resist you tonight…..Come on get on now to Blast upon these Indian girls"…….He chuckled…….He was going to Disco….That was his daily routine…..He always goes there for fun….Thats the fun as he can see all those chicks….Blondes admiring him, walking by him….chasing him….Drooling over him….and he loves that attention he uses to get from them…..He smirked ready to go…..He frowned as his cell rang……..He smiled seeing the name appearing on it…..

"Hey Dude……..Wass up haan……….??? After a long time haan….!!!! Where were you lost man…..You coming naa today……???" Prem asked on the phone….walking over to the wardrobe….taking out his Blue tugged jeans and designer teashirt he kept them on the bed and went to window….talking on the phone…

"Hey dude…..You know naaa….was just little caught up….Yeah Man I am on…..What about you huh……Got engaged haan…..??? How did you changed your mind haan….???who is that lucky girl who did this….Huh….changing Prem Khanna is the big job….Yaar……!!!!"

Prem sighed hearing his friend on the other end….He was his closest friend….He glared…..What engagement…..He was forced to do it…..Awww…..How much he hates to do it…..He growled….

"Angad……..!!!! Kaiki Engagement yaar…………..Its all just a game…." HE told him sighing……

"Game…………..!!!!" Prem did sensed the disbelief in his tone….he sighed…..no one will agree with them…..but he thinks that it is the best thing to do considering the situation he was in….They were in…..!!!!

"Yes a Game……!!!!" Prem told him stressing on the word Game….

"Prem what are you talking about…..??? Game…..??? Aren't you going to marry her……??? " HE asked confused at Prem….what was he telling…..How can he do that……….A game….He think marriage to be a game……!!!! How can he…..???

"Angad yaar……This is a big story…..Yeah I will be marrying her……I have to….." He told him sighing…

"What are you telling Prem……??? You are going to marry her and telling that it's a Game…..Haan….!!!!"

"Hey bro…….I will tell you all when we will meet……Now tell me something…..How are you dude…….??? What did she tell…..???" He asked him remembering what was troubling his friend for such a long time…..He asked him curious hoping that she would have agreed with him this time at least……He was trying it since along time……..!!!

"I am Fine yaar…………….." HE told him in heavy voice……

Prem sighed…..what is wrong with her……….Why doesn't she believes him…..Why…..?? Damn………." Kya yaar…….Thik hai……I can easily know it from your voice….How you are…..?? Didd you met with her…….??"

"Haan yaar………I Did met with her…….But what do I do……?? She doesn't listens to me….Not at all….." Prem growled hearing the rejected voice over of angad over the phone……He glared mentally….cursing her the Girl…..In his Life…..His Life…….His Love…………..Why cant she believe….him….she should listen to him atleast once……..Thats why I don't believe in this relationship….When relationship starts It causes troubles……It goes Hand in Hand…….Love and trouble….He growled…moving back to the dressert wearing his dress……getting ready…..!!!!

"What is wrong with Kripa…..Yaar……..!!!!............Why doesn't she listen to you for once……..How can she do this….??" Prem blazed on the phone….angry….his friend was asking her for forgiving him for the past 7 mths…..and she wasn't forgiving him….How can she do this…He was mad…..!!!!

"Prem…………..How can she forgive me yaar….?? You know naa…what I did to her…..it was so cheap…for me….I Broke her……completely…….How can she forgive me…….." Angad told Prem…….Prem sighed…..He loves her so much…He was waiting for her for these 7 mnts….He had tried everything…..Literally every damn thing to make her believe him….To forgive him……But she didn't Budge……How could she…….????

"Yeah………….I Know………..Dont tell any thing about your love girl….Yaa….i know it al….now don't start……" Prem chuckled cutting him off…..he knew him too well and that's what he liked in him….His friend…..

"You wont understand Prem……………You will do it when you will fall in Love…….!!!!!!!" Prem heard angad tell him that he will understand him what he is telling after he will fall in the trap…called Love……HE laughed……..Love…….??? HE will never fal in this Crap………….if it will give him life like him…..Never…….!!!!

"Okkk….Now meet me up…at 12 in Night life…..Haan……." Prem remimded him………"Will talk later………………….."

Prem sighed thinking about Angad and Kripa……How much he adored them they were apple of their gang………Why did this all happened……??? Why……??? He sighed………….They Loved each other so much……..Then why……???

He went up to the dresser gelling his hair getting ready to go to club……He saw Minnie entering his room…..He frowned… why did she came now…..????

"Hey Boyfriend….!!! I want to go for shopping……Comeon take me to Starling mall……….." Minnie ordered Prem to take her for shopping….Prem frowned thinking….Now what….???

"Minnie……I cant take you…!!! I am going to Disco….!!!! and why do you want to Shop haan……..i did take you there Yesterday…..What you want now….???" Prem asked her….How much does she wants to shop now….??

"Awww…….Bhaiya……Its your wedding Dear…….!!!!! Mujhe accha lagna hoga naa………..Tum toh Bandar lagoge……" She rolled her eyes……How irritating he is….!!!!

Prem glared at her….She is calling him Bandar….."Minnie….What did you tell me….Haan…..Bandar…..I wont leave you now….just wait…..!!!!" He ran after her trying to catch her……He saw her running in his room along way to his bed….…away from him……She ran out….of the Door….Prem glared at her as hesaw her standing at the door…and teasing him by showing her tongue….Minnie smirked……

"Prem…..are you taking me or not……….???" She asked him glaring…

"No……Never…………I am going to Disco…I want to waste my time with you there….." He told her glaring too….

"You wont……………..Then just wait and see what I will do now………I wont allow you too………."

Minnie growled and went away thinking what to do….??? He wont take me now…..If I cant go…I even wont let him go…..Yes I wont…..!!!!

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Prem was ruffling his hair after gelling it…spiking them….He chuckled…..He looks too Hot……They would not be able to resist him today…..Sudden voice disturbed him….he turned and then frowned seeing Lalit in front of him…….Now what…..??? His eyes followed the creature at the Door….She was leaning there Smirking at him…….He sighed………Omgggg…..What did she do now……??? Why cant she see me happy……???

"Prem……..!!!! Where are you going….??" Lalit asked him eyeing him curiously narrowing his eyes at him….observing his activity….He moved towards him seeing him looking at him confusingly……!!!

"Dad…..I am going out with ma Friends…….." He told him….looking at him coming towards him….He sighed what does he want…..???

" Are you going to Disco Prem…….???" Lalit narrowed his eyes at Prem looking at him…Prem growled……This Minnie….!!! I wont leave her…..!!!!

"Yes dad………………..Angad is back….I am going to meet up with him there….."

"What did I tell you Prem……….Now no Discos…..and No clubs…..So you are not going to discos……Huh….???"

"What dad…………?? This isn't fare………I want to go…..I cant sit here all day……I get bored……….Here….."

"So what……??? You are getting married in this week and you are going to that damn discos….Haan….to Dance with those damn…useless girl and then you will come home…with them haan……This isn't Done…..You will not go……Not atall…..!!!!!!!!!!" Lalit told him galring….

"Dad……….Whats the problem if I go….haan…I get bored here……."

Minnie saw him trying to get past Lalit…..Trying to make him agree…she wont let it….He gets bored….Haan…..??? I will not let him get bored……She thought something and then chuckled….this would be good….Too Good……Minnie you are just Damn Good……..!!!! Minnie went to Lalit and whispered something in his ears…..Hearing which Lalit chuckled……He admired Minnie he is just too good…..Then he looked at Prem and went towards him….narrowing his eyes at him….

"You are getting bored haan……!!!! I will tell you what to do then….Yeah….Go out with Heer……Take her on a date….!!! It would be good for you both to get to know each other better….it would help you….in future….!!! You both are getting married soon and you haven't spent time with her so use this time for wellbeing of your future…It would be better….You wont get bored too…"

Prem was shocked hearing what Lalit had told him…..He wants me to take Heer on a date……….Omggg…..This isn't done…..as much I try to run away from her……She just gets stick to me as a glue…..What is happening…..I wont take her out…..No……Not now…..Not ever……!!!!! How can I ….??? I just made friendship with her yesterday…and now how can I ask her for a date…..How….??? Omgggg…….This is just bad…….He collected himself from the shock and glared at Minnie smiling at him………..What has she done……??? How can she do this….???

"Dad………….I wont go on a date with her…….I just cant………" He told Lalit….

"What……??? Why don't you want to go on a date with her haan…..??? it is for your wellbeing……..I wont listen anything comeon call her and ask her for date……" Lalit galred at him….How can he tell that he don't want to go on date with her……..She is going to be his wife…..soon….I wont let this happen…..He has to go….

"Dad……………I will not go……I cant take her out….." Prem growled at Lalit how can he force him……..

"Prem get this into your bloody head…….You have to go with her…..and that's final and now call her……I don't want to hear anything……" Prem sighed……How can he force me like this…….

"But dad…………She is just irritating……We cant talk to each other for a second…..We just fight….What will I do on a date…..It would be too embarrassing……for us……We cant spend so much time with eachother…….I cant take that irritating chipkali on the Date……Why cant she leave me alone for a second……Damn……!!!!" Prem outbursted at Lalit not thinking about what he was telling him….He sighed after seeing Lalit galring at him……Omggg……What did I tld him now……..!!!!

Lalit giggled looking at him…….He looks too irritated…..How will they spent lifetime with eachother……if he cant spend a moment….with her…….He heard him saying chipkali……..He first chuckled inwardly controlling his laughter….'Chipkali…….' That's funny…….!!!! But that doesn't suits her……She is so Nave…innoscent…….He glared….How can he say her chipkali…..

"Control your mouth Prem……….I don't ant to hear anything…..You are going on a date…and that's final………If you cant spend sometime with her how will you spend your entire life with her…….???"

"Who wants to spend it…………we will get sepe………." He stopped himself……smaking his head mentally…telling himself to get some grip…..what was he telling there…….How can he do that……..They will all know about it……He looked at them…….Lalit….He saw afrown on his face…..visible…getting scared…….Did he heard it……Ommggg….Prem……!!!

"What did you say….You wil……." Lalit narrowed his eyes at him……

Prem looked at Minnie she was also looking at him intently…..omggg….i hope she wouldn't have heard it….not at al……She wont leave me alive if she did……She will definitely get it out from me……What should I do…..?? He heard Lalit asking him he sighed….he has to do it now…….!!!!!

"I told…….That…..I will go with her…..okkk…………….." Lalit frowned…..He was telling something else…then he let it go…hearing that he was ready to take her on date that's good……………….!!!!

"Comeon call her……………"

"Yeah I will do it…………!!!!"

Prem saw Lalit going out…….He glared at Minnie as she entered his room…..walking over to Prem Minnie puts one hands on his shoulder and smirks at him…….

"How was that Boyfriend…..It was good naa…….Now you will have to take her out……Bye bye….to disco……!!!!"

"Minnie……I will kill you literally…for what you did??…….But what to do…He sighed…she is his little girl…….I just cant do it…..I love you so much……but I wont leave you this time…..……." Prem caught hold of her and started to tickle her…..She is too ticklish……He looks at her laughing hard…kicking him…..rolling onto the bed as he put her on the bed…….

"Bhaiya…..Plsss…leave me…plssss…….."

"I wont…dear…..why did you do that….??"

Minnie tried her best to get out of his hold kicking him but he was not letting her go…tickling her hard……she was rolling laughing madly…..Hahahahha…….

"Its not my fault….Hahaha…..its your fault…Hahaha…..Aaahhhh…..Prem plss leave me………hahah…..why didn't you took me on Shooping haan……." She told him why she did it…..

Prem sighed…..She is just too bad………He wont leave her so easily…this time…he tickled her more….." Awww…..Prem plss leave me…I wont do it next time…plsss…….."

Prem looked at her……and left her….."You better not………..!!!! I will take you shopping later….."

"Aww…….You are so cuteee…….Bhai…….I just love ya……..I will get the reservation done…………."

Minnie ran out of the room……..going to Ash……highfying with her…….She was the master piece in this it was her idea……..!!!!!

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Mus@

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Posted: 16 years ago

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yeah i am the first one posting comment 😃 and now for the update u r a brilliant,excellent and and and i don't have words to describe how wonderful writer u r⭐️ ,the way u describe heer and prem emotions were outstanding ,i just loved every part of the update 😊

update soon waiting desperatly for ur next update😃

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poonam

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Posted: 16 years ago

#666

hey
wow that was awesome update
loved it
*claps*

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Nikita

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Posted: 16 years ago

#667

hey, i was waiting for a while, but it was worth it!

amazing update. i loved the feelings and thoughts you put in for Heer and Prem.

aw Angad and Kripa are in here.. so cute.

Minnie and Ash are halarious..they will do any thing to get on Prem's Nerves..lol

cant wait for the date between Prem and Heer...!!!

update wen u get a chance...

take care, and keep smiling,

~nikki😳😊😃

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Sarah

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Posted: 16 years ago

#668

Hey Rohit...it was a great and awesome update...was waiting for it for long.......
Loved how portrayed Prem and Heer's feelings and emotions...simply outstanding
Minnie she is sooo cute...she got a habit of irritating prem and teasing him
Can't wait for Prem-Heer Date 😍 😍
waiting for the next update

Sarah