Fatal Game of Marriage~*Pt 20 Pg 93 20/7*~ - Page 56

Originally posted by: purplestar22

awesome update...glad we can see the past now!!Update soon

Originally posted by: Mus@

it is very ggggggggggooooooddddddddddd but please don't seperate premeer😭,don't make heer marry that devil sahill,pleaseee😭.

It is very good love the part when heer was jealous😃,u r a very good writer.😊

Rohit i told my self i wlll comment on that Mayur ones ... but just read that chapter when Heer sees preem in hospital ... yaar u made me cry again ..😭😭. thank God not in office but at home right now ... the scene where preem , heer and child connect was beyond words completely and totally beautiful , tears r running from my eyes as i write this .😭.. Rohit till yet from all the chapters and all the fan fics i have ever read including yours ... this hospital scene ss The best 👏👏👏great going ...👏
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this scene did something to my heart :🥺

His Heart was Feeling it…His Blood…His Heart felt the Bond..True Bond of Love…His Hands moved….Moved for the First time…Rocking away Heers Hands…lying on his arm …IT went to touch her bulge…The Life..His Blood…His Unborn..Child..His Heart felt the contact…His heart started to beat…He was back back to life…

Heer Felt the movement of his hands touching her bulge…She smiled…He was Back…He has to come…He cant leave me…She lifted her head to see his hands still on the Bulge…she thanked her child…He saved him…

Prem's heart Felt the movement…Of the child…He Kicked…The child Kicked..First time…feeling his Father's warmth…Prem's heart skipped…in joy…His heart began to beat beat to life…The Machines..Attached..That monitor the heartbeat…beaped…He was Backkk…. 👏

👏 marvelous , awe-inspiring 👏 &

👏 overwhelming 👏

loved it thnks =)

luv

anni