Fatal Game of Marriage~*Pt 20 Pg 93 20/7*~

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Reema

@Reemz93

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Posted: 16 years ago

#571

hey hun!

gr8 upd8! luvin the way prem carried her all the way down even with heer's resistance...lol...ah and of course heer shuda known jus 2 giv in earlier, she wud've had longer to enjoy bein in his arms that way, not that she doesnt get there often enough neway...*ahemahem*...lol

i see anjali n harman's relationship startin 2 blossom but seriously, they cant tell that its more than just a crush...they're all bullheaded, they jus cant C when someone is meant 4 them...lol

upd8 soon hun! w8in eagerly...

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Nikita

@HCDeewani

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Posted: 16 years ago

#572

hey!!!

thanx fot the Pm Rohit!!

man that was some update, too good! mindblowing,

i just got to read the update, and it is superb...

i loved how Prem carried Heer all the way down to show the Khanna guts! Go Prem! and i loved Heer's repelled actions towards Prem..very nicely written.

also one thing i love about reading FF, is because u put in wat the characters think, wat they feel in each situation created. Prem and Heer's reactions, emotions, were super! Rohit the more i say, the less its gonna be.. im speechless.....

i also would like to add... I hate NIKKIE😡!!! lol, but really she is a pain!

and i like how ur progressing Anjali, and Harmans story too.. very nice mix.

loved the update Rohit!

keep it up, and take care till then..

~nikki😳😃😊

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Kinza

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Posted: 16 years ago

#573

hey rohit...thanks for the pm...prem is too good and heer is just hilarious...she is so attracted to him and she tries to escape from her feelings bt in the end she'll hae to accept the truth...that nikki is a no.1 b**** and many other things that im thinking but cant type cos they're against IF rules...i personally wanna kill her...piece of s***...that's what she is...the ending was great with anjali and harman...atleast harman accepted his love...hes the only smart one...the others r too confused like anjali or plain stupid like prem and heer lol....cont soon

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im_charmed

@im_charmed

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Posted: 16 years ago

#574

hey.
awesome update as usual. like the progress between Anjali and Harman. Prem and Heer are hilarious,, they're trying soo hard to deny what they really feel for each other. hope they accept it soon.
please update soon

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Rohit86

@Rohit86

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Posted: 16 years ago

#575

Thanks for comment guys...will update soon

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sweetness4eva

@sweetness4eva

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Posted: 16 years ago

#576

Heyy, I just read your entire fan fiction in the past night!! it was awesome!1 it shows somewhat of an eternal lovestory here too!!1 Please let heer tell prem that she s ot married to sahil? i mean PleasE? I dont want them to have any misunderstandings? When he wakes up let him know she s not married and the kid is his?!? thanks!!!!!!!!!!!

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sonu

@sonu0511

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Posted: 16 years ago

#577

hey 15 part was great...awesome...

loved premheer ....

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Rohit86

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Posted: 16 years ago

#578

Originally posted by: pragz1994
*reserved*

Yup..m waiitng...!!!😉😆

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Rohit86

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Posted: 16 years ago

#579

Originally posted by: bd670816
hey awesome update.loved each and every part of it.
cont.soon.

Thanks for the comment dear, i am glad that you like it😉

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Rohit86

@Rohit86

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Posted: 16 years ago

#580

Originally posted by: Iqra238
Hi there Rohit!

I am extremely sorry for being late! And I just caught up with your ff! You are doing an Awsome job with it ! I still can't get over the fact that Heer told everyone that the unborn one is Sahil's child!!

Hey no need to be sorry dear, i am glad that you like it dear.
Yeah she did tell all that.

Yet, I seriously don't know how to react. Especially after reading that Prem is back from the dead's. Now I can't wait to know about Prem's reaction when he figures out Heer's lie! You know I just love the way you combined the past and the present! But right now I like the past more.

I am glad that you like it dear, Yeah even ilike Past more. you will know about it soon😉

Since its more interesting by all the name calling😆😆!! Htmm.. why don't they just admit hat they are attracted to each other?

Yeah they are just ignoring it...!!!

Like all they are doing is denying that fact! Gosh!! You really have to do something to make them realize they are falling in love..well..more of an attachment of attraction!

IWill do it but not now...😆😉

A big thanks to you for all the PM's! Will be waiting for the next one! Continue soon!

~Iqra