[FF]~** Dor**~ (PART 26 updated- Pg:39 june 26th) - Page 17

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Posted: 16 years ago
OKKK so as i said that if u i get time i will update sooner and apparently i did have time...... so i was able to write the update so here i goes...
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DOR (PART-20)

Heer's hands clenched the front of his shirt and tears started rolling down her cheeks, her hiccups were just too much for prem to bear but at this point all he could have done was tighten his grip around her and give her the reassurance that he was always there for her.................. when her sobs subsided she moved away a bit only her face to be cupped by his hands....... he lifted her face up wiping her tears by the gentle movement of his thumps.... he wanted her to look into his eyes and she did give in to his wants only to find that they were filled with love for her..... they were filled with respect.... the warmth that they portrayed seemed unparallel... at this moment all her fears were at bay now that she knew he was there for her..... There were no words spoken their eyes were enough to do the job..... Prem drew her closer to him and with no warning he placed a kiss on her lips it was more sort of a brush.... but that one touch was enough to arouse all the desires that heer had dormant in her heart........ she closed her eyes and that was enough of a gesture for him to indulge more deeply into it his lips soft yet firm against hers..... His one hand going around her waist touching her bare skin and the other on part of her cheek and neck.... she couldn't resist it either and returned his kiss with full passion..... her one hand resting on his chest and the other playing with his hair at the back of his head.... it seemed eternity when they broke apart their heads leaning against each other... prem smiled at her which was returned by Heer lowering her eyes.....

"promise me something...." she said in a low voice

"what"

"never ever leave me Prem I don't know what i will do without you?"

"don't ever say that again i came into your life not to leave you but to be with you all throughout"

This was enough for Heer to throw herself onto him to hug him, she had no doubts in her mind that their love can go only from strength to strength from here on... the unwavering faith that Prem bestowed upon her was the most precious thing she had and she would never let it go...

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'how can he do that....... how can that bas***d cum into our house and do such a thing...." Preet was pacing up and down in his room.... and stopped only to see Meher smiling at her calmly....

'tum aise samay mein muskura kaise sakti ho, she is your sister"

"i know but i have no anger left because i guess you have shown both our annoyance by turning this room into a junk yard"

Preet looked around and wad shocked to see the condition of the room.... the night lamp was lying on the floor the books were all around the place vass broken....

Preet now looked with a pathetic face towards meher "meher dekho i am really very sorry...... mera wo matlab nahi tha...'

'haan preet tumhara to kabhi ye matlab nahi hota hai na...waise main tumhari roz ki harkaton se kam pareshan thi jo tumne aaj sone pe suhaga kar diya'

'I can bear the wet towel lying around, I can square up your clothes, i can find your watch and wallet for you....... but this preet..... how am i gonna clean all this...."

'meher i m sooo sorry i will do it for you i promise..'

'no its ok i will manage... i dunt want u to destroy anymore things ok......'

'no need Preet its ok.....' she started to pick up things from the floor..... when she was swung by one hand towards Preet and she was so close that she could feel him breathing upon her....... Preet looked into her eyes and said 'when i said i will do it i will do it you don't need to worry about it' and he patted he on the cheek oblivious to turmoil that was going on inside her.. she had been feeling for quite some time now and it was becoming hard to resist the urge to tell him because she didn't know whether Ashlesha still held that special place in his heart.......... this was the only fear that was not letting her confess her feeling to her own husband..... the fear of rejection the fear that preet might break the bond of friendship that they shared and this bond was the only hope that would make him realize that how much she loved him.....

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ok so this is it for now..... I hope u guyzzz liked it....😉...

read and comment as it means a lot....

njoyyyyyyy......... next update i m not sure wen i will do cua i have my exams cumin up however i will make up to u guyzz by 3 updated back to back if i m away for a long time........

luv

-iksha

Edited by gr8ronny - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesomeeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part loved it waitinggggggggg for next asap.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sweta2005

awesomeeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part loved it waitinggggggggg for next asap.


thank u soo much sweta
luv
-iksha

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Posted: 16 years ago
bhangda!!!!
You know what !?!??! I going to use bhangda everytime i reserve for you!!! That way you'll know first thing it's me!!! 😆
Aw, poor Heer!!! Don't cry!!!!!! .................. ok wow for the next part totally!!!!! It was so...... passionate, respectful, desirable and sensual at the same time!!! It was love completely and not lust for me!!! I really like that you captured that so well, because not a lot of people can capture that and present it so appropriately *thumbs up* 👏!!!!!!!!!
Don't worry Heer!!!!! Prem will never leave you!!! Premeer are awlays meant to be one!!!!!!
Ok, obviosly Preet is mad!!!!!! It is so natural how Meher handled him!!! Like a child waiting for her son to stop and then bring some sense into him!!!! 😆 Ratpal can go to hell for all i care and hopefully never come back *hint hint*!!!!! 😉😆
I hope you have a seen with Veera where she finally realizes her mistake *though i have very low hopes for her*!!!!!!!!!!!! 😆 Oh, Meher is obviosly starting to feel something something!!!!! *doing a little jig* I hope there will be more future Meet scenes!!!!! By the way, what happened to Ash in this story !?!?!?
Great update yaar and i hope the next one comes soon as well!!!!!
Edited by blackdaughter - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Awesome update.Premeer scene was soooo good.
Update soon!!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: blackdaughter

bhangda!!!!

You know what !?!??! I going to use bhangda everytime i reserve for you!!! That way you'll know first thing it's me!!! 😆lol maddy for sure u can use that hahaah
Aw, poor Heer!!! Don't cry!!!!!! .................. ok wow for the next part totally!!!!! It was so...... passionate, respectful, desirable and sensual at the same time!!! It was love completely and not lust for me!!! I really like that you captured that so well, because not a lot of people can capture that and present it so appropriately *thumbs up* 👏!!!!!!!!! thank you soo much...... i am glad u liked it and it did convey the nsg in the right light..... i think prem and heer are far far away form lust......... they are toally in love and plus they are one....... their oneess is their uniqueness.......... i juts love them........
Don't worry Heer!!!!! Prem will never leave you!!! Premeer are awlays meant to be one!!!!!! exactly and i m glad that even the creatives have realized that thats y we are gettin such wonderful episodes.......
Ok, obviosly Preet is mad!!!!!! It is so natural how Meher handled him!!! Like a child waiting for her son to stop and then bring some sense into him!!!! 😆 Ratpal can go to hell for all i care and hopefully never come back *hint hint*!!!!! 😉😆 lol i will surely take that hint form you😉😉....... and yes i likde meher and i like the way she is always involved with preet in all the pranks and everything........ but she does handles him well at times........
I hope you have a seen with Veera where she finally realizes her mistake *though i have very low hopes for her*!!!!!!!!!!!! 😆 Oh, Meher is obviosly starting to feel something something!!!!! *doing a little jig* I hope there will be more future Meet scenes!!!!! By the way, what happened to Ash in this story !?!?!? ohh dutn worry you will soon get to kno where ash has been......... but lemme assure you that she wont b evil anymore so u have sumthin to b happy about 😉😊😊
Great update yaar and i hope the next one comes soon as well!!!!! thanks you soo much dear its always a pleasure goin thru your comments!!!!!!!

luv
-iksha

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: purplestar22

Awesome update.Premeer scene was soooo good.

Update soon!!


thansk a lot........
glad u liked it.......
luv
-iksha
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Posted: 16 years ago

wow...beautiful.😳😳😳premeer scene.meet scene is luvvvvvvely😛....waitinhg for nxt continue asap.

all the best👍🏼 for ur exams

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Posted: 16 years ago
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veera was feeling genuinely sorry for what she had done..... nihaal cums in "veera, ye sab tumne kyun kiya...... how can u doubt heer she is the same person who had left no stone unturned so that u dunt feel that ur marraige wasnt happening on a grand scale....... why dunt u understand veera all of us from prem to heer to preet to me all of us all of us luv you care for u............ for once try to reciprocate to others with luv god damnit"

veera " i am sorry nihaal i kno that wat i did was wrong but then wat could i have dun i luved that man and seeing heer like that in the picture was too much for me to bear afterall she is my brother's wife....."

nihaal " veera listen and listen carefully i dunt think that u can ever understand the true meaning of the word called love..... and now if u ever do any such thing in future then i m sorry to say that would probably willl b the last day for our relationship"

veer : 'but nihaall......."
nihaal leaves from there......

veera was for once feeling something that she thought she was never feel......... she was actually feeling bad to upset nihaal in such a way...... there was something saddening about the thought that nihaal would leave her....... she didnt kno why was she feeling that when she herself was not happy with this relationship.......
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"preet preet.......... tum kahaan ho" meher was finding preet in the whole house but she coudnt....... after searching him for may b half an hour she gave up and went to her room and to her surprise the room wasnt a mess anymore it was as perfect as it could be....... and there was yet another surprise for her...... preet was standing there in a black tuxedo and meher was all bowled over by the way he was looking at her....... her heart skipped a beat when he came near her... there was something different about him today..... somethimg that she was not able to understand...... while she was still looking at him he came so near his nose was almost touching hers........
" is there something u wanaa say...." he said in a husky voice eyeing her lips.....
"mmm... no nuthin i.. i just wanted to say that are you goin sumwhere?? "
preet turned around and meher closed her eyes relieved of the fact that finally the knot in her stomach loosened a bit ...... because she was having hard time fighting the urge to hug him or may b KISS him!!!!!!!

"actully we both are goin out "
"goin out but preet there are so many thingd to b done..... dutn u kno we have marriage in the house tomoro..... i have to arrange for heer di's dress......... go to the market with maa to get gifts for everyone..... decorate their room..... "
preet puts his hand on her mouth......

"its about time meher........" he said in the husky voice and tucked her hair behind her ears.......
" get ready meher we are going i will b waiting for you downstairs"
"but preet"
"get ready meher and i bought u sumthin please do have look at that" he gestured towards something that was lying on the bed.....

meher was all confused about what was happenin..." its about time...... about time for what??' but then she waved away that thought thinking that may b this is another preet's prank which she is not goin to fall for "zaroor kuch na kuch ajeeb hi hoga in gift mein.... ye preet bhi naaa"
but to her surprise there was a beautiful white saree with pink shades in it and a beautiful peace a matching jewellary which was just perfect to wear with that piece of clothing.........
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"prem tumhe nahi lagta ki ab humein chalna chahiye" both prem and heer were sitting on the swing with prems back supported by the side of the swing and heer was sittin in his arms with her back facing him and his head on her shoulder........ his hands encircling her waist from behind and their legs streached out on through the lenght of the swing......
prem lovingly brought his hands on her forehead and caressed her hair.....
" i think we can stay here for some more time.... dutn u think so" and he placed a kiss on the back of her neck.....
"prem stop it i think we should go now otherwise sum or the other will cum to kno that we are here and we have our marriage tomorrow prem...."
"really we do!!!. do we?? but i thought we were already married weren't we " prem teased her nudging her cheek with his nose......"
"prem....... tum bhi naa" heer said shyly
"main bhi na kya....... u r my wife and i dutn think that any1 should have problem with us i have the right to luv u..... u are my wife....."
" prem please........"
"what please........ i dutn have the right to luv u!!!!!"
" no i didnt mean that........"
" then..... no no tell me what did u mean "
" nuthin....... i m sorry" and she made a sad face.....
and prem eying her lovingly from the side of his eyes and enjoying the tension in her expression and voice and smiling to himself.........
then he tightened his grip around her and gave her a sweet hugg from behind.............. "ohh heer you are so adorable" and he rested his head on her shoulder rubbing his nose against her ear and placing a light kiss on the side of her cheek.... which brought a beautiful smile on her face and she sank a little bit more in his arms........

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@ sweta: sorry dear i couldnt update early but here u gooo njoyyy!!!

ok guyzz thats it fro now see u guyzz tomoro.......... hope u will like it........ and sorry for not being to update it for soo long kya karoon exams the................

do coment or criticize!!!!!!!
byeeee🤗
luv
-iksha



Edited by gr8ronny - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesomeeeeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitingggggggg for next asap.

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