FF: Hostage [NOTE- page 34] *discontinued* - Page 11

Me no like Ranvir. He seems nice enough but still. And yes someone's going to sweep her off her feet. Prem! Literally, when he kidnaps her. I wanna get kidnapped if the kidnapper is Prem. Why does Heer have to be so lucky?

Originally posted by: blue_girl

Reserved

hi.......thanks for the pm

awesome part.........heer being a hostage

i hope her dad save her

cntn soon

Originally posted by: ~nikki1992~

hey, thank you for the PM. a very lovely update. cant wait for the next...... update soon, and yay ur Eaxams r done!!!!! its time to Party🥳. my exams will be done today.

anyway, take care,

~nikki

Originally posted by: Anhdara13

MIne! *waves* Hi NJKSM! Am hyper, though I shouldn't be, it's the middle of the night, but your line got me laughing and now I'm going to have trouble sleeping! "Like no where do you see "get picked up by random, angry, young man" on the list." *giggles* Angry, young man. Reminded me of JWM, and I can so picture Prem like that *laughs* Sorry, will be back to edit this properly.

*waves* HEY NJKB!😃Ohh it's ok you prbably can't stop thinking about your plane-gora-waala😆Aww yea that's where I got the line from, I think it sorta suits Prem in this fic...glad you liked it so much....maybe a lil too much😆

*edited*

Lucky you, I'm not so hyper anymore! 😆 Need I tell you that I want more? No? Okay, so I won't! (alrighty, I may be a little, teensy, weensy bit hyper. But not much! *smiles winningly in hopes of convincing Shabz*)

Yea yea yea....*waves hands* Whatever...hmm longer parts?? Yea I know they are so short, I hope i can make them longer with time, just that I am not really sure what I wanna do with this fic just yet...😊

Okay, so Ranvir, is he important? Does he like Heer as more of a friend? If he does can I kill him? No? *sigh* He sounds like a good friend though, so maybe I'll let you keep him. 😃 Like the way you portrayed the friendship. Very sweet.

No he does not like Heer....maybe. I told you I don't know, but for now he is just a lovable friend😉 Aww thank you! I think this is like the SRK-Kajol chem in KKHH😆

Oooh, Prem's kidnapped her! Yay! Erm, I mean, oh no what's going to happen now? *pauses* Anybody convinced about how much I dispair at the turn the story has taken? Yeah, I didn't think so.. 😆 Love the fact that she say the eyes. *sigh* The eyes have it don't they?

LMAO, you are celebrating at a poor girl gettting picked up...tsk tsk tsk....lmao, aha Prem's eyes are just he FIRST and the most IMPORTANT thing...wait..maybe the hair....cheeks....lips.....jawline?

So, nothing else to say. Except, no my laptop is not up and running yet, I'm using my dad's. 😃

Awwww soon....soon *crosses fingers*

Love,

Radz

Originally posted by: Pyari_Zahra

Ooh, Thanks or the PM!! Sorry I couldn't reply to the first part but loved it. I loved how you portrayed Prem's despair at not being able to save his brother, the pain at seeing his mother's condition, and his reflection on himself and his life. I absolutely adored it, great way to start- I totally understand why he has to resort to kidnapping! Obviously his 'victim' is Heer right?? I'm sure he will take good care of her 😉 But I can't wait to see how it all unfolds!!
No problem Zahra! Take your time in comments! I have no problem 😉 Awww your comments are so sweet!!😃Thanks os much ....hmm let's see how he takes care of her...I'm trying ot decide if I wanna make that comicish or more intense....😆

Part two was just too good!! This girl seems very pampered, but isn't coming across as a spoilt rich kid yet. Oooh Ranvir- I would like to think that this is Ranvir from Bidaai (Kinshuk Mahajan)- I love him to bits at the moment and I will have that image in my head, no matter what anyone else thinks, lol!! But yeah, a great friendship you have shown between the two. Does Ranvir see himself as her 'Prince Charming'??- I guess you will show us that sooner or later!! But I loved the ending, especially Heer being lost in Prem's chocolate brown eyes- sounds so dreamy!! Can totally imagine his smirk, would have been so cute!! And the one line that he spoke was just so funny and cute- 'Relax' LOL!!!! Anyway, can't wait until the next part, I'm sure it will be great!! Love Zahra xx
Aww thank you!! Ohh isn't he HOT?☺️Well I'll revel who he is the next part, don't wanna just ruin it yet, don't really no what the point is, but still 😆 Hmm no as of now Ranvir and Heer are just best friends, but akir, Pyar Dosti Hai naa?😉😆LMAO, i can just see you swonning =] Glad you liked it and thanks Zahra! 😃😃

Originally posted by: Ghia

hey
that was fantastic...now heer is in trouble. Hope she is ok and her dad does follow his orders. cant wait to read more...update soon 😃

Originally posted by: Intellienough

wow Our prem a kidnapper.....good good .Amazing.A diff story.Cant wait .update the 3rd part soon

Originally posted by: indiandoll89

mine! 😛

Aww Heer and Ranvir's friendship reminds me of srk-kadz in KKHH!😃 He hasn't found "her"😆😆I KNEW YOU WOULD PICK THIS UP! That's what I tried to do...😆

Tee hee, I liked the diet coke part!😆😆😆 sounds like every other girl!😉LOL, you know it's true :P

Eeee what a way to be kidnapped, I kinda feel bad for her, but she did get "sweeped" off her feet right?😉😳😃 that should certainly mean something!😉😆😆OMG MEERA I LOVE YOU!🤗You always pick out the things no one else notices, but hte points I want people to notice!

I loved it Shabz, as usual I'm not going to try to guess who Ranvir is....I can't wait for you to tell us though!😆 As for the staring contest comment...loved it!😉😆 Ravs shud try it!😆😆😆Hmm yea when i post my next part I'll tell ya'll! Hmmm I know she should, becharii....*whispers* Denial...

Anyways continue superly soon!😛
Will try!😃

Love you,

Meera😳

Originally posted by: bd670816

hi, i read ur ff now.awesome. cont.soon.