FF: Hostage [NOTE- page 34] *discontinued* - Page 12

Originally posted by: rag-ran4ever

That was very intresting...i like it..please update soon

Originally posted by: miss_hyper

lovely update shabs...i bet that hes prem...loved it cnt w8 for the next part

Originally posted by: sadizzle

hey!

great update!
So can't wait to read ahead..BUT one problem i have no idea of what you mean by the "phhandooh thread" what is that?

overall very good update...lol..prem's last line was so cute! haha..

thanx

-Sadi*

Originally posted by: .xganga.x

Hey!

That was an awesome update!

Im guessing the kidnapper was Prem!

Can't wait till the next update!

Thanks for the PM!

xXx

Sunayna

= ]

Originally posted by: srklover93

OMG shabzzz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG garz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

That was an awesome part!!! omg...I bet the kidnapper is Prem!! AAAHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! someone stole Heer!!! Now what??? LOLStole Heer?🤣🤣🤣Ahh that's too jokes!

Ohhhh...whose this Ranvir??? are u talking bout the one from bidaai? or another one...hmmmm....idk...guess i'll hve to find out about him in ur next update!! Yup, I shall tell soon! hehehe....but this one was fantastic...i love heer's thoughts their hilarious...even when she was getting kidnapped!! lmao!!! hahah..oooohhh..she got in an eyelock with the kidnapper?? LOL this is going to be really interesting!! cant wait to read more!!!
aha yup Heer is a lil different shall we say? 😆 hmm eyelock toh hona tha :P:P Thanks Garz, will update soon! 😃😛

bye
luv
Gari =D

Originally posted by: pooji123456789

awesum update
heer hostage
wonder what will happen next
thanks for pm

Originally posted by: ravioli_11

Me no like Ranvir. He seems nice enough but still. And yes someone's going to sweep her off her feet. Prem! Literally, when he kidnaps her. I wanna get kidnapped if the kidnapper is Prem. Why does Heer have to be so lucky?Aww no you don;t?? Hmm well I like him 😃 dw, I don't plan to bring him between him....yet.😆Ohh lucky se yaad aya..."lucky boy..."*dances* Oh wait...Heer is a girl, so I guess that doesn't work that well does it? 😉

I liked that part Like no where do you see "get picked up by random, angry, young man" on the list. It might not be on hers but it is on mine. Depending who the guy is😉 I loved how Prem was so sneaky about it and all. First kidnapping and he did it so well too. Right now she's thinking about his eyes. Wonder what'll happen when she actually sees his face.*cough*RATPAL*cough*😉😉Code words😉Hmm yea so far I havent written that yet, I'm thinking intese, slap or filmy? What should I do?

Ooh who's Ranvir? I wanna know!! For some reason Saif comes to mind cuz his name was Ranvir in Tara rum Pum. And he was a compulsive driver...Ohh no its not him, I don't like Saif, he was ok before...but now...he is old.😆

I dunno what you're hinting at Shabo Neither do I. *angel smile*

Originally posted by: sonalkhullar

heyyy bachha..

shoooo srri...4 de late comment..

n dunt wrrii..i DID get ur pm..was just bizi wid a few things...
Aww di np, I know u were busy!😆
hmm thank god for that!😉😃

OMG....y cant it b MY ranbir kapoor...n i b the *HER* he is luking 4...☺️☺️

but..lets c who this hunk...i bet ya nuthin better than mine...😉
awww no sorry di, no ranbir kappor...but yesh you have fun imaginign that :P:P
aha I dunno i think its pretty close...but i know ur ranbir can do the towel dance MUCH better🤣

neways...cuming 2 de part...

luved it...

cant wait 2 c wats gonna happen next...

hope itss sumthin really really exciting...sumthin unexpected..

would luv dat...
Aww thanks os much didi! 😊
Hmm i dunt no about exciting...i havent written it yet...but hopefully
*crosses fingers*

man..continue soon baccha...

wanna read more ASAP..LLOL...
will do will do ....
hopefully this week...just for u 😉

nehow..

take care..

luv yaa..

sonal 😛

thanks di!!😃

Originally posted by: shabo24

Originally posted by: shabo24

Originally posted by: sonu0511

hey add me to your pm list...

read yr ff today n loved it...

Originally posted by: indiandoll89

mine! 😛

Aww Heer and Ranvir's friendship reminds me of srk-kadz in KKHH!😃 He hasn't found "her"😆😆I KNEW YOU WOULD PICK THIS UP! That's what I tried to do...😆 I had to!😆😆😆 It's a thing only crazy srk fans like us would realize!😆DITTO! We love SRK too much...

Eeee what a way to be kidnapped, I kinda feel bad for her, but she did get "sweeped" off her feet right?😉😳😃 that should certainly mean something!😉😆😆OMG MEERA I LOVE YOU!🤗You always pick out the things no one else notices, but hte points I want people to notice!Teee hee, I love you too Shabo!😃😃😃🤗 But it's so good and snuck in, the poor people don't get it!😆😆😆LMAO, but still maybe I should make it a lil more obvious🤔

Originally posted by: shabo24