Oh My Lord ... Ash had slept with Harman ... so Preet didn't sleep with Ash ... phew! now i just hope Meher finds out ... and tells Preet .. that way all will be clear between them, then it's only Love Love and Looooove ...
by the way i have to say this update is the best of them all ....ahh thanks that means a-lot i loved the little verbal fight they had ... and the inner battle .. i felt as if i was there witnessing that ... and that's what a writer should really aim at to make a reader feel as if they are there ..Thanx but i would not call myself writer here
anyways a Brilliant update
take caare
yasmin Thankyou so much for your lovely comment it means a-lot
Okay was that a dream he had or was it a reality ... if a reality ... *blushing* if not *sigh* when will it become reality lolz ...
anyways will you do something about this Ash , she is actually annoying the hell out me ... i use to feel sorry for her, but now i don't ... thanks i really want this charactor to have negative image in the head of the readers and i'm so happy that is working.... thank you gain for the lovely reply
great update
take care
yasmin
Hi Shikha,
Seriously I am overwhelmed! you are too sweet hunny Thank u so much for posting the next part, really thanks from the bottom of my heart.
It took me some time to realise what happened! So it was Harman who spend that night with Ash & here she is trying to make Preet squirm making him think it was him. And in that stupor Preet & Meher finally made it work out between themselves? They were physically intimate! Got it so far. Oh hang on, it was just a dream??? Or was it? Will wait to see what u had in mind. you have to wait until the script is over then you will find out what actually went on
Seriously u have got it in u, u have taken the story to another level altogether & it intrigues me to no end just waiting to find out what u have next in store for us. thankyou once agin it means a-lot to me
U r very good in ur own way, so don't feel insecure. As I said all stories r special & nice in their own way & if all them were similar in quantity & quality we wouldn't be interested in them, right? Thankyou so much for all the support you guys give me
Will wait for ur next part eagerly. Once again thanks, I am really honoured for this part which u posted so soon.
Lana.
It mad me feel...empty, it really did when I heard her sobbing, and all I wanted to do was go into her and protect her, shield her from the hurt. But then isn't this all her fault? Why did she let me know that she loved me with all her heart and then got married to my younger brother? To make anything feel better she rubs in my face everyday making me know what I have lost but that's it enough is enough if she wants to play like that then who am I to complain?
So I continue to lace up my black shoes and then bang the door shut. Half eight, Preet will be over at the office. Seems like a good place to take Maya. Knocking on her door she smiles broadly, pushes her short cardigan over her shoulders and slips her arms through mine and we make our way over to the office.
"What do you want Maya?" why aint he here? Where is he?
"just you and me. I'll just go sit down…yeah?"
And all I do is give her a weak nod. Making my way over to the table I notice that he is in fact here, but he's talking to some women across the other side, smiling and laughing. And then I see her as she turns around looking straight at the fish tank that we have got Preet when he first joined the office, anything for him to come and see what the office work was actually like instead of flirting with all the secretaries outside. She is talking to someone, it looks like a man as far as I stand and then I see her… she is talking to Prem jiju about something. And jealously kicks me square in the stomach.
So she couldn't be friends with me, but some jumped up business man ticks all the right boxes does he? Maybe he doesn't have to; after all, he's not the one that ditched her on her wedding day after promising her that he will marry her because he loves her so much. Prem jiju respects her a-lot and part of me felt that he always seen her as his younger daughter someone he was over protective about. I remember the time when I told him I rather die and marry someone like her and he told me that he rather sees me dead then see her marry a guy like me.
"What can I get you Harman sir?"
Kareena smiles over to me and when I don't answer her she seems to follow my gaze and looks back down as she notices where my eyes are drawn to.
"What's going on in their?" I half hiss and half ask. And she looks at me, of course she doesn't know, why should she? But god, the way Meher's laughing like that…it just gets to me.
Before she can say anything I quickly dismiss my own question. I'm not bothered by them, why should I be? They're just discussing some stuff why should I care? I'll find out soon enough.
"I'll be in my cabin if you need anything just call" She nods her head, thankful to be outta the line of fire and moves to get the documents that I have asked for. Forcing the fat file to her that I had got when I came here and taking the other one in exchange with, Maya following me.
And that's when I notice she's looking over, I can tell she's trying hard not to. But she is. I glare back at her, but all she does is smile sadly and turn back around to Preet who has put his arms around her and is smiling about something. And then I face the reality, I have fallen in love with this women and how much do I cave to be the person that can hold her as their own without feeling that something is wrong.
Cricket
Anupamaa
