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Posted: 16 years ago
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omg!pls update soon!
i wonder how sameer gets there
i hope they dont get into alot of trouble
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such a nice ff awesome up date i loved it . you are genius . very nice ff
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Posted: 16 years ago
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THIS ISN'T ALL OF IT WILL POST UP THE REST WEN I FINISH IT

PAYALS ENTERY

PART THREE

It starts where sameer is standing right infront of all four girls and there guys right beside them, with a very scared face on the girls and angry face on he girls.

Sameer: heer so this is you friend who is sick and sadhna tum

meher aur ragni is dis your competition, I had trusted you guys and this is what i get

Heer: magar bhaiya please listen to me we didn't do anything on purpose, we had to come and get

Sameer: bas, you came to come and get ragni and meher out of jail right

And all gurls are shocked

Your teacher called and told me everything i can't believe that my sisters could do anything like this, i came and stopped by a dhaba where i was told dat a group of gurls went into a cottage with four boys and wen i showed them your picture they told me it was you guys and i came here.

There is nothing left to say you guy come with me, and he takes them away while the guys stand there helpless looking at them.

They come back home and sameer is not talking to any of them and just walks off, while all four girls are sitting in their room worried

Back at Sharma house all four boys are worried thinking wut will happen, Tulsi comes to the dinner table to find out no one ate she asks the servant and he tells her dat no one wanted to eat and she is wondering why.

Later that night SAMEER is sitting in his room thinking about his sisters while looking at his parents picture and saying what did he do wrong that for the first time they lied to me.

In the morning Sameer is sitting at the breakfast table while all four girls come and try to speak to him but he doesn't say anything so they decide to juts, just about to leave they see four big guys infront of them and they get scared.

Sadhnaa: who are you guys and how did u guys come in

Sameer: i brought them here

Heer: aap ne

Sameer: haa mein ne

From now on they will be your guards and they will be with you every where u guys go

Ragni: even in college

Sameer: they will be out side waiting for you guys to finish class and then they will pick you guys up, and sadhna he will pick u up from tech class and heer he will be waiting out side until your are done and then he leaves

Meher: magar bhaiya

Sameer look at her and she puts her head down and he leaves

And so does all of them

Preet and Ranvir are in college waiting for meher and ragni

Meher: di, what do we do now these two bandhars are with us, now we wont be able to meet preet and ranvir

Ragni: we will have to do something

The guards stop them and tells them that they will be waiting out side for them and don't go anywhere because we will be watching and both meher and ragni leave

While walking they see everyone staring at them and they just keep on walking and meet up with preet and ranvir they avoid them and just walks off and both of them wander why

While Meher is in the library trying to get soem books preet comes grabs her and corners and asks her why she is avoiding him and she tell him to let her go and that she has no choice, and preet asks why and meher says tells him that her brother has gotten them guards who watch every move of ours, so she has to avoid him and she leaves and preet calls out meehr but she doesn't say anything.

And ragni is walking thinking of ranvir and is very sad and ranvir grabs her and pulls her into a dark room covering her mouth ragni is scared because she doesn't noe who it is and then ranvir shows her his face and ragni is relieved its him and just when ranvir is about to say something ragni hugs and he hugs her back and ragni also tell him the same thing dat preet told meher and she leaves, and while getting out of the room vinnay see's ragni and then see's ranvir getting out and thinks that there is something up between them.

Heer is getting out of the car and goes into the house to see prem who is already in there with the kids and they both have a eye lock moment and then prem comes to heer asking her how she is doing and heer tells prem that he shouldn't be here

Prem told heer that he came to see her, but heer told him that he should go from there she doesn't want to talk she is about to go when prem hold her hand and tell her that he loves her way to much to just go away, heer tells him that if you do then please let go of me and he does and she goes inside and prem leaves sadley.

Sadhna is walking with some friends and she see's aalekh standing outside waiting for her, she is walking away but alekh grabs her hand a asks her why she isn't talking to him she tells him that they cant be together and she has to go and she leaves and alekh is all sad

Back home all four girls are sad and they are crying thinking about there guys

On the other hand the boys are thinking about the girls and tulsi comes in seeing them and calls out there names but they don't say anything, Tulsi goes to prem and touches his head and asks him whats wrong why are you guys depress prem says noting is wrong just a little tired and Tulsi leaves.

Tulsi is all alone thinking about her sons all depressed Mihir comes in and try's saying something to Tulsi but Tulsi is not paying attention Mihir calls Tulsi's name and then goes to her asking her whats wrong

Tulsi tells Mihir that what has happened to our sons they have been very depressed lately when they kame back they were fine but lately they haven been there lately they have not been there self mihir tells tulsi not to worry to much and that they will back to normal very soon.

Back at sameers house the girls are setting together talking to each other and then while talking, sameer comes in telling the girls that he is going to his friends house and that he will be back very soon and that the guards will be outside in the cottage so don't go anywhere and he leaves.

All girls go into the kitchen while meher and ragni are sitting is the couch listening to love songs and sadhna and heer in the kitchen putting everything away while listening meher hears something and tells ragni that she heard something, ragni tells her that she is just hearing stuff and then sadhna hears something and tells heer that she heard something and so does ragni and meher and then meher tells ragni that I told you so and they go running towards the kitchen.

Sadhna : what you guys doing here

Ragni: di i hear something

Meher: me to

Heer: is about to say something when she hears a vase drop and all four girls get scared and heer says there must be a chor inside and they take a weapon more like kitchen stuff and start to walk while walking they here something and then a girl pops out saying booooo and laughing and then they are relief to see who is

Its payal there neighbour who was gone for a while, but is back

Heer: PAYAL TUM

You scared us

Payal: I'm sorry my love i was going to come from the main door but I thought this way would be more fun and they go into the living room to sit

Payal: so you guys tell me how have u guys been didn't miss me so much

Meher: what about you how was your trip

Payal: it was good but u guys weren't there nor mom and ( and she smiles thinking of sameer)

Ragni: AND

Payal: um where is sameer i don't see him around. (with a cute smile and anxious look on her face)

Heer: bhaiya is not here he went to work.

Payal: oh I see ( has a sad face) and see's the girls sad faces and asks

What is wrong with you guys aren't you guys happy to see me

Sadhna: it's noting like that it's just ( and see looks down)

Payal: kya hua meri janu log

Meher: I'll tell you guys what's wrong, and meher narrates the whole story in silent and showing flashbacks of how prem and heer met and then how alekh and sadhna met, and meher and ragni at skool wen varun and vinnay cmae and harrased them they slapped the, and then they met preet and ranvir and they became friends and then at the part when meher got drugged and was taken to hotel room and vinnay trying to attack ragni and ranvir saving her. And all four guys telling the girls how they feel ragnia dn ranvir getting caught by their teacher all four in jail and then heer, sadhna and alekh and prem come to get them out of jail and also there car stopping and sameer seeing them with the guys.

Payal: OMG this is trouble, so mmmmmmmm my jaans are in love right.

Ragni: kaisa pyar we told them that its over

Payal: are you guys nuts, u don't just love someone for just a second and then tell them dat you do not love them anymore

Heer: then what do you want me or us do

Payal: u guys ( Sameer comes back)

Sadhna: Bhaiya your back already,

Sameer: yeah, the meeting finished a little bit earlier, so I just came back home

Payal: HI SAMEER ( payal said with a very happy and blushing look on her face)

Sameer: hello ( and he leaves)

PAYAL: is still blushing and then she tells the girls goodnight and will see u guys tomorrow.

ALL: OKAY BYE

NEXT MORNING: At Sharma house

Tulsi is calling all of the boy for puja, mihir comes in and so does the boys and tulsi does the arti, while all four boys ar ein their thoughts

Prem: please god, i ant even think about staying away from heer please bring her back to me.

Alekh: mom always tells me that you always listen to your kids, and today this son of yours is asking please return my sadhna back to me.

Ranvir: For the first time there is another girl other then mom in my life who i live the most please don't take that away from me.

Preet: I know that i am the most naughtiest among all of us and all I do is joke around, but this is not a joke im begging you all i want is my meher i can't think about anyone other then her.

Back at the kapoor house:

Meher is thinking and talking in her thoughts, while preet calls

Meher: HELLO

Preet: Hello meher

Meher: PREET

Preet: meher aaj meri boxin match hain, you will be coming today right

Meher: Preet woh mein

Preet: Meher please without you i wont win because now you are my strength

Meher: magar preet

Preet: meher if you don't come then i will lose but then also i will think that our love has failed ( and he hangs up)

Meher: what d i do now

Ragni: meher woh mein ( and she see's meher sad) kya hua

Meher: di woh ( and she narrates the whole thing)

Ragni: but how will you go

Meher: im not going to go

Ragni: do what your dil tells you to do okay

Ragni leaves and ranvir calls her telling her its his soccer match today and he wants her there

Ranvir: you have to come today

Ragni: magar

Ranvir: the choice is yours

Ragni is confused on what to do

Heer and sadhna come in saying something and both ragni and meher are sitting there and they ask whats wrong and they tell them what happened and how scared they are because they don't want them to lose

Heer and Sadhna tell them that Sameer bhaiya wont be home until midnight and its only 1: oo pm right now go but be home by 8 or earlier then that

Ragni: magar di

Sadhna: go okay just be back on time.

And they both leave

At college Ranvir soccer match is on and they are losing bog time, while at the time Vinnay is telling himself that I know why you guys are losing an today I'm gonna take advantage of that and Ranvr i will get revenge from you for hitting me,

After the third match Ranvir sits down and one of his buddies come asking him whats wrong why you playing like this and ranvir is sitting there telling him to leave him alone and he sits there alone while someone puts there hand on his shoulder he turns around and its ragni.

Edited by jamune - 16 years ago

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