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ISHQ
Sharma Family
Mihir Sharma 48 ( Ronit Roy)

He is the second riches business man, love his family and they mean everything to him, he loves his wife dearly, he never puts decisions on his children lets them follow their dream, but when it comes to business he is very strict, loves to spend time with his family and his family has always come first for him.

Tulsi Sharma 43( Smirti Irani)

Loves his husband and children, is a housewife her house is her mandir.

Prem Sharma 24 ( Harshad Chopra)

He is the oldest son and he also takes care of the business with his dad and younger brother Alekh, loves all three brother equally, and his is in love with the girl who comes into her dreams but never saw her)

Alekh Sharma 23 ( Angad Hasija)

The second oldest child, and also takes care of the business, loves all his brother, he loves paint always dreams on falling in love with a girl who would love him back and he always dreams about a girl, he thinks that its a dream but doesn't know that she is right there

Ranvir Sharma 21 ( Kinshuk Mahajan)

The third son, a college going guy, loves sport is the captain of the basketball and soccer team, which bugs his rival also team member Varun want, also loves to play his guitar, has always wanted to fall involve with a girl who has a kind and nice personality, someone that would make him happy, so skin colour has never bother him.

Preet Sharma 20 ( Sushant Rajput)

The fourth son the youngest and the most naughtiest child, loves to play pranks on people, especially his dad but always gets saved by his mother and brother, also a college going guy with older bro ranvir both ranvir and preet grew up together so they never thought of each other as bro they were more like best friends, also is a boxing champion and has a school enemy Vinnay.

Kapoor Family

Parvati & Om Kapoor ( Sakshi and Kiran) deceased

Both has died in a car accdient

Sameer Kapoor 28 ( Rajeev Khandelwal)

He is to oldest sibling and only son, he is both mother and father to all his sister, all his sisters mean the world to him and so does he for them, would enever say no to them, has put his whole life up for them, no one is allowed to say or do anything to his sisters, sisters also love and adore him, nut also scared of him when he gets mad or angry.

Heer Kapoor 22 ( Aditi)

The son older child, love and adore both his sisters and brother , she is the shyist and always has a soft side for the poor, so she teaches and tutors children who can't afford to go to school for free.

Sadhna Kapoor 21 (Sara Khan)

The third older child, loves all sisters and brothers, she is moreoutgoing and is not scared of to speak up if someone is wrong, takes computer classes.

Ragni Kapoor 19 ( Parul Chauhan)

The fourth sibling also loves and sores sisters and brother, college going girl, she is dark comples but also the most prettiest among all sisters, wants to always fall in love with a guy who loves her just for her and no one else, loved to dance.

Meher Kapoor 18 ( Supreet Gill)

The youngest the most bubbliest sister, loves and adores all sisters and brother, goes to college with sister ragni, also loves to dance, with her sister is in charge of the dance committee.

OTHER CHARACTERS
Payal ( Aamna Shariff)

Kapoors next door neighbour, is best friends with all sisters and is in love with sameer but doesn't show it.

Varun ( Ejaz Khan)

Goes to college with ragni ranvir meher and preet is preet' rival, is jealous of him because of his popularity and him being the boxing champion, also is brothers with Vinnay.

Vinnay (Vikas Sethi)

Goes to college with ragni ranvir meher and preet, is ranvir's rival, always wants to beat ranvir in each game but fails, is brothers with varun.

hey guys since i love kis desh and bidaai i thought that i would write a story on ma fav characters ... more to come hope u guys will like it it would be posted in both bidaai and kis desh forum feel free to read and leave any comments..
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hey
just read now
it's interesting very nice
do cont soon..
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hi!!!
loved the character sketches!!!!
plz continue soon!!!!
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PART ONE

The Sharma house

Everyone in the Sharma house or running around, all servants are decorating every area, and then we see a man coming downstairs dressed in a nice kurta and pants, n he is kalling out for Tulsi, Tulsi in the other hand is in da mandir decorating everything and telling da servants to not to make a single mistake.

And they show her face, and Mihir comes telling Tulsi that u r looking very nice today, and she said thank you. Mihir asked Tulsi she is very happy today,

T: yes i am very happy today, because all four of my sons are coming back what mother wouldn't be happy

M: yes very true

Mihirs mom comes and tells them both that pooja's times has started, and they all go to start there pooja. While Tulsi sing kabhi kushi kabhie gham, we can see four guys wearing black suits walking out of the airport. While Tulsi waits at the door they all turn around together and walk towards their mother, with tulsi's eyes all watery. And she hugs them all.

Its then it's switched to Kapoor family.

We see four girls walking towards the mandir with a pooja taali, the girl in the pink suit gives it to the mandit and starts to sing, while the girl in the blue suit starts to sing, and then the girl in white suit starts to sing, and after that the girls in yellow suit starts to sing.

When they are done singing they all turn around and they are all introduced, girls in pink is heer, girl in blue is sadhna, girl in white is ragni and girl in yellow is meher.

All happy and smiling get their shoes on and the go towards their car, to see there driver out trying to fix it and asking them where sameer bhaiya is, driver says that he has gone to get a mechanic, and they all look at each other saying that fi we don't get home then we wont be able to get out stuff and go and then we will getting late, so they all decide to walk and tell the driver that if bhaiya comes tell him taht we will be walking and that we will see him at home and they leave.

While walking couple of goons come towards them and starts to whistle saying:

Goon #1: hey jaaneman why you guys walking come we will give u guys a ride and they just keep on walking.

HEER: just avoid them there not worth it

Sadhna: but di why should we stay quiet we should tell dem off

Ragni: No Sadhna di, heer di is right lets not say anything

Meher: no we should tell them off

Goon # 2:come on stop avoiding them

Meher trys to slap him but he catches her hand and they start to tease and harass them.

They ask for help and one of them get pushed and another one got slapped.

They all run to him and hugs him, its Sameer bhaiya, and he starts to slap and beat them up and they are all in the ground, and tells them that today u guys are alive but if u ever try to look or touch any of ma sisters again i will kill each one of u guys and leaves with them.

Its switched back to to Sharma's house its also Tulsi b-day but she didn't want to say anything because she thought her family knew about it, but no one said anything.

Then prem comes in with a cake and alkeh, ranvir and preet kome behind her and wishes her happy birthday.

Back to kapoor house, all four sisters look at each other and say:

Meher : sameer bhaiya is very angry right now what should we do

Ragni: i have an idea and they all talk to each other silently

Then we see ragni playing her piano while in Sharma house we see ranvir playing his guitar and prem starts to sing mere duniya mein from virasat to his mother.

And heer sings mere duniya mein to her brother, and meher and sadhna bring him in and make him sit and they sing.

Alekh takes Tulsi and starts to dance and the mihir comes in and take her and all four dances around dem, sadhna is singing and looks at her parents pick and crys and sameer comes and consoles her and they all run towards him and hugs him and they cry looking at their parents picture.

NEXT DAY

Prem and Alkeh are getting ready to go to the office while preet and ranvir are getting ready for to go college and all four are calling out for Tulsi and Tulsi is running around and on top of that Mihit is also calling Tulsi, and she goes to him they are all at the breakfast table telling Tulsi what will we do without u.

Prem: Ma, u never told us wut u want for ur b-day

Aalekh: Ha Ma, wut do u want

Tulsi: u guys want to know what i want, i want ma daughter in law here with me and all four choke on there food.

Ranvir: but Ma abhi to humlo bache hai

Preet: HA MA ranvir bhai teek kare hai meanin ranvir bhai is saying the right thing

Tulsi: nahi by next year diwalli i want to see all four of ma daughter in law in ma house

And they all look at each other, they all start to leave while prem gets a phone call from there manager saying that ramu hasn't kome in today because he is sick, and prem says:

Prem: that's not good did anyone go and see how he is doing

Manager: no

Prem: why, i'll go and see

Mihir: kya hua prem

Prem: papa ramu kaka is not feeling good, so im gonna go and see him, u and alekh go to office and i'll see both of u guys there

Mihir: but i have to go for a meeting

Aalekh: its ok then i'll go on ma own, ill take the car and on the way ill drop ranvir and preet

And they all leave

Sameer: heer, sadhna, ragni, meher kome down

They all come down eat breakfast and sameer leaves, since there manager comes to tell him that today he will have to go to pune for a meeting and it will take him three days, he didn't want to go but he had to and told heer that im leaving with u in charge and that the securities will be outside so don't worry, and he leaves.

They all jump for joy

Meher: bhaiya gone for three days meaning party

Heer: oh no lets go guys we are getting late, and they all leave

Heer: sorry bache, sorry for being late

The kids are sitting there all depressed

Heer: are kya hua

Chinky: didi baba is very sick

Munna: ha did he is very sick

Heer: don't worry he will be fine, i'll go and see him ok and u two go and get ready

Baba how are u doing

Baba: are Heer beta tum, mein teek ho

Heer: by looking at u i doesn't seem like your doing good, program is cancelled

Baba: what program

Heer: i thought that i would take the kids to the park

Bab: no take them, there mind will be fresh please take them

Heer: are u sure

Baba: Hah

She starts to leave while walking she trips and almost falls while someone catches her and its prem they look at each other, and pheli nazar plays and they keep on looking at each other, heer gets up and leaves with the kids and prem keeps on looking at her and then heer turns around and looks at him. Then prem goes in and see's Baba

Baba: Chote saab aap

Prem: ha mein, how are u doing now i brought you some medicine and don't come to our office until you feel well u will still be getting your money, baba woh ladki kaun thi

Baba: woh heer thi, bare achi ladki hai, she i a rich girl but she still cares alot for the poor, she is teaching my kids or free without taking a single money and pays for everything even there tution fee for school

And prem leaves, while in his car he keeps on thinking about heer and smile and pheli nazar mein plays.

Aalekh is in his car while the car stops, and Alekh gets out telling the driver you go and get the mechanic and i'll wait here for you, while waiting someone dupatta is flying and komes on his head while getting it off Sadhna comes infront of him and Aalekh see's her and keeps on looking at her and kudha jaane plays and just keeps on looking at her. Sadhna takes her dupatta and leaves the mechanic comes and fixes his car, while alekh gets a call from the manager saying that Xavier tech school has called asking for there donation

Aalekh: don't worry ill go right now

Xavier tech school

While walking looking for the principles office he pumps into a girl and the girl falls right on him and its Sadhna he just looks at her, Sadhna says i'm sorry, Alekh goes to the principles office and gives the money to him and leaves to go to the office.

St. College

Ranvir and Preet are walking and talking to their buddies while they bump into Varun and Vinnay

All four in same school but school is divided with preet and ranvir group and varun and vinnay's group but more are with ranvir and preet and less with varun and vinnay.

They just look at each other and leave.

While Ragni and Meher are talking to their friends and are walking and walk towards both ranvir and preet but don't see each other.

Meher and Ragni are in dance class teaching them, while both Varun and Vinnay come into class and start to bug them when meher and ragni asked them what their problem is

Varun: you always teach them how to dance what about us, teach us how to dance

Ragni: just shut up and get out, don't forget this college is owned by our brother, one complain can kick you two out

Meher: but we are not mean so we are just warning you to, to stop bothering us and get lots

Vinnay: and if we don't Varun: hah, is we don't

Both ragni and meher look at each other takes tme out infront of everyone and give them both a big tight slap and everyone see's it and they both leave

While both varun and vinnay look at each other in anger

Preet and Ranvir comes and teases them and leaves

They both go to Ragni and Meher and asks them if they are fine and they say that they are fine, while walking more ragni's friends come tells ragni dat there is a party tonite at the club and both her and meher have to come but meher says no, but then the girl says they have to because there in charge of the dance committee, and they say yes.

At the club

Both Meher and Ragni comes in and One of Varuns friends says look turn around and he does, he see's meher and get furious and vinnay is about to say something we varun stops him and says that these two will be thought a lesson and one guy hears, they go to a waiter and tells them in about an hour make sure to put these pills in the soft drink and give it to those two pointed at ragni and meher.

While people dancing Ragni standing alone and Ranvir comes talks to her

Ranveer: hello, how are

Ragni: im fine

And keeps on talking for a very long time, while meher is talking to some friends and preet comes and starts to talk to them and offers her a dance and she says yes, also ranvir offers her to dance and she says yes, and both couples dance to main agar kahoon, which gets varun and vinnay mad.

Then the waiter comes with the drinks and gives them to both meher drinks it, but ragni was about to when someone bumps into her and she has to go to the bathroom and vinnay follows, when ragni comes out she see's vinnay.

Ragni: get out of my way

Vinnay: No I won't go, the slap u gave me you will pay for it. Starts to walk towards her and ragni is scared starts to cry, vinnay gets close to her , ranvir thinks wut is taking ragni so long so he goes and hears ragni screams and runs towards the room and see's vinnay and ragni and punches vinnaya dn both of them get into a fight and the fight is just happening but ragni stopped it saying taht she just wants to go home, and ranveer agrees.Comes down to get Meher but can't find her, they go to preet to ask him but he says she is not with me and the guys who heard everything comes towards them and tells them wut he heard and he just saw varun taking meher and ragni starts to cry. Preet tells them not to worry while he tells Ranveer to take ragni home. Ragni didn't want to but preet told her to trust him and she agrees. He consoles her while going downstairs and wadha raha tune plays.

At home heer and sadhna are worried about ragni and meher while ragni comes home and tells them everything and ranveer stays there, all are worried.

Varun is driving and Preet is looking for him and then spots his car at a hotel goes and asks the receptionist and pay him so he would tell him and he goes into the room and see's meher on the bed and Varun coming out bathroom he punches him and he hits his head and get unconscious and Preet takes Meher and leaves. Heer is waiting and ranveer is siitting there with ragni, sadhna screams MEHER and they all turn around to see meher unconscious while preet carries her. Puts her on the couch and tells them what happened and noting happened. Heer thanks them both for saving both of our sisters. Ke Ranveer see's ragni's worried face and tells her not to worry those two will pay for what they did and they leave and Preet tell them to take care of her ill see u guys at school and he looks at Meher and phela nasha plays. And they leave.

End of part One

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awesomeeeeee too good very nice part waitingggg for next asap.
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tnx will post of very soon but i was just wandering could some let me noe how i can change ma topic so i can write down that i did part one on topic title
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hey
awesum part 1
premeer already met yay
well um u need help with ur topic
why don't u leave just ishq
ff ishq or ishq vishk
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yeah im just gonna leav it as ishq and yes heer and prem have already met
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hey guys sorrie for the delay have been very busi
PART TWO

Kapoor house

Everyone is waiting for Meher to get conscious.

Heer: thank god, that Sameer bhaiya is not here, god knows what would of happened, Ragni how you doing now.

Ragni: main abh teek oh didi , magar meher

Sadhna: thank god noting happened to her, and thank god u didn't drink it.

All fall asleep right there.

At Sharma house

All four brothers are on the terrace thinking about their girls, Tulsi is calling them but no response, she asks Mihir who is reading his files, that if he has seen the boys but he says no, she asks one of the servant who tells her that they are all in the terrace, so she decides to go up there. While all of them are in there thoughts. Prem thinking of Heer and we can hear pheli nazar tune, Then Alekh thinking of Sadhna, Ranvir thinking of Ragni and Preet thinking of Meher. Tulsi comes and calls out there names but they don't say anything she calls them again and then again and then after the fourth time they got out of there thoughts and Ranvir and Preet fell off the chairs, Tulsi asks them what is wrong and they say noting she said are u sure and they said yes we are positive. So she leaves, and they all look at each other and leave.

Morning

Meher wakes up all scared and shocked and the others wake up and they console her.

Meher: what happened, how did I get here

Ragni: meher relax

Sadhna brings some water

Heer: here drink some water and then we will tell you

They tell her everything that happened flashback

Meher: all I remember was drinking the soft drink I started to have head aches and someone grabbed me.

Heer: Bhaiya Aap

Sameer: Kya hua tum log ko, you guys look like you guys seen a ghost, he see's meher and goes to her. Kya hua meher you don't look to good.

Heer: kuch nahi bhaiya, she wasn't feeling to well, so we all the ended up sleeping her by her.

Sameer: that's why never have to worry because I know that if I'm not here u four will take care of each other.

Sadhna: magar bhaiya you were gonna be coming tomorrow then you're here today

Sameer: Yeah, the meeting was held a little early so I came back and you guys know I can't stay away from you guys that long, and they all smile and take meher into the room, and sameer calls the servant to come and get his things and get him a cup of tea.

Sadhna; Heer di, why didn't u tell bhaiys everything

Heer: you think bhaiya would stay quiet no yeah I understand that they would be put of the college but also don't forget that bhaiya would of kills the, and do you want to see bhaiya behind bars.

Ragni: OMG look at the time we have to get ready for school

Heer: yeah we do I won't be able to drop any of you guys

Sadhna : don't worry di we will get the other cars.

Ragni: and me and meher will go together

Sadhna: are you sure

Ragni: yes I'm positive

They all get ready and leave

At Sharma house

Tulsi calls Prem but Prem left in a hurry and so did Alekh, she thougth that Ranvir and Preet might be getting ready she goes into the room and see's neither, she asks the servant where they went and he told her that they went early in the morning.

Tulsi: so early before they couldn't even open there eyes and today they are already at school, I'm amazed.

Heer: Sorry bacho, im sorry for being late

Kids are mad

Heer: aree itni gusha, ok I'm sorry no forgive me, okay what do you want me to do so that you guys will forgive me, mmmm left me think, ok how about ice cream and then a movie, how about.

They smile, and they go, on the way Heer's car breaks down and they have to get out, while waiting a car pulls up and its Prem who is asking her if they need help, Heers says no but Prem offered them help and offered them a ride, Heer didn't want to go but the kids begged her and she agreed.

Its shift to St. College, Meher and Ragni are walking and thinking about what happened last night carried in there thoughts they bump into Varun and Vinnay and both scared holding each others hand while both of them are coming towards them Ragni and Meher are moving back and then Preet and Ranvir come and stand right in front of them and Varun and Vinnay stops.

Ranvir: Aaj ke baad, don't ever come near or look at either Meher or Ragni

Preet: Varna thumara asa haal mein karo gi, that you won't remember who you are OK

And they both leave, they turn around Preet looks at Meher and Ranvir looks at Ragni

Ranvir: don't worry they won't be bothering you from now

Preet: But now they will be paying for there deeds

All four realizes that they have class together ad they go, in class they go into class and sit down.

Alekh is in his office and he is thinking of Sadhna, his secretary comes in and he see's Sadhna and is happy he starts to go towards her and Sadhna is getting scared keeps on going back, he corners her and then Sadhna flashback goes away and the secretary asks him what wrong, he said noting and said sorrie.

Prem is driving Heer and the kids and he is only looking at Heer, Heer looks but then looks away to.

Shifts back to college, Meher is talking to Preet.

Meher: thank you preet

Pree: for what

Meher: for saving me last nite

Preet: hey in friendship there is no sorrie and no thank you okay, and now smile

Meher: Yeh di kaha hai

Preet: he must be with ranvir, where ragni is that's where ranvir will be

Meher: meaning

Preet: he smiles, meaning noting, common lets go to the canteen and get something to eat

Meher: sure why not lets go

Ranvir and Ragni are together and there talking about something and laughing

Ranvir: aren't you hungry

Ragni: yeah I am but I don't want food

Ranvir: matlap

Ragni: mujeh kulfi chahe

Ranvir: Kulfi

Ragni: hah

Ranvir: sure why not lets go and get some

They go to the ice cream stand and get two kulfi's and are eating it, Ragni is eating and is smiling and Ranvir is looking at her and is blushing.

Prem drops Heer and the kids infront of the cinema he was about o go when one of the kids asked him to join them he smiled and said noting and Heer was not saying anything and the kids kept on forcing him so he said yes.

Our majnoo Aalekh is still in his thoughts and Mihir comes in saying that he has to go to Xaveir Tech School to go and get some documents and need to get some signatures in this documents, Mihir was just about to leave where Aalekh stops him.

Aalekh: Dad, why u going, I mean why u troubling your self why don't you let me go.

Mihir: its okay I'll go im not troubling my self

Aalekh: but dad

Mihir: Aalekh, Tulsi calls

Tulsi: hello Mihir actually, I forgot that today we had to Lal's house for the engagement and they have invited all of us but me and you have to go earlier, could you please come.

Mihir: sure why not, um Aalekh I think you were right, you take it, and also listen today we have to go to Sharma's house so you guys all come, and make sure to come.

Alekh: yes I will tell them, (Aalekh has the biggest smile on his once mihir leaves he jumps)

He reaches to Sadhna school and is walking but also looking around to see where Sadhna is. He gets to the office and goes in to talk to the principle

Principle: Thank you its because of you guys and One of our best and bright students that we have this money to give in for donation.

Aalekh: One of your students, I'm not really understanding what you are saying

Principle: actually what I am trying to say is that one of our students have been giving us a lot of donations to, her brother is a very rich man, but she never shows it even thought this isn't the highest tech school she still comes here and loves to live the same life like the other students, ill just call her hold on sec

Aalekh: okay

The girl comes in and it is Sadhna

Aalekh: he see's her and is shocked but also happie

Principle: this is Sadhna Kapoor, Kapoor industry Maalik ki behen

Sadhna: Hello

Aalekh: Hi

And she leaves, and so does Aalekh, Sadhna car breaks down (I know there is a lot of cars breaking down)

Sadhna: Omg this can't be happening I have to go home and Get ready when will I get the time

Aalekh car stops and offers a ride to Sadhna she hesitates and then agrees.

Back home Meher and Ragni are waiting for Heer and Sadhna:

Ragni: Yeh di, why aren't they here yet, bhaiya will be home in a hour and we still have to get ready

They see Heer coming out of a car and they wonder who she is with and then Sadhna comes out and they also wonder who she is witj

Meher: Di, yeh aaj kya hor raha hai heer di ek ladke ke saath aur sadhna di

Ragni: im wondering the same, oh well we will figure it out later on lets go and get readie

They all get ready looking very pretty, Heer comes out with a very nice pink sari her hair is nicely straightened and big earing's, Sadhna in a very nice white and silver sari with big silver earings and Ragni in a purple lengha her hair is nicely straightened and half way done and Meher in a nice orangey long anarkali suit and with hair open and big earings.

They all leave and reach to Lal house and get out and is about to enter, on the other hand inside Prem, Aalekh, Ranvir and Preet are wandering around. Tulsi comes ask them what's wrong and the say noting is wrong and Tulsi tells them its Karan's engagement today wont you guys go and talk to him and they go to him.

Aalekh: Hey karan how are you man, so how does it feel

Karan: it feels great man I mean I'm going to be getting married to the girl I love and we will soon get married what else could I ask for more.

Pre: acha yeh to bhatoe ( what I mean so tell me) how did you meet her

Karan: what to tell you well her name is Ancahl and I think she is the most beautiful girl, I just saw her at a coffee house and feel in love with her after we found out we were in the same college we become friends and slowly we started to like each other, for me it was love at first site but for her it just happened.

And these four majnoo's were in there thoughts

Karan: arie what happened you guys

All four: noting

One of Karan's friends come and tells them that the girls have arrives.

Ranveer: arie oye, bhabi ji is coming why you getting excited

Guy: why wouldn't I, with babhi ji is all her single beautiful friends

Preet: you will never learn

And the girls come and Heer, Sadhna, Ragni and Meher walk Anchal in and Prem, Aalekh, Ranvir and Preet see them and are happy and just kept on looking at them

Karan: didn't I tell you she is gorgeous

Prem: Soni

Aalekh: Khoobsurat

Ranvir: ek chand ka thukra

Preet: jaise ek pari

Karan: are oye she is ma to be wife and your bhabi stop looking at her

All four: sorry

And All four girls she them and says hi

A man comes and tells that there is time for the engagement until then you guys should do something

Preet: but uncle what, what should we do

Man: competition between girls side and boys side

Preet: that's easy what ever it will be boys will win

All the guys say yeah

Meher: hey hello, what guys can do girls can do to okay so don't challenge us

And all four guys start to talk and so does the girls except for Heer and Prem and Sadhna and Aalekh who just kept on looking at each other.

Ranvir: di you tell them, di, di ,di whats wrong

Heer: noting

Okay guys enough with the fighting how about a dance and they agree Preet takes Meher and Ranvir takes Ragni and they dance to Salaam E Ishq and then Heer is just walking and looking at Prem and so is Prem and Prem starts to imagine dancing with Heer and then realizes it was just a dream, after Aalekh kept on looking at Sadhna and had a dream if him dancing with her, and then Ranvir and ragni are dancing and ranvver keeps on glancing at ragni and Preet is dancing preet see's meher dancing with another guys and he kind of pushes the guys and he moves and they start to dance. After that the engagement and they all clap for them and start to dance.

Next day at college

Meher: last night was so much fun right

Ragni: of course it was

Ranveer: by the way Ragni you're a very good dancer

Ragni: why thank you

Preet: But im very happy for Karan he has gotten the girl that he loves.

Meher: yeah so did anchal

Its shifts to Heer hwere she starts to think of Prem she is at home since she doesn't have to teach today so she decided to go shopping and buy some gift, PREM is at the mall since he was finalizing a deal with the owner and see's heer, and wonders

Prem: heer is here to, what a coincidence, lagta hai ki bhagwan bhi mera saath hai

Heer is walking and a guy comes and starts to bug her and she tells him to back off and the guy doesn't, Prem couldn't control his anger and he started to punch the guy and he ran away, he asked if Heer is fine and she said that she is okay and she leaves, and so does Prem.

Sadhna starts to think about Aalekh from a party and a friend comes and calls out her name but she doesn't reply, kept on calling her name out and then tapped her and she startled, she asked what's wrong sadhna said noting is wrong and she asked that who's thoughts she was in and Sadhna said no ones.

Heer: I've gotten everyone something but not Sameer bhaiya yet what should I get him, Heer see's a watch and tell her self she will buy that for him.

At college Ragni and Meher are talking to some of the girls and telling them that tomorrow we will be going for the competition so make sure to be prepared and come on time since our bus will be leaving sharp at 11 and they all leave. Preet and Ranveer are waiting for them and askes them if they are going somewhere.

Ragni: yes we are going to ooty for a dance competition

Ranveer: cool can we come

Meher: no its only for girls and also we will be staying ina girls hostel whee wouls you guys stay anyways we have to go we will see after the weekend okay bye

Preet: bhai why is it just for girls and ooty that's so far I thought we would of asked them to go to movies this weekend but I guess that won't happen anymore

Ranveer: yeah, true that means no weekend with Ragni

Preet: no weekend wit Meher,

A guy comes dressed like a girl

Ranveer: Hey ali what u dressed like a girls

Ali: its for drama class, I took drama class to be with girls but they dressed me up like girl and Both ranveer and Preet look at each other smiling.

In the evening Meher and Ragni are packing and Heer and Sadhna are helping her Sameer comes

Sameer: Ragnia then Meher I wont see you guys in the morning so you guys take care of your self and here is some money just incase if you guys need something

Meher Ragni: okay and they all go to bed

At Sharma house

Both ranveer and preet are running around trying to convince tulsi they want to go out this weekend but tulsi said no

Ranveer: please mom we will be back on Monday

Tulsi: no you guys no we have guest over this weekend

Preet: but mom dad tell her please prem bhaiya alelkh bhaiay

Mhir: tulsi if they want to just let them

Prem: yeah mom let

Aalekh: yeah let them

Tulsi: fine and preet and ranveer leave

Ranveer: preet we are going but where will we getting the outfits and also how will we get into the hostel

Preet: have no fear bhai when preet is here and preet calls someone

In the morning everyone is getting on to the bus and the teacher comes and tells them we have two more students and they wonder who and they come and they are all shocked to see

Preet: come sin as a tall girls with long black hair he is wearing a long skirt and a read top with liptick and the Ranveer comes in, in a suit with long wig hair tied back and has sunglasses they introduce them selves with girl voices

Raveer: hello my name is rita

Pree: and ma name is ruby

They come in and sit right behind meher and ragni

Ragni: MEHER u have been sitting beside the window for a long time can I get a turn

Meher: di please you know how sick I get I need the window

Preet ( ruby): um if you want you can change with me

Ragni: are you sure

Preet: yea no problem ( and they change )

It's a long drive and meher falls asleep and put her head on preets shoulder and so does ragni, they get there and go to the hostel and realize that they don't have a room together but all four are side by side and meher and ragni are sharing rooms with two other girls. In the morning they all get up and there teacher tells hem they have one day until the competition until then we should go out and enjoy and they agree all go into there rooms and get ready, Preet and Ranveer are outside waiting for them both, and some old guy comes to ranveer asking her to come with him and ranveer goes the other way, emehr and ragni come in and they have a totally different look meher comes on with sungalsses with her hair in a pony tail has tank top on and caprees and ragni comes out with her hair open and a nice flower dress, and they all go.

Back home Sadhna and Heer are talking

Sadhna : di have you ever felt like that you will ever fall in love

Heer: what do you mean I mean

Sadhna: I mean have you ever thought that without knowing who or ever thinking that love could happen, it just happens

Heer: Sadhna yeh aaj tumhe kya hua

Sadhna: kuch nahi

Heer: ( in thoughts) I even think so

They all go to sleep, back home Prem and Aalekh are talking

Aalekh: bhaiya

Pre: yeah

Aalekh: you know that I have always been telling you everything and there are no secrets

Prem: yeah

Aalekh: well today there is something I have to tell

Prem: yeah go ahead Aalekh

Alekh: I'm in love

Pre: what

Aalekh: yeah

Prem: whats her name

Aalekh: Sadhna Kapoor

Prem: sadhna kapoor you mean sameer kapoor's younger sister

Aalekh: Yeha sameer kapoor's younger sister and also Heer kapoors younger sister

And prem looks at Aalekh, Aalekh also look at prem

Aalekh: now don't look at me I saw you at the party, the way you looked at Heer, or should I say Heer bhabi

Pre: Aalekh,

Aalekh: com'on bhaiya, you love her right

Prem: yeah

Aalekh: then what's the problem

Prem: Problem is I don't know how she feels

Aalkeh: then tell her, even I don't know how Sadhna feels but I have decided to tell her my feelings, and you do the same

Prem and Aalekh look at each other and give each other hi 5's

Both are practicing infront of the mirror and tulsi comes and thinks her sons have gone crazy

Back in ooty there all playing while preet and ranvir are jumping up and down and are talking to ragni and meher, meher wanted to go for a long walk and ragni just wanted to sit infront of the water so ranvir joins ragni and preeet joins meher.

Back home Prem goes to see Heer who is all laone at home and Prem comes, our little romeo decides to come though the window.

Heer: kaun hai, she see's prem and says: tum here

Prem: ha main, ek minute he gets up, how are you heer

Heer; are you mental

Prem: yeah I think I am

Heer: what are you doing

Prem: im here to say aomthing to

Heer: what is it

Prem: actually its like this um

Heer: can you hurry up

Sameer comes and calls heer

Heer: oh my god bhaiya is here, you go

Prem: no, not until I say what I have come here to say

Heer: Okay tell me but hurry up

Prem: I love you

Heer: what

Prem: I love you

Heer: you're mental

Prme: no telling me your feelings

Heer: no

Prem: I wont go until you tell me

Heeer: pelase go before bhaiya comes in and you will be dead

Prem: okay then ill just go in front of him

Heer: no you won't

Prem: why

Heer: because I said no, now go

Prem: how do you feel

Heer panicks a lot sameer is about to come in when heer coems out and tells him its noting and he leaves and prem coems and asks her again and heer starts to smile and says yes and prem gets happie and something falls and sameer comes again and both heer and prem are scared and prem leaves. Sameer thinks he is hearing stuff and leaves again.

Aalekh is walking around and see's Sadhna and starts to avoid her and Sadhna see's him and starts to smile.

Aalekh sees some friends and starts to talk to him and Sadhna's friends see her and start to talk to her.

Aalekh gets the courage and talks to Sadhna and asks her if she would like to go for a long walk and she says yes, they are walking and both are quiet and Aalekh starts the conversation asking her about her family.

Sadhna; Wle there is ma brother Sameer, then Heer, then me, after that the youngest are Ragni and Meher who go to college, for us our Sameer bhaiya means everything he is our brother, mother and father andhe emans the world to us.

Aalekh: I see

Back in ooty preet is talking to meher, asking her why she is so sad

Meher: well I'm happy that we are going to have our competition but also sad that I'm away from everyone else my family and friends

Preeet: friends but aren't all your friends here

Meher: eyah but there is one that is back home his name is PREET

AND preet gets happy hearing that

Preet: PREET is he a friends or something else,

Meher: no we are just friends, well that's what he thinks

Preet; he thinks

Meher: well I think I have slowly started to like him, I have never felt this way about anyone else, before

Preet; well if you like him then why don't you tell him how you feel

Meher: I'm scared that if he doesn't feel the same way then I will lose a friend

Preet: no if you love him then you should tell him how you feel

They are walking and one of Preets oranges fall and preet is still talking and walking and meher see's it and is shocked then she looks at preet and preet looks back smiling realizing that the oranges are gone and he smiles and is laughing and meher gets mad and chases him around throwing the oranges at him, there running aorung and meher falls and so does preet they roll over and then they look at each other and preet tells her aren't you going to tell me how you feel, because if you would like to know then I would love to tell you that preet also feels the same way and they hug. Ragni and Ranvir are talking about the same things and then ranvir tells her to close her eyes saying that if you really love him then he will be right in fortn of her and she closes her eyes and opens it to see ranvir and ragni is surprised but also happy anad runs towards him and she see's earrings on him and Ragni asks him what are these earrings doing here and ranvir smiles and then ragni realizes it was ranvir and she gives him a cute dirty grin look and then hugs ranvir.

Back home Aalekh and Sadhna are still talking while heer and prem are romancing and aalekh calls prem and prem is thinking who is disturbing us.

Prem: hello

Aalekh: hello bhaiya im trying to tell sadhna my feelings but I can't

Prem: why can't you, just tell her

Aalekh: I just can't I don't have the guts to

Prem: whose brother are you, if I can do it then you can to com'on you can do it

Aalekh: okay I can do it, I can do it, I can do it

Sadhna asks him what's wrong

Aalekh closes his eye, goes on his knees and screams I LOVE YOU

And sadhna stood there smiling and Aalekh got up and said I'm sorry for yelling it out, and she said its okay I feel the same way and he gets happy and hugs her.

So all four are romancing and Heer see's sameer and hides and then Aalekh see's mihir so he hides and back in ooty everyone is looking for ragni and meher and those for went to the movies when they came back there teacher scold them for wandering off and they asked for ruby and rita and ragni and meher panic while someone says we are here they turn around to see ruby and rita and ragni and meher have a relief look on there face.

Back home prem and aalkeh are singing, prem sings aj mein upar asman neeche and aalekh sings aaj mein agey zamana hai peeche and mhir and tulsi are wandering what is going on and and then there both holding hand and saying tell me oh kudha ab mein kya karoon and they both see mihir and tulsi and get silent and walk off.

Tulsi: mihir what is going on with our sons?

Mihir: I think I know what is going on, I was just like that when I saw you tulsi

Tulsi: meaning their in

Mihir; yes love

Tulsi; I can't believe it

Mihir: I can there my sons

Back in ooty they all go into there rooms and both sadhna and ragni's roommates go off and sadhna and ragni are alone in there rooms and preet and ranvir go in there.

Rag: ranvir tum what you doing here and that to not wearing your girl clothes

Ranvir; I came here to see you and they romance a little

Meher: comes out from the shower drying her hair preet comes and grabs her and hugs her from the back and they romance a little too, and then they start to dance.

Back home both heer and sadhna have decided to go out with prem and aalekh, and tells sameer they are going out with some friends and they go.

Back in ooty both Sadhna and Ragni's roomies sneak back in and preet and ranvir have to hide so ragni hides and tells ranvir to sleep on the bed and meher does the same, and ragni see's a rat and runs screaming and goes running towards ranvir and everyone wakes up, and back in meher room preet tries to run but gets caught and the owner comes into ragni's room to see ragni in ranvirs arm and she screams and meher roommate comes screaming that meher is with some guy, the four come out and the owner calls the cops on them and they are arrested. In jail they are all sitting there while ranvir and preet are trying to convince the police to let them go, but he doesn't listen and they ask if they can make a call and he says yes.

Back home Heer and Prem are romancing and so is Sadhna and Aalekh and they get a call and it splits into four screens with all four faces and they all say KYA.

And they all look at each other saying what did they do what do we do now,

Prem: I can't believe preet and ranvir they went out to do this what's wrong with them

Heer: im thinking the same thing

Sadhna: di if bhaiya finds out both ragni and meher will be in a lot of trouble what do we do now

Heer: what else can we do we go to ooty and get them before anyone finds out

Prem: Heer is right Aalekh I'll tell dad that me and you have to go to ooty for wedding and heer you and sadhna make something up to and we will all meet back here.

Heer: Okay

They call sameer

Heer: hello bhaiya, I just got a call from my friend Anushka she is very sick and she asked if we can come and see her I was going to take Sadhna with me and Sameer agrees and tells them to take care of there selves and take some money out of the safe and they say yes.

And they do since they needed money for bail, and prem and aalekh go to the abank and get money out and they go.

Back in jail ragnia nd meher are pissed at preet and ranvir

Meher: couldn't you guys just stay home or just had stayed in the rooms

Preet: acha when we were romancing then you didn't say anything

Meher and Preet start to fight and Ranvir and Ragni quiets them down later in the morning all four arrive and the other four are happy to see them they bail them out and they get yelled at.

Ragni; did its not our fault these two dressed up like girls and came here

Aalkeh: I should of know that these stupid plans are always done by you two

Preet: bhaiya com'on now you don't have to tell anyone right

Prem: do I look happy now lets go home, before anyone finds out and you four better go to school and apologize, before the dean comes and tells bhaiya everything, and they all leave.

On the way back they are all quiet and meher is still angry but preet pacifies her,

Aalkeh; I just have one question for you guys, what the hell were you guys thinking

Ranvir: we were thinking that we wanted to spend the weekend with our girlfriends so we went, and they hug ragni and meher, the car stops out of no where AND THEY GET STRANDED.

Heer: oh no what do we do now

Sadhna: if we don't get home on time we will be in a lot of trouble

Prem: don't worry, we will figure something out

They check and find noting in the car there is no extra tires or gas, so they all decide to walk until they find a gas station and they do so. They all walking and all girls are scared and they hold on to each other. Meher hears something form the back and screams and hearing her scream all four girls scream and the boys get scared.

Preet: what happened?

Sadhna: meher tum bhi and they all walk more.

Ragni: All this walking is making me hungry

Heer; yeah same here

Ranvir; we will look for something close by

They pass a dhaba and they all go there and get something to eat, while eating , some villagers come and start to dance and chaama chaama starts to play and they all look at each other.

Prem: we need to find a place to stay until its morning because its way to dark

Sadhna: what do we do now if we don' get home then bhaiya will kill us

Ragni and meher: we are so dead

Heer: you two shut up its your guys fault we are in this mess

Meher: our faults no its there faults, they were the ones who followed us

Aalkeh: jab bhi koi karbad hoi meaning wen ever there is a problem it's because of these two morons.

They find a cottage and plan to go there for the nite and they go in.

They are walking and Preet makes a noise to scare everyone and they all yell at him and he laughs and says sorry, they go in and someone is watching them well it seems like it.

Meher: im so scared

Preet: ill protect you and he smiles at her

Sadhna see's a rat and runs towards Aalekh and Aalekh holds her and they have a eye lock.

Heer: so tomorrow we will get a mechanic and fix up the car, let's go girls and they leave, girls in one room and guys in the other, None of them could fall asleep prem goes and gets heer and they go, aalekh gets sadhna and they go and ranvir gets ragni and they go and meher is alone in the room, someone comes and puts there hand on mehers mouth and meher gets scared and its preet telling her that its just me.

Meher: preet tum yaha, if someone see's you then

Preet: who will see me huh

Meher: didi ( she points her finger and see's no one around)

Preet: sab gaya aur main aaya and they romance some more.

Ragni and ranvir are outside of the room and are talking,

Ranvir: its so romantic

Ragni: whats so romantic im worried that what is going to happen to us when bhaiya fins out we are all dead.

Ranvir: don't worry I didn't know that my to become brother in law is that strict, and hold ragni.

Ragni: very funnie

Sadhna and Aalekh are just glazing at each other and they are outside sadhna is cold so aalekh hold her and she smiles at him and they talk about something, our first date is just perfect we are together and they hug sadhna inside her mind Is thinking that its perfect right now but once we get home it wont be perfect and worries more.

Heer and prem

Heer: what do we do now I'm responsible for my sisters and now bhaiya will be this is the way I take care of them,

Prem: don't worry everything will be alright and they hug.

They all come back and preet is chasing meher trying to kiss her and she bumps into someone and is shocked its sameer and she gets scared and smaeer is mad seeing preet hold meher, and then ragni and ranvir come in holding each others hand and ragni is shocked and lets go of ranvirs ahnd and looks down, and sadhna comes in smiling and laughing and then stops aalekh asks whats wrong and she says noting, and last heer comes in and see's sameer and is very scared and wants to say something but can't as she is just very scared and it wend on a very mad, sad and angry face of sameer.

End of part two

Edited by jamune - 16 years ago
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awesome update 👏 I wonder how sameer ended up there. hopefully they dont get in so much trouble...plz continue soon 😃

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