FF: Guzarish -Note; Pg 70 (Sept 22, 09)

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poonam

@P.Kamaljit.Sean

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 16 years ago

#61

hey
awesum super update
loved the fight scene
i can imagine
can't wait for part b
can u add me to pm list

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Priyadarshini Basu

@munam_13

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 16 years ago

#62

Shifali yaar awesome update...loved the argument between premeeer...so they have met earlier? when where how? do update soon...

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Anza

@thesemoments

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#63

"as pure as a diamond" i love the description shifali...you're such a good writer loved part 2. cant wait for part 3

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amana

@AmanaR

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Posted: 16 years ago

#64

hi shifali

im sorry i think ididnt comment on the first part

but gr8 updt

hahaha so ratpal chews gum huh??

a band comepetiton sounds fun

oooooooooohhh i like heer

miss no nonsense type

but what made her like that???

wat was the bet about???

wat did prem do??

cant wait

upst asap

Amana:)

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Aradhna

@Anhdara13

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#65

Di that was so interesting! Now I'm thinking my initial impression of the girl in the preview not being Heer was wrong, and the girl is Heer as is this feisty girl in this chapter.. Now what bet is she talking about? Waiting for part B, because I am absolutely loving your story! Like I told Ravz I don't normally read stories written in the first person but you're both really good writers.. Cannot wait for the next bit!

Love,

Radz

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Suhana Ahmed

@Suhana Ahmed

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#66

hey Shifali,

amazing update yar...

i am really growing fond of your FF...

but i have a request yar try to come up with longer parts...

and do add me to your PM list plz...

cant wait to read part 2B... plz update asap..

BEST OF LUCK for next update...

regards,

Suhana.

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Goth

@-Goth-

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#67

awesomee shifali......
prem is prem..angry young man...😆 i love heer wid sarcasm.... can't wait for next part.... pm me too....:)

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sonia

@cute_bear

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#68

shifali that was so good..btw cn u plz add me to pm list

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Deizy

@Deizy

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#69

Hi,fantastic part,i be waiting for the part B...liked this heer....plz add me to ur pm list

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Jwalamukhi

@-Jwalamukhi-

Stunner

+ 9

Posted: 16 years ago

#70

Originally posted by: ravioli_11
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*Edited*

YAY! ANOTHER UPDATE! <- my initial reaction

I wish I was one of the girls in the caefteria☺️ Sorry, went to lala land. I'm guessing dupatta girl is Heer! And even though he hasn't spoken to her or seen her, he's already mesmerized. Heer ka jaadu chal gaya. Aww and she didn't turn around. That must've hurt his ego. It's ok Prem, main hoon na😉. Amnesia? That part was just 🤣🤣 Can't believe she made him say he has amnesia. And she called his band sucky😲 And what bet? Me wanna know.

Anyway....Loved the update. Can't wait to read the next one. Oh! And may I be added to the PM list?

LOL...are you guys betting on my updating huh? To see if I do update or not?😆 Haha, Even I wanted to be the girls in the cafeteria, but like they say, the truth is always bitter. Who isn't mesmerized by Heer, is a question to be asked. Amnesia. You know, what happens when 2 egoistic people come together, and now here is the outcome😆 Yes she did. I will reveal that in the coming episodes. Added you.

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