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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: mistyeyed_25

Nah, Heer has her self respect intact. She wont sleep with that RR - Not even in the show. If they show that, the creatives have really lost it then. Retiring for the night. Hopefully would update this FF tomorrow.

I knwo Heer would never do that and if she did i would literally stop watching this show...
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: mistyeyed_25

cant agree with you more... yep, I think I shall show Prem & Heer ka milan tomorrow, yeh cat and mouse ka game bahut ho gaya... I will also end this RR ka track and send him to timbaktu - but for that to happen - please be patient

perfect plan....lol😆😆... send him far away... i actualyl dont mind waiting in ths FF but in teh show its getting really annoying i just want them to meet..
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Posted: 16 years ago
That was an AWEOME update..... soo preet and harman saw gaurav.... hope they find out he is prem!!! PLZ continue sooon!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
Its awesome and flashback was also very nice.
Pls update soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey misty....
this was an awesome update.....
how can you think of a track so fast and incorporate the scenes from the show in your ff.....
hats off to you for doing so......
i'm sorry if i've not been able to comment on all the updates.....due to lack of time ...but i've read all of them.....
plzzz continue soon....
love
vandy
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Posted: 16 years ago
waitingggggggggg for da update asap.
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesome part and the flashback scene was superb!👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
I dont like to be pushy or anything but umm when u gonna update lol???
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Posted: 16 years ago
Part 23:
sorry guys for this late update. Actually had tears while I was doing this update. Hope you like it... written it dil se.
Gaurav on the other hand passes by Heers Room and sees the door open. He stops by totally mesmerized by her beauty. She is still the same, he thinks. Wohi Ehsaas Wohi Pyar, Wohi masoomiyat, Wohi inkaar. He wishes he can go in. looking around and seeing no one around, he goes in. Heer is sleeping peacefully on her bed and there is food right next to her. Realizing that she has not eaten anything and that he too had kept a fast, he remebered a earlier promise he made to heer about keeping a karwa chaut fast and breaking the fast with her. So he takes a bite of the food and sip of water while looking at her and breaks his fast. He quietly leaves a picture of him as prem next to the plate and as he does that, the scared thread that is tied around his hand, gets stuck on the drawer knob. Trying to remove it, there is a piece of the thread that remains on the door knob.
Dai Jaaan who has happenned to see all this, has tears in her eyes. Humara Prem she thinks... Humara Prem wapas aa gaya hai....A faint smile comes over her as she goes looking for oscar. She knows one way of really knowing, whether its prem or not is through oscar.
Oscar had become really weak in the months that prem had gone. He never ate nor drank and used to sit all teary eyed in Prems Room, refusing to budge from there, looking at Prems Picture. Ever since, Gaurav had entered the house, there was a certain excitement in Oscar and his whines had increased.
Gaurav had heard the whines but was helpless. There was a particular day when oscar had jumped on gaurav , licking him all over and gaurav had pushed oscar away. Then there was another episode, where RR had kicked Oscar and dragged and thrown him away in a corner; Gaurav saw it from a distance but couldnt do anything about it, his heart boiling with rage.
Oscar thinks Gayrav as he caresses heer forward. Bending down and kissing her forward, he acts in true detective style, going door by door looking for oscar but cant see him any more.
There can only be one place, where he can be, thinks Gaurav and he goes to the pond side where as Prem, he used to play with oscar.
Oscar says Gaurav
Oscar Whines, looking away
I am sorry oscy. I am so sorry baby, says Gaurav. Tujhe zyada lagee to nahin. By this time, Gaurav has reached oscy and has started fondling him. Main bahut kharab hoon na oscy, says gayurav. Oscy started licking him and gaurav then starts playing with him, laughing and joking as they roll on the grass.
Prem Puttar says daijaan. Gaurav is taken back. He regains his composure as he lets go of oscy and oscar is licking his hands. Tu mera Prem Puttar hi na says Daijaan. Gaurav looks away, tears in his eyes and as always he could never lie to her. Daijaan steps forward and starts caressing his hair..Prem she says repeatedly. Gaurav breaks down and howls as he hugs daijaan
Edited by mistyeyed_25 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesomeeeeeeeeeee too very nice part update soon asap.

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