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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: srklover93

Hey guys

sorry for the short notice...but i wont be able to update both my ffs today...i hve to go somewhere and wont be bak until night..and i also hve school tomorrow...but i'll surely update tomorrow for sure!!! sorry once again!!!

~Garima

awww its k yaar! i was going 2 update yesterday too but i had to go somewhere too.😳 no prob, yaar!😃 happens all the time! 1 more day...right? no prob!😃
luv sonali
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Posted: 16 years ago
#52
hey yaar..its k..no need to say sorry..we totally understand..
update wenever possible..take care
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey ppls...here's part 2..hope u like it!!

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Part 2

Heer: Meher! Ashlesha! Jaldi karo der horahi hai!

Said Heer while she was standing by the room door to go to class.

Meher: Hum log aarahein hai Heer di! Bas do minute!

Heer: Accha theek hai mein chalti hoon, tum log aajana.

Ashlesha: theek hai Heer di!

Since heer didn't want to be late to class she left early because they had to go to a different building for their classes.

Prem was also going to class with Preet and Harman…when suddenly he saw her coming…the same girl he saw in the morning; she looked even more goregeous up close. Heer didn't notice Prem coming towards her and she accidentally bumped into him, and all her books fell.

Heer: Oh! I'm so sorry!!...woh maine dekha nahin…

Prem: Koi baat nahin…yeh lijiye (handing her the books)

It was the first time he saw her so close to him…Prem was speechless, he couldn't stop staring at her…Heer also was left speechless…she could not believe her eyes…was she dreaming? Or did she really bump into this handsome boy. While all this was happening a song played in the background "Pehla Nasha". Prem kept on staring at her…as Heer realized Prem's intense gaze she slowly lowered her eyes, feeling shy and blushing. All of a sudden Meher yelled from behind "Heer di! Jaldi karo!"

Heer: Ha?....mein aayi!...she took on last look at Prem and ran off to where Meher and Ashlesha were and went to class…leaving behind something precious of hers.

Prem: Excuse me!! Aap apni diary…Prem couldn't finish his sentence, obviously because Heer had already ran off to class without knowing that she had left her diary behind.

Prem: "Heer…kitna pyara naam hai…bilkul ushi ke jaisa"…prem thought with a sweet smile on his face.

Preet: Hey PB…kya hua? Kaun thi woh ladki?

Prem: (unknowingly said) Heer…

Preet: Heer?

Prem: Ha?!...coming out of his thoughts…oh woh kuch nahin, woh mujhse takragayi thi aur phir woh apni diary yahin zameen par bhulgayi…lekin mein ab kaise usko lotaunga? Mujhe to pata bhi nahin uski class kahaan par hai.

Preet: Don't worry PB…aap usko yeh diary kal de dena.

Prem: Haan…theek hai…ab class mein chalte hain nahin to der hajaye gi.

The whole day Prem could not concentrate on his work and in class. He kept on thinking about Heer. Her face kept on flashing in front of his eyes…her eyes were beautiful, Prem thought, It was like he could see through them without knowing what she was thinking.

What was happening to him? Why was he so attracted towards this girl? Did he have a special bond with her that made him be attracted to her? This was a big change in Prem…being attracted to girls was so not his thing, but now he had to figure out why he was so fond by Heer, he had to get to know her!

That night Heer was sitting on the window sill in her room, staring outside in the night sky lost in the thoughts of the "someone special" she met, or more like bumped into this morning. He was the exact copy of her 'Prince Charming' that she always dreamed of. He had the dreamy eyes that any girl could get lost in. His hair was silky as silk with strands of it coming on his forehead. In all, he was the most handsome, dashing, and studious boy she had ever seen. Was he the perfect guy? Was he the one she always dreamed of? Was he the one who she used to write beautiful poems about? All of a sudden Ashlesha snapped her fingers in front of Heer's face, taking her out of dreamland.

Ashlesha: Heer di kya sochrahi ho aap?...asked Ashlesha curiously.


Heer: Ha? Who kuch nahin…bas yoon hi…

Meher: Oh common Heer di! Sahi sahi bataao…kiske baare mein sochrahi thi?

Heer: Arre yaar kisike baare mein nahin!! Sachi!!

Meher: Don't lie Di!!...apki aankhein batarahi hain ki aap wohi ladke ke baare mein sochrahi hain…haina??

Ashlesha: LADKA?? Kaunsa ladka

Meher: Arre ash..wahi jo heer di se takaraaya tha aaj subha

Ashlesha: Ohhh…acha who!!...haan heer di…aap ushi ke baare mein sochrahi ho na??

Heer: Acha theek hai..HAAN..mein ushi ke baare mein sochrahi hoon! Khush!

Ashlesha: ooooo….toh kaisa dikhta hai woh??

Heer: hmmmmm….woh mein tumhe gaake bataaongi!

Then the song "mere Khwabon mein jo aaey" from DDLJ starts playing.

Mere Khwaabon Mein Jo Aaye, Aake Mujhe Chhed Jaaye
Mere Khwaabon Mein Jo Aaye, Aake Mujhe Chhed Jaaye
Use Kahon Kabhi Saamne To Aaye
Mere Khwaabon Mein Jo Aaye, Aake Mujhe Chhed Jaaye
Mere Khwaabon Mein Jo Aaye, Aake Mujhe Chhed Jaaye
Use Kahon Kabhi Saamne To Aaye
Use Kahon Kabhi Saamne To Aaye

Kaisa Hai Kaun Hai Woh Jaane Kahan Hai
Jiske Liye Mere Hoton Pe Aah Hai
Apna Hai Ya Begana Hai Woh
Sach Hai Ya Koi Afsana Hai Woh
Dekhe Ghur Ghur Ke, Yunhi Door Door Se
Use Kahon Meri Neend Na Churaye
Mere Khwaabon Mein Jo Aaye

Jadoo Se Jaise Koi Chalne Laga Hai
Main Kya Karun Dil Machalne Laga Hai
Tera Deewana Kehata Hai Woh
Chup Chup Se Phir Kyon Rahta Hai Woh
Kar Baitha Bhool Woh, Le Aaya Phool Woh
Use Kaho Jaaye Chaand Leke Aaye
Mere Khwaabon Mein Jo Aaye, Aake Mujhe Chhed Jaaye
Mere Khwaabon Mein Jo Aaye, Aake Mujhe Chhed Jaaye
Use Kahon Kabhi Saamne To Aaye
Mere Khwaabon Mein Jo Aaye, Aake Mujhe Chhed Jaaye

Meher: Wah Heer di! Kya gaaya aapne!!!

Heer: *feeling shy* thank you

Meher: to kya yeh ladka aapke sapno ka raj kumar jaisa hai?

Ashlesha: Kya woh vaisa hi hai jaisa aap apne diary mein apne "prince charming" ko describe karti thi? Hm?

Heer: Arre itne saare sawaal mat phoocho…mera sar phat jaaeyga!...aur haan..woh bilkul mere sapno ka raj kumar jaisa hai…jiske baare mein main apne diary mein likhti thi…lekin..meri diary kahaan hai??

kaisa laga??? hope that u all liked it..next update will be...ummm...idk..i'll see..it all depens on time :)
plz leave comments/criticisms...either would do..k..bye

~Garima <3333333
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Posted: 16 years ago
#54
hey
awesum
finally they met
wonder what will happen
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Posted: 16 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: pooji123456789

hey
awesum
finally they met
wonder what will happen



hey thank you soo much!!...well u'll just hve to read the next part to kno wat happens 😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
#56

awesome update garima!!!!👏👏👏 sooo cute...yaay! they met....very cute! luved the song....luved the update...could imagine every scene!😳 plz continue soon!😃

luv sonali

Edited by sonali09 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#57
Hey!
Fantastic update!
Ohh, he has her diary, I wonder if he's going to read it!
After reading your FF it makes me wanna watch the movie Mohabbatein!
Can't wait till the next update!
?xXx?
Sunayna
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Posted: 16 years ago
#58
Hey garima..dat was an awsome update yaar..
Their 1st meeting was really cute...aww can imagine it all..
Prem has Heer's diary!! so is he gonna read it and know abt her sapnon ki rajkumar??
update soon dear
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey nice update, so he has her diary, wonder if he would read it???? waiting for next part...
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Posted: 16 years ago
#60

so cute preemer scence i loved it and also thank god heer left something or our cute prem won't get a reason to meet her lol!too god do continue very soon!

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