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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey pplz...here's the next update!! hope you all like it...sorry for posting it late!!

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Part 3

Heer: Meri diary kahaan hai?

Meher: Arre Di, aapke paas hi to hoti hai, apne aap urke kahin chali jaye gi kya?

Heer: Haan lekin, subhe to mere paas thi, ab kahaan chali gayi? Said Heer worriedly.

Ashlesha: Don't worry Di…mil jaye gi aap abhi sone chalo…bhaut raat horahi hai…theek hai?

Heer: Haan…shayad tum theek kaherahi ho…

Heer was lying down but could not sleep because she was too worried about her diary; eventually she fell asleep hoping that her diary was in safe hands…

Prem was putting his books away after finishing up his work, when suddenly Heer's diary fell on the ground and revealing one of the pages inside. Prem gently picked it up and admired the beautiful handwriting she had…he knew that reading someone else's diary was not a good thing to do. But Prem was curious…he thought why not read just a page…that won't hurt…would it?

The page that was opened was the one from yesterday. It said…

Dear Diary,

Aaj pata nahin kyun…mera mann utavla horaha hai…aisa lagraha hai jaise koi chamatkar hone jaraha hai. Mere mann mein ek khushi si hai jisse mein pehechan nahin paarahi hoon…mein kya karoon?

Aisa lagraha hai ki saari duniya ki khushi mujhe milne waali hai…jabse maa ka dehaant (death) hua hai…tabse mein kuch chup chap si rehene lagi hoon…mera mann kahin nahin lagta…aur Bauji, woh to bilkul kisi se kuch bolte nahin…hai to woh Gurukul ke principal…lekin assal zindagi mein woh bilkul akele hain. Mein to bas unhe khush rakhne ke liye khush reheti hoon…magar mere dil se phoocho to mujhe koi khushi nahin hai…mujhe maa ki bhaut yaad aati hai. Magar aaj…aaj achanak mere mann mein ek khushi ki jhalak aayi hai…jaise koi sitaara aasmaan se tapak ke aane wala hai…kya woh wahi to nahin..jiske baare mein main sapne dekhti hoon? Jiske baare mein main kavita likhti hoon? Kya woh sapno ka raj kumar aaeyga…

~Heer

Prem had a drop of tear coming from his eyes…he was touched by reading her entry. He could feel the sadness that was within her and wanted to take it away from her…he had an urge to keep all the sadness away from her…HE wanted to be her 'sapno ka raj kumar'…because he realized that he was falling in love with her. It was love at first sight…he couldn't realize it till now…but he was falling in love with her........

Next morning Prem left early for class in search of Heer hoping she would be there. To his good luck, she was there…sitting on the bench outside of the building reading her book…even in a simple school uniform she looked stunning…thought Prem. Prem goes up to her and says…

Prem: Ji…woh apki diary kal zameen par gir gayi thi…socha ki apko lauta doon…said Prem in his shaky yet husky voice.

Heer: Oh!....thank you so much…apko pata nahin mein kitni pareshad horahi thi…said Heer in a relieved voice…finally her tensions were gone.

Heer: Main apka kaise shukriya-aada karoon…

Prem: Arre…uski koi zarurat nahin hai.

Heer: Aise kaise…apne itni badi cheez mujhe lautaaiy hai…mujhe aapke liye kuch to karma padega.

Prem: To theek hai…kyun na aap mujhse dosti karlijiye?

Heer: Ji?

Prem: Hi…I'm Prem Juneja…

Heer: Oh…hi mein Heer Maan hoon…

Prem: OHH..to aap principal sahib ki beti hain!! Said Prem in a surprised voice.

Heer: Ji…aur aap Mr. Lalit Juneja ke bete hain…haina?

Prem: Ji haan…bilkul theek kaha…aur ek baat aur…aap mujhe 'aap' mat bulaaiye…mujhe 'tum' bulaaiye..

Heer: Ji…theek hai

Prem: Aur yeh ji-vi bhi mat bulaaiye..ab hum dost hain…tum mujhe Prem bula sakti ho.

Heer: theek hai Prem…

Prem: So…friends??

Heer: Friends!!

They both shook hands and became friends…not knowing that this friendship would lead them to a love relationship. :)


so how was it??? sorry for the short update...but promise a long part next time :)

plz leave comments...i luv getting comments...it really encourages me..and yea plz dont get offended but can u ppl plz not pm me to update...my updating time really varies...i dont really hve a set time to update..hope u all understand..im not trying to be rude...sorry :(

but ya plz tell me how it was....i wrote it really fast..so if there are mistakes then plz forgive me..hve a great weekend!!!😉


~Garima <33333333333


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Posted: 16 years ago
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lovely update garima!👏👏👏 it was sooooo cute!😳 awww prem-heer friends now!!! soo cute....lol luved mehers response when heer asked her where her diary went!😆😳 keep up the gr8 work garima!!!! plz continue soon😃

luv sonali
Edited by sonali09 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#73
hey
super update
loved it i can imagine the scene
do cont soon...
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Posted: 16 years ago
#74
how cute update... continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sonali09

lovely update garima!👏👏👏 it was sooooo cute!😳 awww prem-heer friends now!!! soo cute....lol luved mehers response when heer asked her where her diary went!😆😳 keep up the gr8 work garima!!!! plz continue soon😃

luv sonali



awwww...thanks sonali!!! ur wonderful..will update soon!! :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: pooji123456789

hey
super update
loved it i can imagine the scene
do cont soon...



thank you sooo much...glad ur liking it...i'll update soon!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweetprincezz

how cute update... continue soon



thank you soo much!! =D
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Posted: 16 years ago
#78
Hey!
Loved that update!
Ohh sweet, Heer was worrying about her diary!
The Premeer chat was cute....with the whole Ji and aap! lol!
Can't wait till the next update!
?xXx?
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Posted: 16 years ago
#79
hay gaima..that was a really cute update..short,but cute..so premeer are frnds...yippee!!!...and prem has realised his love?wow!!
eager to read the next 1..update asap
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Posted: 16 years ago
#80
Very nice dear now they r friends.Hehe!Its ok its short and good hehe!

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