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Posted: 16 years ago
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hi im new and since prem has gone i was feeling really feel sad so i thought myt start a ff i have never writtten a ff before so plz forgive me 4 any mistakes. im starting by the last episode which i saw which was where prem is in the fire and also 2day is heers birthday in the ff.
heer sees the news about delhi bomb blasts and starts to get really worried and reaches for her phone and dials prems number quickly and finds out that he s not picking up so therefore is really worried and calls everyone. everyone comes
gay3: kya hua heer aisa kyu chilarahi he tu (plz mind my hindi)
preet: ye bhabhi kya hua kuch to batao
heer is in tears and falls down on the saying
heer:ma wo and she points to the t.v
everyone looks at the t.v and sees the news everyone is shocked
preet:bhai be tho delhi hi gaye hai
gay3:chaldi se prem ko phone lagau
heer: woh apna phone nahi utaraha mena try kiya ha (in tears ) she gets up
gay3 and alll the family member s get worried
lalit:preet ye sab there he galti agar thum nahi mana karthe tho prem aj hamara saath hotha!!
kul: papa abhi koi pe ilzam laana ke time nahi hum ko to prem ko doodna jaana hai
gay3:ha
preet:me abhi 2 ticket book kartha hu mera aur bauji ke liya
heer: me bhi chalun gi thumara saath
preet: ok
preet calls up and confirms the tickets he then tell heer and lalit to get ready they have to leave in an hour
they are all in the bedroom
gay3:chalo hum neeche jathe hai
heer:ji. app jaye me abhi athe hu
everyone goes
heer looks at prems photo and says
heer: mujhe pura yakeen hai ke mera prem mujhe chor kar ne jaa sakhta usna mujhe wada kiya hai ki woh mera saath her rehaga aur wo mera janamdin mera saath he manayga (with tears in her eyes)
she puts the photo down and goes down
heer to preet
heer:preet chale hum ko jaana hoga
preet:ji bhabhi
lalit:chalo
they all go towards the door and heer opens the door and is suprised at who is behind it
preet and everyone come aswell
preet:kya hua bhabhi?
they look at the door aswell and are suprised
who is it?
thats it for 2day if u lyk it will continueas i have another two parts in my mind but if u do not then this will be a one shot
thank you
😃part two
heer: prem
she runs to prem and hugs him tightly prem to hugs her
after a while prem hears heer crying and holds her face in his hands
prem:kya hua heer? thum ro kyun rahi ho ?
heer? thum kahe the prem? aur thum apna mobile kyun nahi utarahe the?
heer is crying really badly and prem is worried
prem : ma heer ro kyun rahe hai? kya hua?
gay3:prem beta woh she tells prem about the news they saw and everything
prem: heer woh ma phone isleya nahi utaraha tha kyunki me flight me tha aur thum ko tha patha hai na ki flight me phonenahi uta sakhata
he holds heers face and wipes her tears
prem:dekho heer me bilkul teek hu me thumare samnau teek tak
heer:prem thume patha hai mujh pe kya beti hogi jab mene woh habar dekhe mere tho jaan
prem puts his hand on heers lip
prem:thum aise fir se khabhi hi nahi kahoge
heer just looks at hima nd hugs him
prem:ab mujhe ander bhi jane doge ya nahe
heer just lets him go and blushes
prem and heer go inside
preets hugs prem
preet:im sorry bhai agar ap ko kuch hota tho me apne app ko maf ne kar pata
prem:deko mujhe kuch nahi hua he aur ab ye rona dhona band
prem meets all his other family members
they all come in the living room
gay3:prem beta thum ja ke fresh ho jao mene thumhare kapre rakhe hai thumare kamre mein
prem:teek hai ma
gay3 goes in the kitchen and calls heer after a while
heer:ji ma app ne mujhe bulaya
gay3:ha beta ja kar sab ko keh do ke kahna lag gaya ha aur a kar kana ka lo
heer:ji ma
heer goes and tells everyone that the food is ready and everyone comes to the dining table.
gay3:heer prem ko thum ne kaha
her ji wo
me yah hu ma
gay3 turns back and prem is there
gay3:prem thum bet jao aur ka lo
prem sits next to heer and he is mesmorized by heers beauty
preet:bhai bhabhi par nahi khana par dayan rakho
prem and heer blush while eating prem catched her hands under the table and heer is blushing and signs him to let go he doesnt let go so she gives up
everyone is in tehir own rooms and heer is in hers staring outside the window
hi guys thats all for 2day i had written a much longer and better one but it wouldnt let me post it saying that i have crossed my post or something if u knw anything bout that plz tell me so anywayz plz comment and from now on updates will be on first page thanks
xxx
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Posted: 16 years ago
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its awesomeeeeeeee too good very nice part do update soon asap.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#3
great, it will be awesome to have an alternate story to turn to with kdmhmd becoming very sad, do continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thnx all i needed 2 knw wz if u lyked it so ill try 2 update 2mrrw if nt thhen definite thursday
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Posted: 16 years ago
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i think it is my prem only
loved it pls continue soon
waiting for heer 's raection
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Posted: 16 years ago
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very nice kaash serial mein bhi aisa hota anyways u do cont soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thnx 4 all ur wonderful comments i ve already gt the nxt part in my head cnt wait to post it 2mrrw

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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow that was gr8....guess its prem... only if the serial was like this....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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😃part two
reacap heer finds out about the bomb blasts and call everyone preet, heer and lalit decide to go to find prem as hes nt piking up his fone. heer goes to the door to ope to go out and someone is standing there.
preet:kya hua bhabhi?
heer looks at the figure of the man standing at the door and has no words to express her feelings. she is just so happy
heer: prem
shes runs to prem and gives him a very tight hug not wanting to let him go
prem hugs her back and then hears her sobbing and holds her face in his hands
prem: kya hua heer? thum ro kyun rahi ho?
heer:prem thum kaha the? aur thum apna phone kyun nahi utarahe the? she says all this while tears are falling through her eyes.
heer: thume patha that ke me kitne daar geye the? she hugs prem again this time more tighter
prem: kyun kya hua heer, woh main apna phone isleya nahi utaraha tha kyunki mein flight pe tha aur eana thum ko ik suprise dehna chata tha. prem gets scared by seeeing heer cry so much but heer doesnt give any answer as she is crying uncontrolablly
prem to gay3
prem:kya haua ma?heer ithne ro kyun rahe he?
gay3: woh hume news par theke ke delhi me bomb blasts hai aur humne soche... kyunki thum apna phone be nahi utaraha te so hum dargaye thum teek tho ho nah beta? in tears
prem:ha ma me bilkul teek hu mujhe kuch nahi hua ab ye rona dona band kyunki mujhe kuch nahi hua.
he again holds heers face in his hands and wipes her tears
prem:im sorry heer ke thume thakleef diya actualy me tujhe suprise dehna chata tha ab chalo ander
heer:thum teek tho ho na prem? with concern
prem: ha heer me bilkul teek hu ab chale
heer nods her head and they go inside. inside everyone is happy to see prem and preet hugs prem and says
preet:bhai im so sorry agar aap ko kuch hota tho me appne app ko khabhi maf nahi kar patha
prem:par mujhe kuch nahi hua he aur dont be sorry
prem then hugs the rest of the family members and everyone goes to the living room
gay3: prem thum jao ke fresh ho jao mene thumare kapre there room me rak diya hai
prem: teek hai ma
prem goes and changes
gay3:heer?
heer:ji ma
gay3:jao aur sab ko kaho ke khana lag gaya hai aur dining table pe ajay
heer:je ma me jati hu
heer goes in the living room and calls everyone to eat everyone comes to eat
gay3:prem kaha he thum ne usko ko kaha heer?
heer:ji woh then is cut out by a voice
prem:me yaha hu ma
gay3:au aur bet kar kana kau thume tho bahuth pookh lagrahi hogi thume to jaaz ka be kaane bhi acha nahi lagta
prem sits down near heer and stares at her
preet:bhai bhabhi ko nahi khana par diyan rakhiya
prem and heer blush and prem smiles at heer.
everyones in their own own rooms and heer is in her room looking out of the window when a voice says
:kya dekh rahi ho
heer turns around to find prem there
heer:kuch nahi voh chand ko dekh rahi the
prem: aaj thum ro rahe the kya hua
heer: prem she hits on the shoulder thum mera pyar ka mazak urarahe ho yahe mera tho jaan he jararahe the jab mena woh habra suna aur thum yaha tho
she s angry an turns away from prem with her hands crossed jus then prem goes behind heer and wraps his muscular hands around heer and put his face next to her ears and says happy birthday
heer is suprised at this sudden movement and feels herself going very warm and feels her heart beats increasing
heer then turns towards prem removing his hands from her very slim waist and says
heer: thume yaad he?
prem:me kesa bhul sakhta hu
prem then puts a blindfold on heers eyes
heer:ye thum kya karahe ho prem?
prem just puts his hand over her lips
prem:ssshhh thume abhi patha chal jayga
he then moves and brings a trolley with a chocolate cake on saying happy birthday and with some candles on it he then removes heers blindfold
heer:prem ye sab karne ki kya zarurat thi
prem then holds heers waist and brings her closer to him. heer is shy and she glances down then he lifts her chin up and says
prem:zarurat thi mena jo aj thume rulaya he woh thumare zindagi ke ahri asoo hoga aur agar thum rowogi tho fir wo hushi ke asoo ho ge gham ke nahi
heer has tears in her eyes and hugs prem prem returns her hug and then says
prem:kya mera gale hi raho gi ya cake bhi kato ki
heer then gets out of the hug blushing
prem: happy birthday to you, happy birthday to you happy birthday, happy birthday happy birthday to heer
heer the blows the cnadles and cuts the cake and gives the first bite to prem and then prem feeds her the cake aswell
heer: thume patah he prem ki ye mera zindagi ka best birthday hoga kyunki mena ye birhday thumare saath guzare hai
prem then hugs
prem:ab thum so jao thumara tho path nahi par mujhe tho bahut neend ar rahi hai
heer: teek hai thum jao aur so jao me bhi so jaugi
prem: with a naughty smile kya me yaha so jao
heer:prem nahi thum apni kamre me so jao she pushes him out side the room to his room and says
heer:thum yaha raho
then she goes to her bedroom and to sleeps.
thats all for today
tell me if you like it
and please comment as it tells me that people like the ff
thank you xxx 😊😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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great u updated very quickly, hope to see the whole premeer wedding we have been cheated out of on the show, HINT HINT for your storyline 😉

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