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Posted: 16 years ago
#11
thnx and dnt worry there will surly be a wedding u never knw mybe 2 aswelll😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
#12
awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitinggggggg for next asap.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#13
hi its nyc 2 see u lot r enjoyn my ff s here s
part 3
recap prem comes back and everyones happy then prem says happy birhday to heer
heer goes to her bedroom and goes to sleep.
heer wakes up to find rays of sunshine hitting her face she slowly removes the strands of hair that are bothering her and slowly makes her way to the bathroom to fresh up
meanwhile downstairs everyone is sitting down then on the dining table
then heer comes and sits next to prem prem looks at her and smiles
gay3:acha ha heer jo hum agaye hai preet ko to bhook lagrahe thi
preet:ha bhabhi aap ne kithne dher ly
heer just smiles
then everyone starts eating
while eating prem grabbed heers hand and wouldnt let go heer looked at hi and signed him to let go him with a naughty smile wouldnt let her go so she gave up and let him hold her hand
ding dong the doorbell went
lalit:ramu kaka zara dekho woh kaun hai
ramu kaka opens the door
lalit:pandit ji aap
gay3:ha mene hi inko bulaya hai
lalit:kyun?
gay3:kyunki me prem aur heer ke shadi ke thareeq fix karney jathi hu
prem and heer are shocked
gay3: mera dono bache itna kuch saha ab me nahi jate kuch aur hojaya isleya mena inko bulaya hai
lalit:thumne bohut achi baat sochi
gay3:pandit ji app hume jaldi ek achi si muhurat bataye
she gives the pandit their horoscopes
pandit:wah kya kundaliya hai ye tho bilkul ek dono ke liya bana hai
prem and heer are shy and look down
preet:ha hume tho patha he pandit ji kyun bhai? he elbows prems shoulder
prem:thum be na preet
pandit:ek acha mahurat in dono ke shadi ke liya kal hai agar app inki shadi kal nahi karay tho fir agale 7 meno ko nahi kara saktha
lalit:pur pandit ji kal
gay3:kal ho jay gi
heer:lekin ma ye sab itne jaldi
gay3:hum sab hai na thum bilkul chinta mat karna
preet:ha bhabhi hum hai na ap tho bilkul chinta mat karya app tho bhai ke chinta he karlo
heer gets shy and runs off to the terrace
prem:me abhi atha hu
prem follows heer
heer is standing look at the stars she is so happy that finally her dream is coming through and that too in one day
prem:ithne be ky sharam heer
he turns her around and holds her waist with this movement heer gets really warm and blushes
prem:ab hum tho shadi karna jarahe he ab kyun sharmarahe ho thum?
heer:prem
she tries to get out of his hands but he doesnt let her go
prem:bolo batao
heer:kya batao
prem:ke thum itne kyun sharmathe ho
heer:kyunki me ek larki hu aur yahe hamara kam he she smiles at prem and pulls his cheeks lighly and then put her hands around his neck
prem: with a naughty smile acha tho thum larki ho isleya thum sharmati ho aur me ek larka hu mera kya
kaam hai
heer blushes and hugs him
prem holds her face in his hands and kisses her cheek heer closes her and then prem moves to her lips jus then heer pushes him back and runs away leaving prem stroking his hair with his hand (yes his signiture move)😛
there u go my friends thats for 2dy i myt not update on friday if i dnt update on friday then i will update on saturday
remember to comment
thank you and bye
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Posted: 16 years ago
#14
awesomeeeeeeeeee too good very cute part so update soon asap.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#15
Fantastic updates (2 & 3)
Loved them both...sooo glad Prem's back!
?xXx?
Sunayna
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Posted: 16 years ago
#16
awesome part 2 & 3
very nice
cont soon...
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Posted: 16 years ago
#17
hi your ff is good but i have one confusion that you have writen that when heer runs to the terrace she looks at the stars but it was day time so how can she see stars...😕
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Posted: 16 years ago
#18
update plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz waitinggggggggg asap now only.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#19
Hey its awsome! this shuld happen in the show, very cute premeer scene..😳 and yh im also confused (is it a mistake?) bcoz i thought they were having breakfast & it was morning & then Heer goes to terrace to look at the stars?😕
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Posted: 16 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: kiran9

hi your ff is good but i have one confusion that you have writen that when heer runs to the terrace she looks at the stars but it was day time so how can she see stars...😕

sorry i 4gt it was daytime 😭😃

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