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Posted: 16 years ago
#21
ur ff is 2 good. arey y cant ekta and her dumb creatives think on same lines .. its always sad in the original story omg. i bet this storyline might have made it top 1 on the trp list. how can they bump prem ..... we want Harshad back.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#22
hehe do continue soon i m ur new reader lalala!lol!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: miss_hyper

sorry i 4gt it was daytime 😭😃

hey that's ok but be careful next time bcoz here are many intelligent like me😉 and urff is really good i m desperately waiting for next part........
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Posted: 16 years ago
#24
update now plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz asap with long part u promised it.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hiya guys sorry about the mistake . so i am starting with the day scene sorry once again if you lot are confused. so heres
part 4
recap its morning and everyones on dining table then pandit comes, then they fix prem and heers date
heer runs from there and comes to the living room prem comes behind her
gay3:heer beta
heer:ji ma
gay3:thumo jo kuch be chaye tho mujhe bata de ne
heer:ji ma abhi tho mujhe kuch be ne chaya agar chaye tho me ap ke pas au gi
heer says with a smile
preet to prem
preet:so bhai finally app ander ah he gayo
prem: with a smile thum be na preet
preet hugs prem
preet:i am so happy bhai ke kal ap ka sapna pora ho jay ga aur jo thakleef ap ne seha woh fr khabhi ap ke zindagi me nahi ayga kyunki ye bhai humesha aap ke saath rehega laxman ke thara
prem gets emotional and has a tear in his eye
prem:mujhe patha hai ke mujhe kuch nahi hoga kyunki thum mere saath ho
its six o clock
lalit calls everyone
lalit:mena sab ko yahi bulaya hai kyunki ab heer is gar me nahi rehegi everyone is shocked and seeing this lalit quickly says kyunki woh ab larki wala he aur woh aur meher ab humara farmhouse me rehaga shadi thak
hearing this heer loked at prem and starting laughing because of the sad face he had
lalit:ab jao heer aur meher aur apna saman pack karo ek dn ke liya
kul:me bhi jaungi inke sath papa
veera: aur me bhi
lalit:teek he thum dono be jao
all them four go their room
in heers room heer is getting her clothes from the wardrobe when she closes the wardrobe she seesprem with a sad face
heer:thum ithne dukhi kyun ho?
prem:ye bhi koy puchne wali bath he
heer smiles and pulls his heeks saying
heer:thum kithne cute lagrahe ho
prem then take hold of this moment and grabs her from the waist
heer:ye thum kya karahe ho prem mujhe chodo
prem:kyun abhi tho thum mujhe cute kaha abh me cute nahi hoo
heer is shy
heer: while glancing down thum hamesha cute lagta ho
prem:acha
prem starts bringing heer more closer
heer:heer aware of his atentions prem mujhe chodo prem mujhe pack karna hai
prem just not listening brings his face more closer to heers heer is feeling very warm and closes her eyes prem is just about to taste the luscious pink lips when someone knocks on the door
heer pushes prem back as she knows that prems mind is diverted and opens the door
prem is cursing the person behind the door
preet:are bhabh ap ne ithne der kyun liy
heer: woh me
preet:anyways ma ap ko bularahi he kyunki apko ko jahne hai
heer:teek hai thum jao me abhi ay
preet goes heer loks back at prem and he has a sad face and she feels sorry for him
he goes up to him
heer:ake band karlo
prem:kyun
heer:bas band karlo
prem closes his eyes
heer quickly kisses him on his cheek and says
heer:thab thak humare shadi nahi hothe thab thak thum is pe ye raat guzar le na and runs from there
prem is shocked by this sudden side of heer and quickly opens his eyes and sees she is not there
thats it 4 2day
im sorry its short itz because i have to finish 2 courseworks and i ve been putting it off the whole week and it has 2 b gven in on monday so prbably wont update 2mrrw maybe on monday if nt monday definite tuesday feel free to comment
xxx
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Posted: 16 years ago
#26
awesomeeeeeeeeeeeee too good very cute part waitinggggggggg for next asap.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#27
its short but a sweet part n i m ur new reader hope next part will be very long😉hope so great job!😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
#28
hey!
fantasic update!
it was very cute!!!!!
Looking forward to the next part!
?xXx?
Sunayna
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Posted: 16 years ago
#29
Hi there..
just read ur FF..
it's really nice..do continue soon..
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Posted: 16 years ago
#30
nice update
will be waiting...

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