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Posted: 16 years ago
#31
waitinggggggggggg for da update plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 16 years ago
#32
Hey dt was a gr8 update, so sweet! rlly cant wait until next part! update wen u can plzz😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
#33
😊hi im so sorry you lot had to wait this long so this is for you shweta heres
part 5
recap lalit tells heer and meher to go to farmhouse as they are from girl side now kul and veera go with them aswell heer kisses prem on cheek
it is night and everyone in the juneja house are in their own roms
prems in his room thinking about heer he has and idea
in the farm house everyone is in their rooms and in heers room she is laying down with her eyes closed
the pipes are rattling outside heers balcony but heer doesnt hear it . hu is it it is none other than prem
prem sees heer sleeping and thinks to himself
prem:mujhe waha neend nahi arahe thi aur ye yaha chen se s rahe ha
he goes and sit next to her on the bed hes lookig at her sleep and notices a strand of hair that is bothering her and pulls it back slowly so she doesnt wake her up then he cant resisit but place a soft kiss on her forehead
heer feels a tingling sensation run past her and opens her eyes only to find prem next to her . she immediatly gets up and sits down
heer:thum yaha
prem:ha kyun me yaha nahi a sakta
heer:nah thum nahi a sakte
prem:kyun
heer:kyunki dulha apna dulhan se nahi mil sakte shadi se pehle she says this shyly
prem:woh tho purana zamane ke baata he hum tho aj ke zamana ke ha na
heer:while playing with prems shirt buttons acha tho aj ke zamana kya kartha hai
prem:with a naughty smile aj ka are you sure you want to know?
heer nods her head but late she finds out his intentions and says
heer:nahi
prem says too late
prem pulls heer closer to him and goes near her face until there is no gap between them
heer:kya kar rahe ho prem koi a jay ga
prem not listening to her comes more closer heer moves her face to the side and closes her eyes prem looks at her and smiles at her simplicity and gives her a kiss on her cheek and says
prem:jab thak humare shadi nahi hoti thum is pe guzar lene na
heer opens her eyes and rememebers she had said that before leaving and blushes and hugs prem
prem hugs her back
then after a while they break the hug
heer: ab thum jao wapas ghar woh thum doond re hoga
prem:nahi me yahi pe raat guzar lo ga aur thum chinta math kar waha ghar pe preet sab kuch samal le ga
heer:thum yaha raat
prem: thum chinta mat kar hum bata kar ke raat guzarl lnge ke aur jo kuch be karunga shadi se bad thak mujhe intazr karna parenga witha naughty smile
heer:blushing prem and pulls his cheeks
heer:acha thum yaha pe comfortable ho jao
prem gets up and sits near heer and they both lean on the backboard of the bed
by talking they both dont know when they shut their eyes and went to sleep. heer embracing prem in a hug and her head on prems shoulder and prem ith one arm around heer and the other interwined in heers
thats all 4 2day im so sorry i didnt keep my promise its just there is too much school work to catch up on and i promise i will post a long update sometime this week
4give me friends
😭
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Posted: 16 years ago
#34
Hey dts ok..btw fantastic update! so cute..gr8 dialogue and scene.👏😳
update wen u can..will wait😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
#35
hey!
nice update...that was really cute!
?xXx?
Sunayna
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Posted: 16 years ago
#36
thanks for the update
waiting for the next part
amana
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Posted: 16 years ago
#37
update plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz asap now only with long part asap.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#38

hi guys thanx 4 bein patient and here is

part 6

recap: prem cant go to sleep so goes the farmhouse heer and prem spend the night talking to eachother and end up asleep

it is morning the sun is up and up with the sun is meher meher is awake and goes to her didi room to wake her up as it is heer and prem wedding day today and she is so happy

in heers room

both the lovebirds are cuddling up to eachother

BANG BANG

prem and heer are startled and uickly wake up

heer:kaun she looks at prem

meher:didi me hu ap jaldi fresh ho ke niche ajaye

heer:teek hai meher me athi hu thum jao

meher:teek hai didi

meher goes down

heer:prem abh tum jao ghar

prem:sad face kya jana zaroori ha

heer:ha aur kasa ho gi humare shadi agar thum or me yaha rahenga tho

prem:ha ye bhi hai , par jane se pehle thum mujhe kuch doge

heer:confused kya?

prem:a kiss he points to his cheek

heer:prem shocked

prem:heer do na

heer:nahi prem thu jao ghar

prem:me kahi ni jaunga kiss dogi tho jaunga

heer:prem ye kya bachpana hai thum jao ma thuma doond rahi hogi me bad me kiss dongi please jao she pouts

prem:promise

heer:ha paka promise ab thum jao

prem gets up from the bed and so does heer prem goes to the balcony and down the pipes or that is what heer thinks

heer is going to teh bathroom when prem quickly comes and holds her from the back and quikly kisses her on cheek

heer:prem

prem:kya meh na thum kiss diya thumne mujhe nahi with that he went of home

in the living room of the farmhouse

heer comes down everyone is sitting in the dining room

kul:deko heer bhi ab agye hai

meher:ao didi jaldi se kahlo

veera:ha babhi jaldi s kahlo phir hum ap ko bhai ke dulhan banai ke

heer is shy and sits down and starts to eat

kul is looking at heer and is happy

in the juneja house

preet and gay and lalit are downstais

gay3:preet prem kaha he me usko ja kar balathi hu

gay3 is halfway to his room when preet remembers prem might not be in his room

preet:ma ap yaha rahiya me ja kar PB ko bulatha hu

gay3:teek hai aur jaldi se ana hum bahut kam karna hai

preet goes to prems room

preet opens the door to find prem coming out the bathroom

preet:bhai ap khab ai

prem:me to kal raat

preet:jut mat boliya bhai mene kal raat ko ap ke kamre me aya tha par ap tho waha nahi the

prem:woh mai
preet:woh mai bas ma apko ko kahna ke liy bulahrahi hai
prem:me aya
prem comes down with preet behind him
gay3:prem thum akar kana kalo
prem smiles
preet:jaldi se kahlo bhai kal bhabhi ke haat ka kahna pake ga
prem just laughs at his brother and looks down shyly
thats it 4 2day im so sorry hvnt updated for 4 days its been a busy week sorry
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Posted: 16 years ago
#39
awesomeeeeeeee too good very nice and cute part waitinggggggggg for next asap.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#40
plz continue soon i really cant wait oh why u stop it there plzzzzzzzzz just continue now lol!

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