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Payal

@-Payal-

Rocker

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Posted: 16 years ago

#951

*booked* ....sheesh....these things just keep adding up....TONS to do....

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amana

@AmanaR

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Posted: 16 years ago

#952

hhhhhhiiiii

i know i havnt commented for long.... sorry*holding ears*

but ths is definetly my fav shot

omg ive alraedy read it thrice and im not done yet

i loved it all

prem and dad momemts....im soo glad he didnt turn out to be thescum bag that i thought he was

yay pratham!!!! god hes too cute. i guess the good looks are in his genes....lol

and yes the last part...... thank god ... i was waiting for something like this to happen

its high time heer confessed..... honestly i was getting impatient

and oh well the kiss is and added bonus

uve really made my day

continue real soon

amana =)

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Sunayna

@x.sunayna.x

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#953

Hey!

I loved the update!

So Mr Mittal wasn't as bad as i thought he was, the father- son scene was really sweet and then Prem talking to Pratham about not being able to look after Heer....ohh!

Heer confessed she loved him, i couldn't stop reading that part over and over!

Can't believe there is only one part left!

Can't wait to read it!

xXx

Sunayna

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Lady_Impala

@Lady_Impala

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#954

awesome shot.glad heer finally realised the truth.and am glad father and son solved all their differences.and neev proposed to veera,so sweet.will be looking forwrd to the last shot.

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PH4EVR

@PH4EVR

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

#955

Hey Di

Umm.........Im speechlesss!!!!!...........that was one awesome shot ........a chapter of reunion....i liked how it finally turned out to be that Mr. Mittal after all was not such bad person. I liked how you have paired all the couples and have filled us with detailed since the beggining.......i liked how the father son moment of both prem and Mittal and prem and pratham wonderfully written and expressed ...........and finally finally glad to know heer too has opened up or whole heartly accepted prem as her husband too.........and im sad and cant believe only one chapter left ........

Di your an amazing writer MashAllah!....................I just was addicted to your FF its was wonderfully written

Thanks

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sonia

@cute_bear

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#956

once again lovely update cant w8 for the next part loved the last paragraph where heer finally gave in to prems love and now they will live happily ever after if only this would happen in the serial

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@shabo24

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#957

Hey di!!!

Very long part....me-like!! And don't worry it was AMAZING! I loved it to bits...very well written specially how you described everything...the Pratham-Prem moments were really well and I am in LOVE with the last part...read it over 3-6 times!! Can't wait ot see what you have in store! Ohh and the proposal was out-of-this-world...too cute!

Shabz

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Lamia Tasnim Liana

@-Liana-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#958

😭😭😭feeling bad to think tht the story ll b end soon i really loved it it was great 👏cant have any word to praise it it was awosome there was everything a reletion between 2friends,the bond of sister&brother,the bond of father&son,reletion of a husband&wife&last but not the least is LOVE.all r tied with the bond of LOVE👏it was mindblowing👏Thanks alot Di for writing this FF Takecare Di.

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ashpush

@ashpush

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#959

wow di that was great..loved it!!!!!!👏

Yay! now everything is alright😃..The reconcilation was put very beautifully..So it was all just a game played by that lady....Thats really sad...as prem had to go without a father in his whole childhood coz of that..But alls well that ends well....

The PH scene at the end was mindblowing!!☺️....Im soooo glad that heer confessed at last...It was beautiful...So will the next 1 be an epilogue or will we get 1 or 2 more updates before that?I guess we will coz now ash has to have her baby..and a new playmate will be there for our pratham😳😳😳..and ofcourse some1 for him to boss about😆😆😆

thanx a ton for such a beautiful update di

Take care

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Nitty

@Nitty2910

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#960

very nice update... i really liked the patch up between prem's dad and prems' and also how heer has finally accepted prem... waiting for the last part.....

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