FF: Blackmail - COMPILED on Page 133 - Page 8

Originally posted by: kimmu

I'll update this tomorrow, i'm supposed to be doing my english homework and then going to sleep... tehehehe.. but couldn't help but read! I promise it'll be long.. :D

*edited*

First of all I can't help but mention Prem loosening his tie and putting up his shirt sleeves. ☺️ I swear I felt myself starting to sweat too.. 🤣

my goodness!!🤣

Now secondly, that was there first meetin? 😲 Oh god it was just brilliant. I got a little lost after Heer bumped into some dudes *cough* prem *cough* arms... and it suddenly started talking about a kiss, and i'm like whhhaaat? Prem kissed her on the first meeting. Then I realized that you were showing Prem's part of the scenerio, like them bumping into eachother and all.

hawww 😳.....my prem **i meant prem in MY fiction😛** is not that stupid to make such a drastic step in the first meeting😛

Oooh so Veera made these two meet eachother. And Heer was wearing salwaar kameez? *crosses arm* Waiiiit! *takes arms back out* I'm pretty sure you have a good sense of style so I'll trust you and put some really pretty salwar kameez on Heer in my imaginationnnn *shows the imagination rainbow ontop of head like spongebob* 😎

when did i mention? it's Veera who made these two meet each other😕.......honey I am NOT ekta....so don't try to be predictable when it's "MY" fiction🤣

Awww... Ash is Prem's so called sis over here? She's soooo sweet! Really, the cutest thing ever! Reminds me of me when i was asking for a chocolate bar from my bro... HE LOVES ME MORE SHABZ!!! *sticks out tongue*

awwwww.......even my bro is the best........although he is 6 years older than me but he shares all his secrets with me and my appi........we siblings are like friends forever😃

Oh and should I expect a love story for Ash too? 🤔 Preet and Ash, or Preet and Meher........... or best of all Preet and Sukriti. ☺️ Sorry sorry, me is getting carried away.

wut am i missing here???😕.......yeh sukriti kaha se aa tapki??😕........wait, if ur talking abt some other fictions then sorry dear i don't read any fiction **covering face with dupatta**........i don't have time to read one as i decided to chose writing over reading..............didn't i mention preet as ash's hubby......so don't worry abt them😃😛

Prem doesn't have a family! You have noooo clue how happy i was to read that. Finally, no Baujiii!! No Prem having to cry for Bauji, no nothing like that. Aaaaaah me loving this. Danggit, but at the same time i feel sad. He doesn't have anyone. Except Preet and Ash ofcourse, who would want more? I know if I had a Preet with me, i'd be happy with anything else.. lolz.. I mean Preets just like that. 😆

🤣 .........yippiiiii no ullu....**dil dance mare**...u have to read my reply to angie di's feedback for this shot, then u will know why i didn't include any family😉

Girls going after Prem, and dannnnngg!! That many? *raises eyebrows at Prem*.. Good lord, what has this munda been up to?? And plastic girls? 🤣 Perfect discription, no need to say more. 😆😆 AAAAH! Then he saw Heer, and he saw true beauty. The natural-ness... Loveed it! Can't wait for the next parttt!!! 😃😃

why raising eyebrows??? ISN'T HE HOTTT!! **ehm ehm ehm yes i m talking about my son prem (looking away)**.........i swear i hate those gals who go after rich bachelors 🤢, makes me feel sick.....one perfect example is Mallika 🤢 of RR.........maaaaannnn i actually wanna hear "plastic girl" from prem's mouth😳😛😆

Originally posted by: shabo24

*runs desperately*
*falls down*
*stands up*
*brushes off clothes*
I'm here!!!!😉

awww welcome janu🤗

Uhhhh such a bad day, soooo much homework and on top of that it rained through out our lacrosse practise...I was just thinking, "Is there ANYTHING good happening today?" when BAM, I log on and see you updated!!!

awww glad that my update did make ur day at some point😳......

Awwww loved how you started, showing Prem all stressed and frusterated, then you panned in on his thoughts! Two thumbs up!👍🏼👍🏼

thanks hon😳

Haila, kye encounter tha, first I though you meant that Premu was kissing Heeru then I realized you were doing this swithero thing....and the lightbulb went off in my head!!!I love how you made Veera good in this FF, as of now.....😕.......but me-me is hoping that Veera plays cupid to them later on.......*hopeful*

suggestion is kept under consideration😉

Awwwww me-me was also loving Preet-Ash scenes, that are soooo funny, I was laughing so much!!!😆And no kimzie, your brother PRETENDS he loves you more, see he doesn't want to be sad, but in all honesty I have to tell you, he loves ME more....All is fair in love and war....ohhh and Ammi, you won't get it...in short, me and Kiran's brother (Vikki) are in love....!😳

u n vikki (i guess he is younger than me😛) are......WHAT???!!!!!!........is this some kinda joke or u 2 r really serious???😲

Me wanting to see the love interests you bring in for Preet and Ash....this is going to be so much fun *rubs hands together* YESH!!!!!! Premu Bhaiyu has noooo FAMILY.....*dances in circles* No more Lallu, Gallu, Harmu, Billu, Veeru.....YESH YESH YESH!!!! Now all Heer has ot do is step in and start her magic!!!!

u missed that point too???😕.....preet and ash are already married hon.......but i will "TRY" to bring some emphasis on their characters as well....no promise **hands up**.......n yeah again have to read my reply to angie di's feedback for prem's family issue.......😉

OMG, that ending was PERFECT!!!!!!!!😉Just wow, how he caught her in his strong mucular arms...Haila, I wish Vikki caught me....😍.....ehm ehm ehm.....i will skip it **muh chupaying under dupatta**..OK me no going in to my la-la land, so before I go, BIG round of appluse!!!!👏

Keep writing!

Shabz

Originally posted by: iqbals4ever

awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!!👏

Originally posted by: tania86

thanks for the sweet reply beta.......good luck with homework😉me-me getting distracted.....and hungry!!

luv

rehana😊

WOW thats all i can say! u made me speechless hi di b4 i start talking non-stop i better introduce myself im sonali and i totally luv your ff! its amazing u got me addicted di everything was perfect in your update the beginning the ending and omg a cliffhanger! i cant wait 2 c wat happens next!...plz update soon!😊

Originally posted by: sonali09

WOW thats all i can say! u made me speechless hi di b4 i start talking non-stop i better introduce myself im sonali and i totally luv your ff! its amazing u got me addicted di everything was perfect in your update the beginning the ending and omg a cliffhanger! i cant wait 2 c wat happens next!...plz update soon!😊

Originally posted by: hil4eva

wow! prem a play boy...hehe....awesome as usual! ur updates usuallly leave me anxious abt the next part! plz update soon!

"hey woman....watch ou...." the rest of the words refused to come out of his mouth as soon as those innocent yet piercing eyes looked up at him.......completely unabled to blink his eyes even for a fraction of time, he found himself lost in admiring the sparks of diamond pearls in those almond shaped eyes.....is she for real??.......he has never met a girl with this simplicity.......or should it be, no simple or pure girl has ever come across his life......not that he took any of them seriously.......but this one seems pretty natural yet perfect.......no fake stuff, no heavy make-up, in fact.....umm no smile.......why isn't she smiling??.......isn't she supposed to be feeling on top of the world being in the arms of the most eligible bachelor in the town, the perfect PJ??.....huh!!!!..... all of a sudden coming out of his thought, Prem helped the girl stand properly......

Now examining the girl from bottom to top with a smirk playing on his lips......nervousely overlapping toes while trying to stand correctly.......coming up to her hands, which were busy playing with the tip of her dupatta, then quickly fixing it over her shoulder, so that her soft satin baby pink anarkali churidar with silver embroidery work on it looks decent on her, she again came back to the 'playing with the tip' session......hmmm, he never met a girl before who wears traditional costumes.....then who is this girl and what is she doing in 'his party'?........his thought got distracted as soon as his eyes fell on those trembling lips, that he immediately got the urge to taste them.......abruptly taken aback by his own thought, considering the fact that being a popular casanova he has never felt to touch anyone's lips with his which he badly wanted to do right now......enjoying every little part of her nervousness, Prem decided to continue his admiration phase for some more time......

Composing herself from his grasp, in stead of thanking him for saving her from falling, she stood there like a statue as if her feet were glued to the cloudy reflective blue shiny tiles on the floor........'my lord!!...is he checking me out???.....'.....sensing his attentive look at her direction, she tried to distract the building nervous level by looking everywhere but him........'where the hell am I stuck in???'

"Thank God you are here!"......this unexpected voice did make him curse the person for breaking his concentration.......keeping his rage under control, he turned his attention towards his secretary........"Sorry yaar!! I was supposed to pick you up but....." noticing his boss, Veera immediately changed her tone......"Sorry Sir!!.....I wa...." cut by him, "How do you know her??"......."She was appointed to the Management Position last week.......since you wanted all your staffs to attend this party, so she...." again interrupted by her boss........slipping his hands into his pockets while supporting himself against the decorated pillar, after crossing his legs Prem skillfully expressed his feelings, " Veera....Veera.......Veera!!!.......my dear Veera!!....did anyone ever tell you that???"......confused at his boss's sudden question, Veera asked rather curious to know about herself "that.....What sir??!!!"........still smirking at her while kept stealing glances of his new employee, Prem continued, " yehi ke.....you unnecessarily talk too much......I asked, how did you know her NOT how did she land up here......jitna poocha geya sirf utna hi batana sehat ke liye achcha hota hai......right Msss.????" waiting to hear her voice, when Veera stepped in, "Heer......her name is Heer", noticing the look on her cheif, she bit her tongue to quietly apologize......

Taking a deep breathe to let out the frustration, Prem unwillingly smiled at Veera for appreciating her help, "Thanks!!!...".....turning his attention to his favorite side, he demanded, "....but how come I am unaware of the fact that a dumb person is working in my office for the last one week???....."

'Oh dear!! first he kept on staring at me like a low-life creep and now calling me a dumb???....I DO CAN SPEAK YOU M****......did anyone ever tell this guy that he needs some lessons on 'woman issues' ??.......woow as if it wasn't enough from him that now he gotto be my BOSS??'.......quickly grabbed Veera's hand, Heer dragged her to a corner after giving an apologetic look towards him, "Excuse me Sir!!".......before he could make farther comment, this time her soothing voice has left him speechless.......

"I beg you please tell me, he is not our Boss....." pleaded a nervous Heer......."Unfortunately I have to say 'YES' he is the one and only 'the PJ' of Juneja Group of Industries...." Veera answered her colleague sarcastically......"PJ?" asked a confused Heer......."don't tell me you have never ever heard of the one and only business casanova 'the PJ'..." examining the confused look of her friend, she rolled her eyes in disbelief, "which planet are you from honey???"......being new to this city of Mumbai, she had no clue what her friend was talking about, however, she decided to make a guess, " does it stand for 'the Perfect Jerk'?? cause that's the only explanation I can relate to him....."........cracked up at Heer's sense of humor, Veera corrected her, " good one.....but it's 'the Prem Juneja'...."......'Prem', the name itself just sounded musical to her ears......she couldn't believe a person, who, she highly doubt know the meaning of love, was actually named after such an authentic word.....looking back at his direction, she just stared at him, but this time with an amusement in her eyes.....