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Was waiting for this part👏u had made me like always speechless now i cant wait for the next part which may b update next week🤔sooooooo a long waiting............. but its great the story is totally hatk,Preet??Prem&Ash Prem's Friend&Ash call him Bhaia????thats the word i always want to hear frn her[:]]but she never say so😔ami bhalo achi,asha kori tumio bhalo thako😳

awesomeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitinggggggggg for next asap.

Oh dear, I have been soo eagerly waiting for your update....

Originally posted by: tania86

awww thanks hon😊

thanks for the lovely feedback di😊

glad u liked it dear😊

thanks sweetie😊

Originally posted by: lian

Was waiting for this part👏u had made me like always speechless now i cant wait for the next part which may b update next week🤔sooooooo a long waiting............. but its great the story is totally hatk,Preet??Prem&Ash Prem's Friend&Ash call him Bhaia????thats the word i always want to hear frn her[:]]but she never say so😔ami bhalo achi,asha kori tumio bhalo thako😳

Originally posted by: fijiana

poor prem have to wait some more before finally meeting his heer.and yay their first meeting.ok you seem to make characters different from what they are in the show,which is a good thing.prem a complete player,ashlesha more into her studies suring her college years and veera a non bratty(is that a word even) person.but atleast heer is the same.cant wait for short shhot no 4.

Updated my comment, sorry took so long. Hehe.. Hope its long enough.

Originally posted by: angel82

Oh dear, I have been soo eagerly waiting for your update....

OK since Veera is her colleague I assume she was already working in Prem's office and Prem didnt know about her until this day ....I love this playboy Prem... 😆 Very interesting....So Preet is Prem's best friend and Ashlesha is Preet's wife...And Ash was with Prem and Preet at Uni...Kool....In a way I like Prem not having a family of his own...Yaar the show itself is eating my head with tooo much family drama...Good that in your FF he doesnt have GFN brothers and sisters...And thats one reason he gets to enjoy life so much in ur FF...

Loved PH's first meeting and that tooo in a party at the Palace....and I am very eager for the next part ( well that isnt something new irte?)

*runs desperately*
*falls down*
*stands up*
*brushes off clothes*
I'm here!!!!😉

Uhhhh such a bad day, soooo much homework and on top of that it rained through out our lacrosse practise...I was just thinking, "Is there ANYTHING good happening today?" when BAM, I log on and see you updated!!!

Awwww loved how you started, showing Prem all stressed and frusterated, then you panned in on his thoughts! Two thumbs up!👍🏼👍🏼

Haila, kye encounter tha, first I though you meant that Premu was kissing Heeru then I realized you were doing this swithero thing....and the lightbulb went off in my head!!!I love how you made Veera good in this FF, as of now.....😕.......but me-me is hoping that Veera plays cupid to them later on.......*hopeful*

Awwwww me-me was also loving Preet-Ash scenes, that are soooo funny, I was laughing so much!!!😆And no kimzie, your brother PRETENDS he loves you more, see he doesn't want to be sad, but in all honesty I have to tell you, he loves ME more....All is fair in love and war....ohhh and Ammi, you won't get it...in short, me and Kiran's brother (Vikki) are in love....!😳

Me wanting to see the love interests you bring in for Preet and Ash....this is going to be so much fun *rubs hands together* YESH!!!!!! Premu Bhaiyu has noooo FAMILY.....*dances in circles* No more Lallu, Gallu, Harmu, Billu, Veeru.....YESH YESH YESH!!!! Now all Heer has ot do is step in and start her magic!!!!

OMG, that ending was PERFECT!!!!!!!!😉Just wow, how he caught her in his strong mucular arms...Haila, I wish Vikki caught me....😍OK me no going in to my la-la land, so before I go, BIG round of appluse!!!!👏

Keep writing!

Shabz