FF: Blackmail - COMPILED on Page 133 - Page 10

Originally posted by: tania86

Prem', the name itself just sounded musical to her ears......she couldn't believe a person, who, she highly doubt know the meaning of love, was actually named after such an authentic word.....looking back at his direction, she just stared at him, but this time with an amusement in her eyes.....

Originally posted by: angel82

Ok I'm back...

To begin with , loved the way you described Heer's beauty , simple yet elegant and that too thru Prem's eyes...

thanks di....😊

Loved the way you brought out Prem's thoughts both while he was looking into her eyes and later while checking her out....

''his thought got distracted as soon as his eyes fell on those trembling lips, that he immediately got the urge to taste them......''

This line sooo reminded me of Prem's dialogue from the show,''Jab bi tumhari kaapthein hont dekhtha hoon tho sihar jaatha hoon mein'' .

wooow........even i realised it now😲.......i totally forgot about that scene during writing this part coz when i write any story, i forget about everything while i let my imagination do its' work😉

'' He has never felt to touch anyone's lips with his '' Thats something I like about this casanova Prem, atleast something is reserved for his true love..

he is a such casanova who maintains his own rules and boundaries.......😊

All the while, I was trying hard to imagine Our Prem (or rather, ur son Prem) as the casanova Prem(I know I'm pathetic) But when the part,

''slipping his hands into his pockets while supporting himself against the decorated pillar, after crossing his legs Prem skillfully expressed his feelings, " Veera....Veera.......Veera!!!.......my dear Veera!!....did anyone ever tell you that???"......

came , donno from where I suddenly had RR in my mind😆....The way he said Veera , veera , my dear Veera was sooo RR ish...I was reminded of his Veera ,Veera, you stupid girl, crazy girl..😆

WHAT???!!!! 😲 did RR really said anything like that???........I swear i always fast forwards his parts (i know i m smart😳😆) and skip his part in update too (ain't i gr88?😉😆)......seems like dialogue writer of kis and me are bichre hue siblings😆😆

Then after trying hard I read that once more imagining Prem doing that part.

'jitna poocha geya sirf utna hi batana sehat ke liye achcha hota hai' 😆 I liked that

And he called Heer dumb 😆..PJ -the perfect Jerk...😆 that was funny....

thanks😳

I kinda guessed rite that Prem didnt know about Heer working for him...Still there are soo many things I want to know..But being a good girl (or lady😆) me will patiently wait for next part...

well done😃.....n thanks for the lovely feedback di........always boosts up my energy😊

Luv,

Angie

Originally posted by: shabo24

I am HERE!!!

welcome hon🤗

Wow, two updates so quick in a ROW!! We are lucky naa? *looks around for supporters*

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Excuse me while I go in my "Prem-Heer-are-the-best-so-lets-drool-all-over-the-keyboard" session!! The way you described what Bhayiu was think......ufffff!!! "The diomand pearls in the almond shaped eyes" Wah! Kya baath hai di!!!😍 I wanna guy like Prem *goes into dreaming session*

now it's my turn to ☺️......isn't my son choooo chweetttt **pulling his cheeks and kissing that cute nose of him**☺️

🤣 OMG, His admiration phase?!?!?! Here am I goign through sessions and he is going through phases??? I dunno why I find this so funny so excuse the out of control laughter session I am going through at the moment!🤣

ehm ehm ehm☺️☺️...u don't want me to go in details.......do u girl **raising one eyebrow**??!!!!......i have some kids as my readers so lets skip the "phase" part😉

Haha, loved how Heer was looking at him all confused like "My Lord, is he checking me out?" Heer darling, a word to the wise, WHO CARES????*goes in to screaming session*

exactly who cares?? when it's "THE PREM" who is checking u out rite shaboo😉??

Veera and Heer?!?!😲Friends??? ahhhhh this is going ot be interesting!!!! I hope you take into consideration about making Veera cupid. Cuz if I may toot my own horn, it is a good idea!*goes into praising session*

lets see what i can do about it😉

HAHA, Prem told Veera off "You talk to much"🤣....am imagining this happening in the show!!!"Dil Dance Maare Session"

I swear i want him to break her index.....she using her index, just makes me break my laptop😡......

Awww Heer doesnt want him to be her boss??? Becharra Prem, now he has to win her heart!!!!🤔Ahhh well, easy enough!!

wud u want a boss, who checks you out like a jerk in the first meeting😉???.....i wud've kic*ed his a** off right away and screwd that job😕........but here is a different story for heer as she has to work there against her will😛......

PJ!!!!🤣Perfect Jerk?!?!!?🤣🤣🤣Me-me loving this FF more and more each minute!! I LOVE HEER!! BHABHI!!! DO YOU HEAR ME!!! I love her sense of humor, that ought to bring an interestign twist in the whole thing!!!

**hands on my ears** yeah yeah i heard that......good gal😉.........abt the interesting twists JUST WAIT N WANCH hon😉😃

Haila.......uffff WOW, what a paragraph!!! It was so *shivers* APT for Prem's name....!Wonder what will happen next?😍*day dreaming session*

I know that's why i kept his name prem 😍😍(if gaye3 can say this even though she got to know prem when he was only 3 or 4 then so am I......I can also say that when i gotto know harshu when he is only 25 or 26😉😆)🤣

Shabz

amzing..super..awesome..fantastic update like alwayz...ahaha i thought it was hilarious wen heer said perfect jerk! plz continue soon!