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Lamia Tasnim Liana

@-Liana-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 17 years ago

#291

Rehana Di,i have no words to praise u&ur Writing it was out standing👏👏👏Superb Mindblowing.it The pain tht Heer was Feeling &Prem could also feel the same👏👏👏.Feeling bad for Heer as well as for Prem she misunderstood Prem but our Prem Find her😳after 2 long years👏👏Thts like PREM & the baby soooooooooooooooooooooooooooo sweet i just love the part tht u discribe about the baby😳.bytheway i could sense tht Heer ll have Prem's child&she did👏👏👏i cant wait to read the next part ,how Prem ll react???What ll Heer do??&the baby,Prem's child how ll He feel???????cant wait to read

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Aradhna

@Anhdara13

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#292

Di that was amazing. Loved the way you've portrayed Prem's 'melting' of the icy exterior...

Heer's breakdown was spectacularly written.. I could feel her pain, it was so sad.. And Prem 'feeling' her hurt was just too good.. it's so nice to know that he isn't completely heartless, and it's our Heer that makes him feel again..

So sad, Heer woke up alone! But she didn't even wait for him! I don't know who to blame more, Prem for leaving the room after Heer broke down in his arms, or Heer for leaving him, and then the country!

Prem found Heer! Prem found Heer! *dances* Haila! *shocked* Heer has a kid?? *supershocked* Prem's either going to be completely shocked, angry or hurt.. I'm banking on the second..

Waiting for the next shot! (I love the way you churn them out so fast..)

Love,

Radz

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--Anna--

@--Anna--

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 17 years ago

#293

awesome loved it totally!!!

I am sure its prem's kid!! pakka sure!! But again I think prem will fail to understand Heer..

Do continue soon

Anupama

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--Anna--

@--Anna--

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 17 years ago

#294

hey

loved it totally

I am guessing its Prem's child but prem is not gonna aceept this truth easily.. lol...a fab part...

do continue soon

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Shagufta

@JanuaryEmbers

Dazzler

Posted: 17 years ago

#295

fantastic part cont soon plz!!!!!👏

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ruexangel

@ruexangel

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#296

awwww sure hon, if i remember🤔........u see i m absent-minded, but don't worry it won't be before next friday😃........thanks for appreciating my work........loved ur feedback😊

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rehana

Oh its my pleasure rlly😳!..& thanks!

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Rehana Kazi

@Rehana86

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#297

Originally posted by: @nup@m@

hey

loved it totally

I am guessing its Prem's child but prem is not gonna aceept this truth easily.. lol...a fab part...

do continue soon

awesome loved it totally!!!

I am sure its prem's kid!! pakka sure!! But again I think prem will fail to understand Heer..

Do continue soon

Anupama

awwww thanks hon.....it's always nice to see ppl make prediction abt this fiction.......but lets keep it a secret abt the kid till next shot😉.......glad u loved it hon😊

Originally posted by: ashpush
oh my god dat was brilliant!!!
never expected heer 2 hav prem's child
beautiful hav no words 2 say👏
do cont soon

awwww always adore ur feedback😊

Originally posted by: lian
Rehana Di,i have no words to praise u&ur Writing it was out standing👏👏👏Superb Mindblowing.it The pain tht Heer was Feeling &Prem could also feel the same👏👏👏.Feeling bad for Heer as well as for Prem she misunderstood Prem but our Prem Find her😳after 2 long years👏👏Thts like PREM & the baby soooooooooooooooooooooooooooo sweet i just love the part tht u discribe about the baby😳.bytheway i could sense tht Heer ll have Prem's child&she did👏👏👏i cant wait to read the next part ,how Prem ll react???What ll Heer do??&the baby,Prem's child how ll He feel???????cant wait to read

awww sweetie, love u for the wonderful adjectives from you😃.......always been an inspiration for me😊.......bless you

Originally posted by: Anhdara13

Di that was amazing. Loved the way you've portrayed Prem's 'melting' of the icy exterior...

Heer's breakdown was spectacularly written.. I could feel her pain, it was so sad.. And Prem 'feeling' her hurt was just too good.. it's so nice to know that he isn't completely heartless, and it's our Heer that makes him feel again..

So sad, Heer woke up alone! But she didn't even wait for him! I don't know who to blame more, Prem for leaving the room after Heer broke down in his arms, or Heer for leaving him, and then the country!

Prem found Heer! Prem found Heer! *dances* Haila! *shocked* Heer has a kid?? *supershocked* Prem's either going to be completely shocked, angry or hurt.. I'm banking on the second..

Waiting for the next shot! (I love the way you churn them out so fast..)

Love,

Radz

lollll.......once again, lets just keep the 'kid' thingy a secret till next shot😉😛........always loved ur feedback........thanks dear😊......means a lot to me