FF: Blackmail - COMPILED on Page 133 - Page 11

Originally posted by: tania86

wooow........even i realised it now😲.......i totally forgot about that scene during writing this part coz when i write any story, i forget about everything while i let my imagination do its' work😉

awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!!👏

I'm late everywhere. *rolls eyes*

*edited*

Okay i'm back! HEY! I heard that mumbled finally... 😆😆

Loved how you started off, with Heer in Prem's arm and Prem getting lost. Awwww.... I found it funny how first he was admiring her and then he noticed that she wasn't admiring him. Oooh, huge Ego crusher, eh? The guy thats adored by so many females, is being practically ignored/thrown away from this simple girl who he somehow got attracted to. Loving the idea. ☺️

OMG Prem checking out Heer. Aaaah, I can't really imagine THE Prem doing that, but THIS prem can. So I could just see his naughty grin, and his eyes wandering around her body. AAAAAH, THIS Prem's gonna make me go crazy. 😍 I'm not plastic, would be like me? Do I get a Prem like this? I WANT THIS PREM! ☺️ Heer's lucky I like Premeer's chemistry. *crosses arms an pouts*

Loved how you showed both parts of the situation, and Heer thoughts. Made me crack up. 🤣 Like i could just imagine her baffled look infront of Prem, while he checked her out. Poor her, bet she felt like killing Veera right then. Getting to Veera, her entry... perfect timing! 😆😆 Loved how she changed her tone when she saw Prem. I don't know why I was thinking this, but was Veer ever interested in Prem the first time she saw him... she probably was. Tehehehehehe......

Hehe, I could imaging the look on prem. I bet he was planning on kidnapping Heer or something. 🤣 And then Veera comes in between. Just love the way Prem talks to Veera, i'm sorry i just can't find Veera to be nive, so I like it when she's being scolded by Prem. Something I REALLY want to see. 😆😆

Prem's such a cool dude, resting against the pillar. Sorry couldnt' help it. 😆😆 Wait the only thing were missing is this. 😎

Haila! He called her dumb! 😲 I guess he was provoking her to talk, so did she say that outload, or in her head? I think it was in her head, cuz Prem would be on the verge of strangling her, i think, if she said it outlouf. Oh and btw, what does M****.... I've been thinking of all the bad words i've ever known, but nothing starts with an M..... I'm sooooooo confused. 😆😆 RINKI HELP MEEEE!!! If I'm desperate enough to know, watch me google it. 🤣

Anyways, loved how Heer was attracted to Prem in a sense, no matter how much she was hating him. Aaah, I really badly wanna know what happend between thim. Continue soon!!

okay didz, i gots some info for you! in my comment i said that the third shot was on page 8 rite? well thats rite and the fourth shot is on the 11th uff this whole readjusting in the forum is making the pages increase or decrease...think u should just post the link up, cuz the new readers and ppl like me reading the parts again will be confused as to where it is! lolz

Originally posted by: kimmu

I'm late everywhere. *rolls eyes*

*reservedd*

OYEEEE! I am not closely related to slugs!! Now turtles, there another story. ☺️
Sharaapppp! Stop makin fun of me... ooh don't worry me will tell armi everything.. muahahaa.. *runs off to tell armi but falls down as rinki pulls on teh back of her shirt*
CHEATEERR!!

^^ ahh i said jk, but now seeing ur sneakiness me has decided u be a relative of the foxy fox! hehe

^^ oh gosh kimzie, now ur blushing at turtles?? did U.K have something to do with it? -raises eyebrow, tapping foot-

Ahh i like foxes even better. ☺️
OMG! Your such a cheater *shakes head*
How could I forget Preetinki? *forgets about armi and runs to Preet*
We are REALLY leaving Armi in teh dust now. 🤣

Where spamming Rehana di's fic too! 😲 Sowwwiiie!