FF: Blackmail - COMPILED on Page 133 - Page 12

Originally posted by: ~Rinki~

ahh no!! i missed two parts! like my teach says "dog-gone it" lolz

ill come bak to update my comment, on both parts!! so be ready for a Rinku session lolz

rinkz

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kay am here now!! 😃

lets see, hmm okay starting on Shot # 3 is not on page 8, its on page 6, confusing poor old pplz like me 😆 so u might wanna clear that in the index di! 😉 and shot # 4 is on the 9th page not 11th 😲😲😆

awww it's ok hon.......i didn't mind.......after all i was rite........

SHOT # 3

have i mentioned i am totally enthralled in this story...becuz u make it sooo suspenseful 😲 hehe cnt wait to find out prem and heer's little story 😳😃

o-kay! 😆 that rlly sounded cheer-leaderish 😆

whoo first of all, his loosening his tie and folding his sleeves up brought a rlly hot image in my mind ☺️😍😆

ahem ahem anyway what was i saying? oh yesh! then comes the flashback....sounds sooo mysterious huh? 😆😆 loved the description of the place, ah i knew it was heer the minute she came up, and then she was caught by someone! 😲😳 that had to be i mean rlly HAD to be premu!!! 😳😆

i loved the whole prem-preet-ash interaction, and then ash calling prem "bhaiya" i was like awww shoo cute!!! 😃 and then whole thing in italics giving us a slight glimpse of his past, he doesn't have a family except for preet and etc...it made me happy that he wasn't related to all those punks in the crazy house but also made me feel bad for him, he was obviously scared of being close to preet's family for any reason, made me wonder exactly why, especially of that "happy" in front of family, i thought that maybe he is the way he is rite now thanks to his family? or maybe he never had that love and care that one needs frm their family to be able to communicate with everyone else, which went for his way of tlkin to veera...ah am i confusing you? 😕😆😆 lets leave that alone now!

lollll.....😆.......nope u rn't confusing me dear........i got ur point.......well at this moment, all i can say is that HAVE PATIENCE😉.....

and then ash-preet are married!! aww sho cute! she seems so bubbly and full of innocence here, much better than ash in the show 😃

thanks for appreciating it hon😊

ah prem was trapped by some chicks, haha "plastic girls" had me cracking up!! 😆😆 ahh then he was bamboozled by heer's "piercing yet innocent eyes" 😳😳 how shweet!! me loved this part! let me start on the next prt huh? 😆

thanks for the wonderful feedback.......glad u loved it😊

SHOT # 4

lets start with this 🤓 "completely unabled to blink his eyes even for a fraction of time, he found himself lost in admiring the sparks of diamond pearls in those almond shaped eyes.....is she for real??.......he has never met a girl with this simplicity.......or should it be, no simple or pure girl has ever come across his life......not that he took any of them seriously.......but this one seems pretty natural yet perfect.......no fake stuff, no heavy make-up, in fact.....umm no smile.......why isn't she smiling??.......isn't she supposed to be feeling on top of the world being in the arms of the most eligible bachelor in the town, the perfect PJ??.....huh!!!!..... " aww he was dazzled by her eyes and simplicity!!! 👏😳 the last part though made me crack up! gosh, conceited much premu!! 😆😆 and u know something, the part where it says "not that he took any of them seriously" made me go "yesh!!!" that means that he's not gnna be using heer like other playboys do! 😃👏 and it showed the prem frm the show, who never felt this way before, you know the reason we all believe that he did not have anything going on with that Sanjana...because he felt true love when he met heer just like in here, he's gnna feel something he's never experienced before with those plastic chicks 😆😆 loving it!!!

of course i won't make my son a characterless m****😳........he is umm ummm how can i put this together......lets say he is a decent playboy🤣.......

haila, he was smirking!! -faints- 😳😳😆 the way u described heer, i could imagine it so well, cuz thats how heer is na? in the beginning all shy and nervous 😆

awww thanks hon😊

"YESH!!!!!!!" he's never kissed anyone before!! yay!!!! ah so much different playa than other losers! 👏😆 ahh am cracking up at veera-prem convo that was hilarious!! 😆😆

and heer thinking all that 🤣 oh gosh!! am gnna love reading them meeting again 😆😆 awww her voice left him speechless!! sooo chute!!! 😃

pj = perfect jerk! 🤣🤣🤣 oh god!! heer's funny...love her!!! 😆

'Prem', the name itself just sounded musical to her ears......she couldn't believe a person, who, she highly doubt know the meaning of love, was actually named after such an authentic word.....looking back at his direction, she just stared at him, but this time with an amusement in her eyes..... so true, rite now i can tell that prem's never felt love before...looks like heer's gnna change him!!

sighhhhhhhhhh.......i love these characters😳

ah di!! i loved the whole four parts! now when is the next part coming up? 😉😆

oh yea, the "sukriti" that kimz mentioned with preet, is from my fic...ignore kimzie, she's phycho abt that pairing 😆 i love ash-preet in this and hope that they'll come in more often, maybe causing premeer to become closer and preet can help prem out? ooh maybe prem's gnna do everything on his own? be mr. independent!! 😆😆

YESH !!!!.......i prefer him being independent......😉😆😆

well kay is this rinku session long enough? 😉

lub

rinku

Originally posted by: kimmu

Ahh i like foxes even better. ☺️
OMG! Your such a cheater *shakes head*
How could I forget Preetinki? *forgets about armi and runs to Preet*
We are REALLY leaving Armi in teh dust now. 🤣

Where spamming Rehana di's fic too! 😲 Sowwwiiie!

Originally posted by: tania86

awww it's ok hon.......i didn't mind.......after all i was rite........ yea yea keep on partying! me will join in! lolz

lollll.....😆.......nope u rn't confusing me dear........i got ur point.......well at this moment, all i can say is that HAVE PATIENCE😉.....aww i dnt wanna be patient though!! -pouts-

thanks for appreciating it hon😊 ur muy welcome didz

thanks for the wonderful feedback.......glad u loved it😊 hehe it was my pleasure! 😆

of course i won't make my son a characterless m****😳........he is umm ummm how can i put this together......lets say he is a decent playboy🤣....... yesh thank you!! hehe aah am gnna love this playboy!

awww thanks hon😊 ahh u say thank-o to much!! looks like me will have to ban u from saying that like i did with minuu 😆😆

sighhhhhhhhhh.......i love these characters😳 yesh me loves em too! -sighs-

YESH !!!!.......i prefer him being independent......😉😆😆 of course u would! after all ma jo ho! 😆

luv

rehana😊

rinku! :P