FF: Old Prem Back- Part 23 (Pg 147 - Feb 6)

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Posted: 16 years ago

#521

Originally posted by: anushka10

hey additi dear we are not making fun of u sacchi ..promise....just we are teasing u..i am very sorry if u are hurted....😭
chalo tumari mood thek kathe hain..tumare liye mere pass kuch hain....

Yummy choclates....just for u ...🤗
tumare didiyoon ko maaf kardena..aiasa phir kabhi nahi hooga 😭😭

hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm😆So yummy my fav chocolate😆Ok ok no need to cry😆god bless u for giving me those yummy chocolates!😆

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Posted: 16 years ago

#522

update plz u said u will update today!*sobs*dont say drama queen and emotional queen again!

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Posted: 16 years ago

#523

where r u ???????????????? update karo naaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

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Posted: 16 years ago

#524

Originally posted by: heer hann

hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm😆So yummy my fav chocolate😆Ok ok no need to cry😆god bless u for giving me those yummy chocolates!😆

hmmmm u ate all the chocolates with out sharing😆

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Posted: 16 years ago

#525

Originally posted by: 12345xxx
hmmmm u ate all the chocolates with out sharing😆

i had shared!its in ur hand n the chocolate just melt it in ur hand so u cant see the chocolate!😆

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lala

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Posted: 16 years ago

#526

di u said u will update faster r still offline!

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Originally posted by: heer hann
di u said u will update faster r still offline!

di if u dont update today lala gonna kill us😆😆😆...........coz i said that u r going to update 2day.

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Anusha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#528

Hello Guys ...i am back with my bada update..i am really very sorry for the delay in the update but i am very busy in I20 processing and Consultancy work...Today completely i am out of my second home..ie Kis Desh Forum..I hope u all can understand my problem...😭Ok lets come to the update...comments are must as i updated so many Premeer scenes...to make u blush 😳and feel happy..Happy reading guys 😃

Part 17 - Prem's Naughtiness

The Romantic and Passionate night of Premeer's life has been spoiled with a single scream of Heer...Prem gets hyper tensed about Heer..At the moment he listened his beautiful angel's scream..His heartbeat has stopped for a second...Prem is looking at Heer with a fear-filled eyes that what happen to his wife suddenly ???..Atlast with his fear, he finally and hardly managed to speak

Prem : Heer, Kya hua ??? Tum thek tho hoona ..??? (with a scared shiver in his voice )
Heer : (seeing her lovely husband pain , she finally spoke )..Pr-Prem pata nahi..mere pait (stomach)..mein bahut dard hooraha hain..
Prem : Heer, abhi panch minute pehle tho tum thek hoon...tho phir yeh aachanak kya hua tumhe ??? ..mujhe tho bahut darr lagraha hain..tum yahin aaraam karo..mein Maa ko lekhe aatha hoon..aur doctor kho bhi call karke aatha hoon..( with a lot of fear, care , concern in his eyes for his lovely wife )

Prem is about to get up from the bed to inform his family members & doctor...But Heer quickly catches his hand..Prem turns to see Heer's face..Heer nods her head signalling no...Prem is looking at her in a confused state...Prem sits beside Heer again...

Heer : Nahi..Prem tum kisikho kuch nahi bataughe..kaas kar maa kho..( managing to speak )
Prem : Lekin Heer..Doctor kho tho bulaana padegha na.. tumare checkup karne ke liye...(stroking her hair caringly with one hand and with the other hand he is catching Heer's hand )
Heer : Prem..pls doctor ke koi zarrorat nahi hain..mein bilkul thek hoon..mujhe kabhi kabhi aisa hotha hain..
Prem : Kya ??? (shocked ) tumhe kabhi kabhi pait (stomach) mein dard hotha hain ???..Lekin...( completely confused )

Heer : (she somehow managed to give a smile by seeing her husband's fear )..Haan Prem mein jab bhi pait barkhe kaathe hoon na, tho mujhe acidity type form hootha hain stomach mein..if i will take a acidity tablet and sleep , automatically it will be cured

Prem : Kya ??? Nahi Heer mein tumare health ke saath koi risk nahi lena chahtha hoon..tum aaraam karo mein maa aur doctor ko bulakar aatha hoon...(carenessing her hair )

Heer : Prem......Pls samjne ke khoshish karo..Ghar mein shaadi ke moohool (atmosphere ) hain..and i dont want to spoil everyone's mood for this small reason...(managing to talk)

Prem : What do u mean by small reason ??? the matter which is related to u ,will never be a small thing for me ,may be now or in the future...understood..
Heer : Prem... pls i dont want to argue with u , pls first u give me tablet and afterwards we will discuss about this matter

Prem hardly managed to get up leaving Heer's hand . Heer is still catching her stomach and feeling uneasy...Prem slowly moves to the cupboard, brings the tablet box and sits beside Heer..Prem catches her hand and slowly makes her getup...Heer slowly gets up with the help of Prem , takes the tablet from the box and asks him water..Prem brings water for his lovely wife ..She eats the tablet and Prem makes her head rest on the pillow...Heer slowly leans her head on the pillow staring into Prem's eyes cutely...Prem keeps the tablet box aside and turns to see his heer...He is carenessing her hair with his soft hands, Heer is smiling at Prem...

Prem : ab kaise hain tumare pait dard ( with a concern and dullness in his voice )
Heer : (Seeing his worried face ) Prem...Maine abhi tho tablet liya hain, atleast give sometime for the tablet to do its work ( teasing him, makes a small attempt to change his mood )...
Prem : Ok, let me call the doctor...
Heer : Prem tum phir se surru hogaye hoo....agar kal thak mein thek nahi hue tho, pucca hum dono doctor ke paas zarror jayenghe..ok
Prem : Pucca ...promise ...
Heer : Haan baba pucca promise ok ...ab tum apne kapde badal kar aaou...( saying him cutely with a smile on her face )

Prem sweetly kisses on her forehead and hardly leaves after taking a promise with her and gets up for changing his clothes . He wears a comfortable night suit and asks her to change her bridal wear..But she sweetly refuses that she has no mood to change them...and asks him to come and sleep...Prem slowly comes towards his beautiful wife..Heer moves to other side of the bed as she is sleeping in the middle of the bed..Prem sleeps on the bed beside his sleeping beauty..Heer rests her head on Prem's chest..His one hand is carenessing Heer's hair and the other hand is resting on her back...Heer hugs him by resting her head on his chest...

Heer : Prem...
Prem : Umm...
Heer : Sorry
Prem : Sorry ??? For what ?? (confused)
Heer : Aaj ka din, maine tumare mood karaab kiyana iss liye
Prem : Heer, tum chup chup apne muu bandh kar soojao..aur tumare yeh sorry tumare pass hi rakho...tumne yeh kaisa sooch liya ki aaj ka din mera mood karaab hua hain....Today is a very very special day for me ..as i got my love forever..I LOVE U HEER ( kisses on her forehead)
Heer : I LOVE YOU SO MUCH PREM ( hugs him more tightly closing her eyes)

Prem also hugs her tightly and closes his eyes...They are hugging each other and lost in their own world.....May be due to the tiredness or Heer's pain, they both donno when they slept..But they both were sleeping with a smile on their faces..as they are engaged in a unbreakable bond called Marriage ....Moon is also seeing and adoring them as Moon is the witness of their love.

IN ASH's ROOM

Ash is very tired she waves a good nite to everyone and leaves to her room...While entering her room she is busy in singing a song

Preet meri aakhon mein hain
Preet meri saason mein hain
Preet meri tann-mann mein hain...(she is searching her nite wear in the cupboard)

Preet : Preet ab tumari kamare mein bhi hain (suddenly Preet appears near the door)
Ash : (completely shocked by seeing him in her room that to at 11.30 in the nite )...Preet tum yahan ???
Preet : Haan mein tumara Preet , tumare kamre mein...( closing the door and keeping the bolt )
Ash : Preet ...Yeh tum kya karrahe hoon..tumne door kyun close kiya ...(shocked )

Preet : i think you forgot what i said whispered in your ears today morning...(coming close to her ) let me remimd you...i said that " joo kaam tumne aadura chooda hain..mein woh purra karungha..woh bhi aaj hien ".....now the time is 11.30..still i have half an hour time to complete my work ( revolving around her..as Ash is seeing him confusedly)

Ash : i did not forget anything, i can remember everything...but ur naughtiness will not work here...just leave the room first..i want to sleep as i am very tired..( angrily)

Preet : This is not my naughtiness, u know Ash usually i dont start any work..if i will start then i will not sleep without completing that work (making his steps forward and Ash is taking her steps backwards)

Ash : (hits the wall behind her..Preet is standing infront of her) Preet mera raastha choodho warna i will shout..(warning him as she is tensed)

Preet : Ok...u are interested in shouting..then why i should stop you ...lekin mein tumkho raastha nahi doungha...(stubbornly)

Ash : Preet i am warning you for the final time..pls give me way otherwise i will shout...
Preet : Aree yaar..maine kaha na shout..for what u are waiting for ??
Ash : Maa...Bauji...(slowly shouts )
Preet : ohh..this is the way u shout...even i cant hear it properly , how can the mom and dad can hear...pata nahi kaha kaha se chale aathe hain loog..thek se chilana bhi nahi aatha hain.. ( laughs by seeing her face and shouting to tease her)
Ash : Accha...now u see where i came from ?? and how loud can i shout...(angrily)

Ash is about to shout loudly almost says " maa.." loudly...but Preet stopped her from shouting further , not by keeping his hand on her mouth , but by closing her lips with his lips...Ya Preet finally succeded in kissing Ash..Preetash Firstever Kiss....Ash is completely shocked by Preet's sudden action..but at the moment when both their lips meet, her angry went into drain...She slowly kept her hand on Preet's hair and passionately stroking it....Ash is enjoying the passionate side of Preet..They both are closing their eyes and enjoying the passionate moment...Preet slowly releases Ash from his passionate touch and staring at her....Ash slowly opens her eyes and looks in Preet's eyes with a lot of love, passion and shyness in her eyes...

Preet : Kya hua Ashlesha..tum hi tho kehrahe thi na ki tum chilaoughe ...tho phir chup kyun hoo..chilao..(shout) (sweetly teases her )
Ash : ab kya chillao..(staring into his eyes) tumne tho mere bolthi hi band kardiya hain...(hits him on his shoulder )

Preet laughs at her sweetness and hugs her. Ash inreturns hugs him...They both are lost in each other arms....Suddenly the clock rings indicating that the time is now 12.00 AM...Preet sees it...and says to Ash that he has to leave now as he is so tired and wanted to sleep...Ash says ok...Preet sweetly kisses on Ash's forehead and says goodnite to her and leaves from her room...Ash feels happy and slowly changes her dress and lays on the bed thinking abt Preet and their First Kiss....She blushes and goes to sleep with a cute smile on her face..Here Preet changes his sherwani..and slowly lies on the bed thinking abt his first kiss ...How Ash felt shy when he kissed her??..thinking about Ash he was blushing..then slowly he slept due to the tiredness with a cute smile on his face..

On the other side...Nihaal feels very happy thinking... How he did Kanyadaan for his God Given Sister ?? How happy she felt during Kanyadaan ??.How this family has accepted him in the form of son ??...Thinking all these questions he felt very happy..Suddenly his excitement and happiness got doubled by thinking about Veera..He felt excited by thinking How Veera happily danced with him ?? How close she was with him ??..How she put Varmala around his neck in the dance ???...A cute and big smile appears on his face thinking about Varmala's incident and Veera's shyness ...He tightly hugs the pillow with a lot of happiness..( Yeh Nihaal bhi naughty hooraha hain , Kya bollu sangat ka asar hain 🤣)..Slowly he closes his eyes and fell in sleep with a cute smile on his face..

Coming to Veera...Veera is also thinking about the marriage and how grandly it happened without any disturbances ...She felt happy thinking that how masti and teasings she did with his newly married couple ..She gets a big smile on her face thinking about Nihaal ..How she danced with him happily ?? How she put a Varmala around his neck ?? How cute Nihaal was looking in Sherwani ?? How wonderful person he is ? as he did Kanyadaan for her sweet bhabhi...she is just lost in Nihaal's thoughts and simply adoring his goodness ..Thinking all these questions her eyes are filled with love, passion and happiness for Nihaal. Slowly she goes to sleep with a beautiful smile on her face...Ya the complete Juneja Mansion is filled with a lot of happiness, excitement by seeing the beautiful and adorable couple..All the family members are very happy and slept with a cute and beautiful smile on their faces..Here the newly married and adorable couple are sleeping very happily hugging each other tightly ...

( Sorry if u feel that i repeated the words and expressions again and again..but i really did not get the new words to describe the feelings..as this is my first FF and i am not good at writing part as i personally feel ..so kindly excuse me ..😭i will really try to express them in the best way in the coming storylines😃)

A Sweet And Wonderful Morning

A Fresh Morning, A Fresh Start and A Fresh Beginning in everybody's life especially in Premeer's married Life..The Sun rises and the beautiful and bright sun rays are falling on the Prem's cute face..making him to open his passionate eyes..He slowly opens his eyes and looks down to see his angel resting her head on his chest and sleeping like a adorable sleeping beauty.hugging him..He is simply adoring her beauty without disturbing her..He thinks about their first nite that how passionately it started and how it ended with a deadly fear on his face ?? Still a fear was running in him thinking abt How his wife screamed ?? How pain she felt at that time ?? How his heartbeat skipped seeing his angel's pain ?? These questions are creating a storm inside him..But an answer of all these questions was given by Heer herself ie A Beautiful and Lovable Smile on her face..

He slowly calms down by seeing a cute smile on her face.. He feels somewhat relieved by seeing his sleeping beauty's cute face and adorable smile..He slowly puts her on the bed with his soft arms..and adoring her beauty with his passion filled eyes..He cutely removes hair strands from her face which was disturbing him in adoring her..and puts them behind her ear..He is continusely staring at her by carenessing her long hair ..Heer slowly opens her eyes and sees her husband staring at her with a pssionate eyes..This brings a most beautiful and lovable smile on her lips..He hugs him and says " Good Morning " to her lovely husband ..Prem inreturn hugs her and kisses on her cheek saying " Good Morning Mrs .Heer Juneja "..This name brings a broad smile and shy on her face ..

Prem : Ab kaise hain tumare stomach pain ( carenessing her hair)
Heer : Maine pehle hii kaha tha na chotti si pain hain..tablet lene se cure hojayegha...ab main bikul thek hoon..( she is still lying on the bed looking into his eyes)
Prem : Tho..Doctor ke pass jaane ki koi jarurat nahi hain ??
Heer : Koi bhi zarrorat nahi hain...(assuring him by putting her hand on his cheek)
Prem : Lekin Heer mein koi risk nahi leena chahtha..hum ek baar doctor ke paas jayenghe ( worrying face )
Heer : Prem..Pls tum phir se surru mat hojao.. i am perfectly alright
Prem : Lekin Heer ....(wanted to speak )
Heer : I am perfectly alright..did u hear (closing his mouth with her hand )

Prem feels assured by looking into Heer's confident eyes...He comes more closer to Heer's face and kisses on her forehead..😳.At the moment Prem's lips touch her forehead she closes her eyes..He slowly comes down to her cheek and gives a long lasting kiss on her cheek..Heer puts her both hands around Prem's neck and enjoying his passionate side..Prem then comes down to touch her curved lips with his pink lips..Heer feels that her heart is racing..She is shamelessly adoring his pink lips ( sangat ka asar hain🤣)..Prem is about to touch her lips as almost their both noses are rubbing making her feel excited..( Prem bachha pehle apni muu tho dollo (brush ur teeth )..phir romance ke baare mein soochna🤣) Suddenly they hear a door knock..They are shocked with the quick knock of the door..But Prem is not in a mood to let her go from his arms...

Heer : Prem...utho naa koi door knock karraha hain...(seeing into his eyes)
Prem : Nahi mein nahi uthungha, itni acchi mauka kho mein haath se nahi jaanedoungha....(catching her tightly)
Heer : Prem..agar maa hoothe tho..woh kya soocheghi...???
Prem : Kya soocheghe ??? Yeh soocheghi ke ki bacche thak gaye hoonghe isliye abhi thak ssorahe hain (carenessing her hair )
Heer : Prem..Pls Prem utho na...(trying to push him)
Prem : No, i will not leave u at any cost..let them bang the door hardly..i dont care..

Prem is not letting her go and he is catching her more tightly...Heer somehow manages to gather all her energy and hardly pushes him...Heer gets up from the bed before Prem could again catch her..She quickly adjusts her lehengha and goes to open the door leaving a disappointed Prem...Prem is really very angry on her but covers the blanket on his face and Pretends to be sleeping....Heer goes to open the door and is surprised to see Kulraj di..Prem sees his didi and gets angry and covers the blanket on his face again.....

Heer : Di..aap (surprised and shocked )
Kulraj : Kyun maine aap dono kho disturb tho nahi kiya hain na
Prem : (thinks in his mind )...disturb...kya baat hain di..khud hi disturb karthe hain aur khud hi poocthe hain ki maine disturb tho nahi kiya hain na ?? ( laughs at his fate )
Heer : Nahi di, mein aur Prem tho bas ...
Kulraj : (cuts her ) lagtha hain mera laadla bhai abhi tak sooraha hain..(seeing Prem)
Heer is shocked and turns back to see Prem..He pretends that he is sleeping by covering blanket on his face..
Heer : (thinks) Prem tho abhi tak sharrarat kartha raha..accnak yeh kab soo gaya
Kulraj : Heer...Heer...(pushing her slightly)
Heer : (comes out of her thoughts) haan didi...
Kulraj : Kaha khogaye hoon...(smiles)
Heer : Woh di..yuhi..Kuch nahi...(confused)
Kulraj : Sirf Prem kho hi nahi hamme bhi tho dekho ...(teases)
Heer : Aise koi baat nahi hain didi..(blushes)
Prem : (laughing inside)
Kulraj : Achha Prem kho soone dho..tum jaldi se tayyar hookar neeche aajana..aaj kaana tumhe baanana hain..tumare shaadi ke pehle din hain na..tum chintha matkaro..hum sab tumhe help karenghe..warna Prem Hamma daathengha ki " meri phool jaise naazook biwi se purra kaam karvarahe hoon "..(teases)
Heer : (blushes and looks down)
Kulraj : Jaldi aana (puting her hand on her cheek )
Heer : Aap chaliye didi mein aajaunghi ....

Kulraj leaves the room asking Heer to make it fast..Heer says ok and goes to Prem to check whether he is really sleeping or pretending to be sleeping...She comes to him and removes the blanket from his face...Naughty Prem still pretending to be sleeping..Heer tugs him and calls " Prem "..But Prem is not getting up..Heer thinks that he is really sleeping and sweetly carenesse his hair..She gives a cute smile to him and leaves for the Washroom to brush and have a bath..At the moment Heer leaves for the washroom, Prem opens his eyes with a naughty smile on his face and is lost in Heer's beautiful thoughts

After sometime , Heer comes out of the wash room wearing a beautiful saree , drying her wet hair with towel,,Then a cute song plays in the background

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Something in this style and colour

Here is the link of the song http://in.youtube.com/watch?v=wfSuwqmR9rs

As the music plays Prem is completely lost in her beauty...

tujhe dekh dekh sona
tujhe dekh dekh sona
tujhe dekh kar hain jagna

She is looking absolutely gorgeous in that saree and long wet hair....Prem could not take his eyes off from her beauty...Heer is busy in drying her hair ...

maine yeh zindagani
sang tere bitaani
tujhmein basi hain meri jaan haai

Heer is adjusting her saree and turns to see Prem whether he is still sleeping ??...Naughty Prem sees that Heer is about to look him and closes his eyes pretending that he is sleeping...A beautiful glow comes on Heer's face seeing Prem sleeping..

jiya dhadak dhadak
jiya dhadak dhadak
jiya dhadak dhadak
jaayen

Now Heer is busy in adoring her husband sleeping like a baby with a smile on his face...She slowly makes her steps towards the bed...

jiya dhadak dhadak
jiya dhadak dhadak
jiya dhadak dhadak
jaayen

She comes and sits on the bed beside her naughty husband...Prem is trying to control his laugh and smile ....Heer is staring at him continesely with a beautiful smile on her face..

kabse hai dil mein mere armaan kai ankahe
kabse hai dil mein mere armaan kai ankahe

Heer is stroking his hair carenessingly..Prem feels that he is seventh heaven ...Heer comes so closer to his adorable face and kisses him on his forehead...Prem's heart is filled with joy,happiness and excitement after Heer's sweet kiss....

inko tu sunle aaja chaahat ke rang chadha jaa
inko tu sunle aaja chaahat ke rang chadha jaa
kehna kabhi to mera maan haai

But he did not dare to utter a single word because he know that his single word can spoil his wife's lovely mood...He is waiting for his angel to come down from his forehead to cheek and touch it with her luscious lips..and then slowly to his pink lips...

jiya dhadak dhadak
jiya dhadak dhadak
jiya dhadak dhadak
jaayen

But a big disappointment to Prem's passionate intensions ..his thoughts ended on the forehead itself..Heer moved to the dressing table with a fraction of second leaving Prem in a dissappointed stage..

lagta hain yeh kyu mujhe sadiyon se chaahu tujhe ( Prem is adoring her )
lagta hain yeh kyu mujhe sadiyon se chaahu tujhe

Heer sits infront of the dressing table and putting her make up...Prem is simply staring at her beauty in the dressing table mirror..Heer puts her mangalsutra around her neck and is about to fill sindoor in her maang..

mere sapno mein aake apna mujhko banake
mere sapno mein aake apna mujhko banake
mujhpe tu kar ehsaan haai

Suddenly She sees Prem in the mirror standing at her back...Prem makes her getup from the chair and she turns to his side...They both are staring into each other eyes lovingly...

jiya dhadak dhadak
jiya dhadak dhadak
jiya dhadak dhadak
jaayen

Prem takes the sindoor box and takes a pinch of sindoor and fills her maang...Heer closes her eyes while Prem puting sindoor..She opens her eyes with a glow in her face ..Prem is staring at her lovingly..Prem hugs her passionately...Heer cutely fits into his arms...

( Thanks to my brother for playing this song in the system...😃i dont have a idea to add a song at that situation...almost i completed that part ..he kept that song which made me think of that scene again...i love this song..Hope u all like this song 😃)

Suddenly Heer remembers that she has to go down and prepare food..she herself releases from his warm arms ...Heer asks Prem to fresh up soon and come down as she has to go now urgently.. Before Prem could speak a single word..she moves fastly from there leaving Prem again disappointed...Heer comes to the kitchen and takes the blessings of Gay3 mom..Gay3 mom kisses on her forehead...Ash hugs her sweetly...Just then Veera comes asking coffee and hugs Heer and says " Good Morning Bhabhi "..Prem brushes his teeth and comes down to read the news paper and for a sweet tea made by his beautiful wife...Heer brings tea to all the family members..Heer takes blessings of Lallu and Karan and says good morning....Heer gives tea to Prem..But shameless Prem catches her hand...Heer is shocked ...Just then Veera comes and Prem leaves her hand...Heer goes from there ...Gay3 asks all of them to take bath soon and assemble in the hall for Pooja and breakfast and later on proceed with the reception party arrangements which is going to be held tonight...

Prem roams here and there in his room as he wanted to meet his wife...He gets an idea and goes to Tanu and asks her to call his mammi ..Tanu goes to the kitchen to call his lovely mammi..Tanu sees Heer and pulls her saree...

Heer : Kya baat hain beta ..
Tanu : Maami ..apko Prem maamu ne bulaaya hain..
Heer : (All are laughing ) tumare Maamu se kaho ki maami kho bahut kaam hain kitchen mein..issliye woh baad mein aayeghi ...
Tanu : Mujhe woh sab nahi pata hain...Prem maamu ne aapko urgently bulaaya hain...
Gay3 : Jao Heer beta...shayad Prem kho tumari zarrorat hain ....
Ash : Haan Didi jayeye warna kya pata ki jeju khud kitchen mein aakar aapko lejayenghe ( all are laughing )...
Heer : Maa..mein abhi aathi hoon...

Saying this Heer leaves to their room..with a angry face...she sees that Prem is waiting for her ...

Heer : Prem tum bhi na..aise koun se zarrorat aagaye hain ..ki tumne mujhe itne urgently bulaaya hain....(angrily )
Prem : Heer.. i thought that u will select clothes for me as i am going to hotel to check the reception arrangements..(hugging her from back )
Heer : Bahut hogaya romance chalo ab jaakar jaldi se bath karkhe aao...( removing his hands from her waist )
Prem : Tum pehle clothes tho select karo....

Heer quickly removes his clothes from cup board , gives to him with a towel and pushes him inside the bathroom asking him to come fast...Prem slowly removes his shirt and pant..Suddenly Prem shouts Heer name from the bathroom...Heer who is arranging the cupboard..is shocked...

Heer : Kya hua Prem..why r u shouting ??
Prem : my dear..u forgot to give towel ...
Heer : Prem ..check it again i have gave u towel along with ur clothes..
Prem : So.u think that .i am lieing...No heer u forgot to give the towel...

Heer is confused about the towel thing..she with her hands gave towel to him...where the towel went...She is confused..Prem is again shouting to give him towel...Heer checks the room fast to make sure whether the towel falled somewhere...But she was unable to find the towel..A idea strikes in her mind that Prem is trying to pull her in the bathroom with the sake of Towel...Ya Heer found Out Prem's Naughty intensions of romancing in Bathroom...😳She is thinking how to make his plan flop???..Just then Preet enters the room telling that Mom is calling her..Now Naughty Heer gets an idea , Gives the towel to Preet and ask him to give it to Prem . she says a reason that her hands are dirty as she worked in the kitchen...Poor Preet donno about his Bhabhi's intensions, takes the towel and knocks the door of Prem's bathroom..Prem feels happy and opens the door thinking that hand wil be Heer's...

Heer is controlling her laugh by imagining the upcoming scene ....Preet forwards his hand with a towel..Poor Prem pulls that hand hardly thinking it as Heer..Preet , who is seeing Heer's face is completely shocked by that pull..Preet goes inside the bathroom with a hard pull of Prem...Prem feels excited that he pulled Heer..Heer bursts out into a heavy laughter seeing that scene...(even i could not control my laugh imagining three members expressions)..Preet quickly falls in Prem's arms...Prem and Preet sees each other faces and shouts loudly ( like Preet shouted while asking all the family members to play anthakshari)...Heer is catching her stomach and laughing soooooo much by imagining Prem's poor face...Prem and Preet are shocked by seeing each other faces..

Preet comes out of the bathroom with a sudden jerk...He sees Heer laughing like a hell and quickly understood the situation and he too laughs with Heer remembering the bathroom scene inside..Prem comes out with a towel around his waist ( like Jab se tere naina scene😳😳)...they both stops laughing seeing Prem's angry face..Again they both continue to laugh remembering the bathroom scene...Prem gets a super angry by seeing their laugh at his poor situation..He quickly catches Preet's ear..

Prem : Apne bade bhai ke saath mazaak karraha hain..woh bhi meri apni hi biwi ke saath milkar....(Pinching his ear more tightly)
Preet : Oouch..PB...( in pain ) Mujhe tho issbare mein kuch nahi pata hain..bhabhi ne mujhe towel diya hain aapkho deene ke liye...
Prem : Achha tho yeh tumare bhabhi ka kaam hain...
Heer is completely shocked thinking that what Prem will do now ???
Prem : ok..Preet agar aap bahar jayeghe tho mujhe mere biwi se kuch baath karne hain...
Heer : Preet mein bhi chalunghe tumare saath mujhe bahut kaam hain kitchen mein...
Prem : Aree mere pyaari heer tum kaha jaarahe hoon...mujhe tumse bahut kaam hain...(catching her hand and pulling her towards him)..ab tum kade kade mera muu kya dekh rahe hoon..( to Preet)..
Preet : soory bhabhi i am helpless in this matter akhir yeh tho pati-patni ka mamlaa hain...Bye bhabhi...
Heer : Preet...tum iss tarah mujhe choodkhe nahi jaasakthe...
Prem : Preet..aur ek baat agar yeh baat tumne kisikho bataya na..tho tum sooch bhi nahi sakthe ki mein tumara kya haal karungha....(angrily)
Preet : Ok bhai...Bye bhabhi...

Preet left the room leaving Heer in a confusion state...Prem is making her steps towards Heer angrily...Heer is worried that what will Prem do now as she teased him so much..Prem is making her steps towards Heer looking her angrily...

Precap : The reception party is on swing...All the guests are enjoying the party in the gardens..Preet announces the singers name...All are excited...and welcomes them with a huge round of applauds.. They both sing different songs....Premeer dances for the song " Tujh mein rab dektha hain " seeing into each other eyes....

Hope u liked the update guys..My next update may be big with 2 songs.😃.i am saying you now itself..so be prepared to read the bada update....😆i will try to update the next part soon but i cant promise you..😭

Edited by anushka10 - 16 years ago

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Posted: 16 years ago

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Awe sum di👏........shameless prem🤣..............prem-preet-heer👏..........actually di i'm very lazy 😆..................i never read all the lines but i always read each and every word in ur ff........sachi..true......i read this part 4 2 times😉..............really di u r gr8 writer👏.................cant wait for next part............di u update today it self no...................how prem gonna take revenge on heer😆...........thats gonna be interesting part 😛.................really enjoyed a lot reading this part👏..............thanx for the wonderful update😊

Edited by 12345xxx - 16 years ago