FF: Hum Saath Saath Hain - *completed* - Page 8

Hey Shabo...Sorry for the delay , was a little busy with Ramzan preparations...

Originally posted by: kimmu

Yayy, i'm first. Haha you can't be first here Shabz... *sticks out tongue* *pulls Kimzie's tounge* OYE! Respect your elders! Or I'll set Vikki on you!🤣

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As you already know this is one of my favorite parts of you FF. I feel bad for Teji, everyones asking for her help, its kind of like what we do when were going out to a party. The only thing you can here is 'Mamaaa!' My mom gets so frustrated she gets ready and runs out of the house, then we kids have to find out things ourselves. 😔Kahaani Ghar Ghar ki! Honestly....before a party we are like where are my blue heels, where did that neacklace go, I can't find my tie, who the HELL used my sink!!!😆Becahrri Teji!

I like the connection you showed between Heer and Teji. Heer knows what her what her mom' s forgetting, which is just the sweetest thing ever. Hmm.. if only i could know Prem's thoughts on that. My favorite scene, the three couple's eyeing there partners. Loved how you put it 'tolerate eachother'.. 🤣Well Ash and Harman and Prem and Heer don't mind....Preet and Sukz....they are a different story!

I love Arjun! He poked his dad in the eye for amusement. 🤣 You have to give this lil dude a girl too.. OMG....fantastic idea....I think I'll save that for the epilouge! Great idea!!🤣 And Ash-Harman looking at eachother was so sweet. Ahh i love all the couples in here. Preet and Sukhi....JODI NUMBER ONE! Thanks Rinkz!
Prem and Heer, don't even get me started. Heer's so denying the fact that she doesn't think Prem's smexy [(c) Rinki]. SMEXY!!!! Wow the word even looks hotter in red!Humph, how long can she resist THE Prem.How long did you resist him???
Do I even have to start with Sukz and Preet again? I think I covered that pretty well in the PM.. hehe.. Or do I need to speak up again? Nope its all good.....we have already decided....JODI NUMBER ONE!!!!
So many emotions in those 15 seconds, ahh I loved it!Wanna see emotions?😈.....for more see "More"

Sukz got a lot of attitude. Ahh thats why i love her. Thats what Preet gets for messing with Sukz. Loved the part, Awesome job on it. Can't wait for the next one.. 😃Like you already don't know what happens!!

Oh and the direct link, its on your post next to the 'report' and 'qoute' buttons. All you have to do is copy that link, and post it on the updates. Hope you got it hehe.. Not really....😆

Originally posted by: ravioli_11

awesome update!

aww arjun seems so cute. poking harman's eye😆

preet's next mission? ahaha u crack me up🤣

loved the update. can't wait to read the next one

Originally posted by: pooji123456789

amazing update
loved arjun harman scene
do update soon
pm me when u update

Originally posted by: ~Rinki~

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well let me think....okayz its awesome, fantabolous, amazing, wonderful...etc etc. 😉😆You forgot Smexy!😆

first of all me loving the fact that heer knew that teji might forget the thali soooooo cute!! loved that little connection btwn them...😃Mother-Daughter bond....Beautiful ain't it? But not as much as SMEXY!!!

hehe and then ballu and lallu hug after laughing like phychos and then the ladies.Too bad Ballu and Lalit arent Smexy.....at least Lallu's sns are....SMEXXINESS!! lucky mann sister!

now the best part...the kids sizing each other up!! 😆😆Yeaa....I love that scene////very smexy u no?

aww have i mentioned how much i love arjun?? 😳😆 he's shoooo cute! lolz poking his own dad in the eye 😲😲 good job kiddo!! 😉😆Yup.....the smexiest kid alive!!!

hehe and then prem...looking up only when he heard heer's voice! 😲😃 hehe shoooo cute! and then heer looking back at him without caring that so many pplz are around 😉 aww and then that scene...she shies away and thinks abt what he prolly thought...hehe maybe she doesn't love him rite now...but she sure likes likes and likes him 😆😆Yup.....they are very adorable....bbut they get smexier later!

and then my best creation, as a human being! 😆 sukz-preet 😃 hehe shooo cute!!! she just looks at him with so much attitude! 😆😆 and preet? rolls up his sleeves? omg like he's going in battle...though having to live with sukz is not less than a battlefield 😆

hehe i love it when she showed attitude to him abt telling him where his room was! aaahhh am gonna love reading this shoooo much!!! hehe 😛Ohhh I wrote such a SMEXY scene between them....but i think I won't send it too you....make u suffer!! muhaha (ebil muh)

aaah what else? i think i covered the whole thing...well if i missed something, then srry and it was excellent also!! 😉😃SMEXY SMEXY SMEXY!

hmm abt the direct link...its next to the quote and other button, if you click on "direct link" the page will refresh and the link at the top as in: www.rinkziscrzi/blahblahblah had changed, copy that and then post it where ur writing ur updates, if u click on that from ur update page, it'll take u straight to ur post instead of just the page...hope u got what i mean?! 😳😆 ok can uexplain the whole think in steps....the smexineess has gotton to my head.....lolz.....but honestly.....so lets say i want a dirct link to my first update which is on page 3....wat do i do/?

aah was this long enough??! 😉😆

rinkz

Smexy Shabz

Originally posted by: ranrags

It was really nice..specially the couples part ie.,H-A,P-H,P-S..it was really nice..and liked the kid part too..funny..pls continue soon..waiting for it eagerly..

Originally posted by: ~Rinki~

aah okies am gonna reply to u later

now for the steps

go where u posted the first part (page.3)

go on ur post where the part is written

click on the direct link

the page will refresh

copy the address

go to ur updates and paste it there

when u click on it, it will take u directly to the post instead of the page, its easier to not having to scroll and look for the part...

get it now? or still have questions?

Originally posted by: shabo24