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Posted: 17 years ago
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YAYYY! Deva Muski Style Being useedd..
Where's rinks? Gotta show her out first accomplishment. Wait this is the first time u used it right? 🤔 If it isn't then i'm kind of slow.. 😆😆

Lolzz shabz.. no its not.. sowwie... haha he has to go to george mason uni.. his apartments only like a mile away, i could walk there. I really don't why he's moving then... 🤣 But whatever, i just found a new hanging out place for myself now.. 😎
Don't have to listen to my mom going on about how i shouldn't bring my friends over to out house.. don't know what she has against my friends.

*edit add*
Oh and yesh, i am raiding his room. You know he used to write in a diary when he was in middle school? I found one deep in his closet.. 🤣
Edited by kimmu - 17 years ago
Posted: 17 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: kimmu

YAYYY! Deva Muski Style Being useedd..
Where's rinks? Gotta show her out first accomplishment. Wait this is the first time u used it right? 🤔 If it isn't then i'm kind of slow.. 😆😆This is the first time I've used it and I've meant it...so YEA let's celebrate!!!

Lolzz shabz.. no its not.. sowwie... haha he has to go to george mason uni.. his apartments only like a mile away, i could walk there. I really don't why he's moving then... 🤣 But whatever, i just found a new hanging out place for myself now.. 😎Keep an eye on him for me......don't want my sweetie getting hurt now do I?😳
Don't have to listen to my mom going on about how i shouldn't bring my friends over to out house.. don't know what she has against my friends. 🤣Every mother hates her teenage daughter's friends...don't worry.....I'm going through that as well....my mom thinks we dress weird....I DO NOT see what is wrong with skinny jeans?

*edit add*
Oh and yesh, i am raiding his room. You know he used to write in a diary when he was in middle school? I found one deep in his closet.. 🤣omg.....God Bless! That is soooo sweet.....! HEY*ster voice* Kimzie...that;s his closet....let him be....specially with his priviate feelings!!!🤣🤣🤣

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: shabo24

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hey!! is that a bad thing??? arre yaar course its not!!! 😃 it was awesome so had to re-read it! :P
ish still brilliant! 😃 Oh...Thaks! ur muy welcome!! :P hehe i still crack up at ballu and lallu's convo..hehe ballu was shooo shocked!! hehe i remember when i first sent this to u.....u used like every adjective in the dictionary! hm well had to use em na!! i bet kimzie agrees with me!! right kimz...well she'll hopefully answer when she's awake! 🤣 I had to throw that in! Seein as i am a pakka daddys girlll! aww shooo cute!!! -pinch cheek-
aah ash was thinking of harmu and heer of premu! hehe where's preetu? 🤣 poor guy isn't even in his gal's thoughts.becacharra....i know what he goes thru so i can empathize!..🤣 hai hai!! kya baat hai!! lolz
Hey that was my fave part too!!! hehe great minds think alike 😉😉😆 i loved thier intro...it was rlly cute! :] aah cnt think of anything else to write! but u know how much i loved this part rite?!! 😉😆 Don;t I know it!! well you should!! Don't worry about long comments...I know ya'll are busy with schol!! yesh skool is physcho!! uff hate it shoo much rite now!! btw do u have any specific days selected as ur updating time? 😛 Ahhhh nooo not really.....kaisa bhi....every week....but im updating hte next part tomorrow i think! hmm okies me will look out for it tomorrowz and this time will try to on way before kimz..though i doubt i will seeing as the times are different lolz
okies now me stop kidding around! yesh yesh i can do that too!! 🤣*shocked muh* YOU CAN!!! yesh yesh i know! shocking news of the year!! 🤣🤣
adios,
rinkz

Originally posted by: ~Rinki~

ah see i said that yesterday so it was "today"...but since u replied it today u have to say "yesterday", we said the same thing just different time!! 😆 hehe good goal...me having a same one too! 😆😆This was were my lil poem was inspired from kimz!!!!😆 aww remember i get my share too! :P lolz

Edited by ~Rinki~ - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: kimmu



Lmao RINKIII!! Nice job, you made Shabz into a poet...
🤣🤣 Keep it up Shabz, vikki will be waiting for some poems on him too.. 🤣🤣🤣 lolz thnx kimzie...hmm lets see what else i can make her...and you!!! -evil laugh- lolz

Posted: 17 years ago
#66

Hey guyz!!!🤗Thanks to everyone who left comments! Means a lot!!!

So here is Part 2!!! Enjoy!!
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Part 2

*one week later

Dusk fell as usual on that Saturday evening, but not with the usual calming sense it usually held. Instead cries filled the air.

"Maa, apne meri joote kahin dekhe?"

"Teji, ye yahaan kyun hai?"

"Arre bhiayia, gakar ka halwa samalke!"

By 7:00 pm on the dot the servent came in. "Saab, Lalit bhaisaab darvaze pe hai." The Mann parrivar jumped to their feet and rushed towards the door. Heer grabbed the pooja ki taali because she knew like always her mother would forget about it in the rush. Predictably, Balraj reached the door first and flung it open. Standing in front of him was his best friend, his brother – Lalit Juneja. Both looked at each other for a couple of seconds before bursting out in laughter, embracing each other tightly. Gayatri and Teji exchanged amused looks and hugged tightly. Teji then suddenly remembered "Pooja ki taali!" Heer gently tapped her mother's shoulder. "Ye lo Maa." Teji took the taali and preformed the welcoming pooja. During this long pooja, the children stood shoulder to shoulder sizing each other up, knowing they would have to tolerate each other for who knows how long.

Harman immediately recognized Ashlesha among the three beautiful girls; she looked exactly the same as before. He was in awe, were girls allowed to be that beautiful? Harman was interrupted out of his trace with his two year old son insisting on being picked up. While Harman was occupied with his son's blabbering, Ashlesha chanced a peak in his direction. Most of the time she would have gone right up and stuck her hand out for a shake but she didn't know this time what was holding her back. She giggled to herself as lil Arjun poked Harman in the eye for amusement.

Prem shuffled his feet and kept his gaze to the ground. He only lifted his eyes when he heard someone in a soft yet recognizable voice say "Ye lo Maa." That had to be Heer. He looked up and was shocked to see the she was staring back not at all disturbed from the fact that everyone was right there. Staring into each other's eyes, it seemed like the whole 6 years they knew each other were flashing before their eyes. The countless ice-cream cones, playing various games in the fields, swinging for hours on their "special" swing. Shyly, Heer lowered her eyes. Oh gosh, what would he think! That she loved him? She certainly did NOT! Yet, she couldn't hide from the fact that there was a connection.

Preet yawned obviously. This was sooooo boring. If he was in Canada right now, he would have been out with his friends or with one of his many girl-friends. But look at him now. Standing in from of a family he "supposedly" grew up with and the family that their family had lived with till Preet was 4. He barley remembered anything and was fine with him like that. He looked up and caught the eye of a girl who was grinning at Balraj and Lalit embrace for the millionth time. She looked at him, saw his boredom and immediately raised an eyebrow. He mimicked her and she stuck her tongue out at him. Preet was taken back! Did this girl not know he was a present from God to all the girls in the world?!?! How dare she! Preet rolled up his sleeves with a naughty smile playing on his lips. His next mission in life: Make this girl fall head over heels in love with him.

All that happened in the space of a mere 15 seconds. The next moment Balraj and Teji ushered the Juneja family into the sitting room while the girls disappeared in to the kitchen only to return with glasses of water for everyone. Teji then forced everyone to get settled while she and the girls got their dinner ready. "Sukhi beta," Baraj said to his youngest daughter. "Jaa, saab ko apne kamre tak leke jao." Sukhi nodded excitedly was up standing before anyone else had even registered what Balraj said.

"Chachaje aur Chachi jee, ye hai aapka karma!" Sukz announced. "Aur Harman Bhai, aapka aur Arjun ka karma yahaan hai! Prem bhai, aap mere saath chalo….ye hai aapka karma, bilkul Heer di ke paas, kuch hona hai toh unse pooch lo!" Sukhi then turned to Preet. Her voice suddenly all cold she said, "Your room is at the end of the hall, I trust you can find your way there Mr.Juneja?" And with that Sukriti turned on her heel and stomped all the way downstairs leaving an infuriated Preet behind.


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So how did ya'll like it? Now, this is important. I was thinking of starting a PM list. If you want me to PM whenever I update let me know along with your comment and I'll add your name. I doubt people would want me too but I've seen a lot of FF writers do so so I thought I would ask ya'll too!
Also, I need your help. Vijay Bhai recently added a feature called Direct Link. For FF writers so it's easier for them to keep track of their parts if and when the number of posts per page change again....I don't get how we use it....help a girl out??😳
Thanks m'amie! Waiting eagrly for comments!!!😃
Edited by shabo24 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Yayy, i'm first. Haha you can't be first here Shabz... *sticks out tongue*

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As you already know this is one of my favorite parts of you FF. I feel bad for Teji, everyones asking for her help, its kind of like what we do when were going out to a party. The only thing you can here is 'Mamaaa!' My mom gets so frustrated she gets ready and runs out of the house, then we kids have to find out things ourselves. 😔

I like the connection you showed between Heer and Teji. Heer knows what her what her mom' s forgetting, which is just the sweetest thing ever. Hmm.. if only i could know Prem's thoughts on that. My favorite scene, the three couple's eyeing there partners. Loved how you put it 'tolerate eachother'.. 🤣

I love Arjun! He poked his dad in the eye for amusement. 🤣 You have to give this lil dude a girl too.. 🤣 And Ash-Harman looking at eachother was so sweet. Ahh i love all the couples in here.
Prem and Heer, don't even get me started. Heer's so denying the fact that she doesn't think Prem's smexy [(c) Rinki]. Humph, how long can she resist THE Prem.
Do I even have to start with Sukz and Preet again? I think I covered that pretty well in the PM.. hehe.. Or do I need to speak up again?
So many emotions in those 15 seconds, ahh I loved it!

Sukz got a lot of attitude. Ahh thats why i love her. Thats what Preet gets for messing with Sukz. Loved the part, Awesome job on it. Can't wait for the next one.. 😃

Oh and the direct link, its on your post next to the 'report' and 'qoute' buttons. All you have to do is copy that link, and post it on the updates. Hope you got it hehe..
Edited by kimmu - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome update!
aww arjun seems so cute. poking harman's eye😆
preet's next mission? ahaha u crack me up🤣
loved the update. can't wait to read the next one
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Posted: 17 years ago
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amazing update
loved arjun harman scene
do update soon
pm me when u update
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Posted: 17 years ago
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well let me think....okayz its awesome, fantabolous, amazing, wonderful...etc etc. 😉😆
first of all me loving the fact that heer knew that teji might forget the thali soooooo cute!! loved that little connection btwn them...😃
hehe and then ballu and lallu hug after laughing like phychos and then the ladies...
now the best part...the kids sizing each other up!! 😆😆
aww have i mentioned how much i love arjun?? 😳😆 he's shoooo cute! lolz poking his own dad in the eye 😲😲 good job kiddo!! 😉😆
hehe and then prem...looking up only when he heard heer's voice! 😲😃 hehe shoooo cute! and then heer looking back at him without caring that so many pplz are around 😉 aww and then that scene...she shies away and thinks abt what he prolly thought...hehe maybe she doesn't love him rite now...but she sure likes likes and likes him 😆😆
and then my best creation, as a human being! 😆 sukz-preet 😃 hehe shooo cute!!! she just looks at him with so much attitude! 😆😆 and preet? rolls up his sleeves? omg like he's going in battle...though having to live with sukz is not less than a battlefield 😆
hehe i love it when she showed attitude to him abt telling him where his room was! aaahhh am gonna love reading this shoooo much!!! hehe 😛
aaah what else? i think i covered the whole thing...well if i missed something, then srry and it was excellent also!! 😉😃
hmm abt the direct link...its next to the quote and other button, if you click on "direct link" the page will refresh and the link at the top as in: www.rinkziscrzi/blahblahblah had changed, copy that and then post it where ur writing ur updates, if u click on that from ur update page, it'll take u straight to ur post instead of just the page...hope u got what i mean?! 😳😆
aah was this long enough??! 😉😆
rinkz
Edited by ~Rinki~ - 17 years ago

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