FF: Hum Saath Saath Hain - *completed* - Page 13

Hi Shabz i hope u didnt mind tht i told u to not to PM me,acttually i dont want to give u presure as u r writing this FF so beautifully&also informing us,We should do some workk also

Itni achi FF agar itni asani se hum dhundle then its not good,The part 3 was superb👏Love HA/PH&SP scene.i wonder where u all FF writers got so unique ideas.ll b waiting for the next part as well😳

So premeer had their first conversation.It was short but really cute.The eating competition between SP was very funny.It was an interesting part.

Originally posted by: huziebaby

the premeer scene in his room was so cute!!😳

i hope he gives her Rs6 back😆

i love how all the relationships are unfolding....waiting to read more😊

~~Huzie~~

Originally posted by: pooji123456789

amazing super
loved ph scene ash harman preet suki
fantastic👏👏

thanks for pm

Originally posted by: amanaranjan

awesome update!! the you owe me 6 bucks thing was too cute

Originally posted by: ranrags

Shabo..first of all thank u so much for PMing..and coming to FF..it was really really cute between Ash-Arjun-Harmaan..aur Preet-Sukriti..uff they can be so childish..right?I guess later they both r going to get stomach ache!!and Prem-Heer..Rs.6..he owes money to her??ha ha..too good..pls continue..

Originally posted by: hil4eva

so far i love your FF..its like a total soap! keep writing! 😊

Originally posted by: kimmu

Sorry, i'm late... I was sleeping 😔Awww no problem....you have no idea how tired I am right now!!

*edited*

You know how amazing this part was, so do i even have to tell you? 😆 Ok if i do then i'm using Himesh's adjectives from SRGMP. Awesom, mindblowing, fantastic! And his newes word HISTORY!AHHH I am so sick of this guy! He needs to stop with the nose thing....its scary!

I love the relationship you showed between Balraaj and Lalit. Balraaj forcing Lalit to eat food. And I dunno why but I just found it hilarious when he said its his stomach. I was just laughing like crazy, dunno why. But I think it had to do with the fact that I think Lalits fat... 🤣ROFL....MOTUUU!!!!!

Have I ever mentioned how much I love Arjun? He's such a sweetheart. You never told me who's playing him, but who ever he is. I can just imagine the cutest little boy as him. He needs a girl. 😉Yea....he's a laugh! He won't have a girl in the story....maybe in the FF!
I loved when he said 'you can't put cherries on a halwa'... 🤣 I love little kid's innocence. But I'm so glad Ash didn't get frustrated, and Arjun eventually listened to her. I still can't stop going.. 'awwww...' 😳 Harman has officially found a mother for his child. Done Deal....maybe maybe not! *evil smile*

Prem and Heer giving eathother sneaking looks... hmm... There so shy. Unlike Preet and Sukz, who were glaring at eachother.. And oh god, having a who-can-eat-more contest? 🤣 So much is going on at that dining table, but everyone was busy in there own thing to notice anything. I think Premeer were the only one eating normally. If I was in there place i would be going.. 'what the heck is going on here'... or if i was in heer's place, i'd just be staring at prem.. 🤔😆Well duh....that's like saying I'm going ot breathe....if you are normal, you would stare....its the only human thing to do!

Preet and sukz can't help but make me start roaring in laughter, even if they have the smallest line. Preet making fun of Sukhi, ooh i sooo wanted to know her reaction there... 😆 Anyways now getting to the real important scene that was going on. ☺️ I just loved it when you showed Heer fixing her hair, and then fixing it unfixed again... 🤣 I loved her reaction there, kind of reminded me of my self... 🤔😆😆ROFL....reminded me of you too!!!!!!! U.K.......right there!😳

I loved loved looooooooveeed Premeer's first interaction. The whole thing just brought the biggest smile on my face! Prem not being able to talk to Heer correctly, and then Heer being bold and telling his he owed her 6 rupees. I sooo was not expecting that.. 🤣 The entire scene was just PURFECT! It was better than perfect, i just loved it! Awesome job writing! Now I can't wait for the next part. Even though i know whats up next.. hehe.. 😃DON'T GIVE IT AWAY!!!!!!!

*edit add*

SMEXY!!! Rinki reminded me of it in her comment.. tehehe.. *Wohooo* HI FIVE GIRLFRIEND!!!

Originally posted by: guju_angel

hahahahah prem n his Rs.6 hhahahha sho funny.. omg.. eating competition.. gosh.. tht jush reminded me of me n my bro d other dai.. lol.. who can eat the most nan+paneer curry lol.. i won =D.. even tho his like 7years older than me =P... newai.. getting to d point.. luved it sho far.. ish veri funi n interesting!.. will b waiting for d nxt part curiously.. sho update soon lol.. byeeeeeeeee

x. Radhika

Originally posted by: jdots

really nice part......

Originally posted by: .xganga.x

That was so cute!

I loved the end part heaps!

?xXx?

Sunayna

Originally posted by: ~Rinki~

aah srry am late huh? well i was sleeping when u posted this!WOW...You and Kimzie both.....twinnies much? man skool is so tiring 🥱🥱 no anyway to the actual part!! i LOVED it! u know that rite? Yup Yup...me know cuz I is smart!!!i mean yaar how could i not? it had a mix of everything and everyone was starring in it...well somewhat! 😆 aah the first scene with lallu nd ballu was rlly sweet...its nice to see that even with being apart, their friendship has not changed...where as in the show...😆 better not say anything! 😉😆 hehe ballu is gonna make lallu HUGE! 😆 Well he is already huge naa.....or as Kimzie says....FAT!!!! aah now that made me miss the whole desi khana and bajana 😆 aah the good old days!*sniff*! We are so old! 😃 hehe okies now back from the past memories! i still cnt believe ur stuck! i mean yaar this is you!! 😲 You know the cliffhanger......am writing that!! so it has to be perfect...i have lil ideas...need to clump it together!!! how can u be stuck! u kept on coming up with parts like that -snaps finger- hm what are u stuck on anywayz? -curious- and the whole ladies chattering away...i can picture that actually...u know the women sitting in one corner and gossiping about this nd that and all that...trust me on this...i have many memories of old ladies gossiping... so annoying yet funny to listen...😆 That's cuz aunties gossip about thier kids...so its interesting!aah and their friends too!!! 😃 good that means the ladies can disappear off to somewhere to shop while the men go to chat abt whatever leaving the kiddies alone by themselves -thinks of things the kiddies can do- aah so many romantic scenes come to mind! 😃😆😆 hehe and the whole ash-harmu-arjun scene was making me smile like a duffer! 😆 ah u already know how much i love arjun rite?? 😉 well now i think its time for him to get a chica for himself! 😉 ooh me is ready for that role! 😆😆 Seriousla.y....hmmmm *thinking*jk but rlly yaar i love him!!! he's sooooooooooooo cute!!!! hehe his little scene with ash was sooo shweet!!!! hehe looks like harmu has a potential mommy for his bby boy! 😉😆😆 aah the premeer sneaking looks at one another!! that was sooo like em huh? i loved it! their soo sharmila type! and then preet-sukz! 😆😆😆 "all-u-can-eat-contest"???? oh great!! i was thinking hm who'll win!! and then preet making a joke on suki! aah i could just picture her ready to kill him and chase him around the house with a broom or something! 😆 i loved it! hehe and then heer has to go check on prem!!! -dance dance!- lolz okay the whole heer checking herself in the mirror...then realizing what she was doing and then messing up her hair again was shoooo cute!! hehe prem already has his affects wrkin on her! 😉😆 aah and the premeer first real interraction!!!! 😳😃😃 LOVED it to pieces!! it was awesome! aah still crack up when i read her saying "you owe me 6 rupees" 😆😆 aah cnt wait for the next part! though me is already knowing what will happen!! 😉😆 anyway i loved this whole part!! it was rlly SMEXY!! there how does that sound? lolz! it was really great! :P 👏👏Sounds great!!! You knw my fave part right......?

rinkz

Originally posted by: mireen19

awesome update n i just loved the last part,,,,,,,,,,

Originally posted by: ravioli_11

Ahaha Preet and Sukriti having an eating contest😆 Their rivalry seems very entertainging. I can just imagine them arguing.

And I see Harman is starting to fall for Ash. Arjun is a funny little child filled with witty remarks😆

Prem got really excited when Heer said she remembered something and I loved her answer. I wonder why he owes her money though

Can't wait to read your next update

Originally posted by: silparavindar

very nice dinner part...preet n meher always eating...

heer n prem cute...so 6rs...letz see when he will give that to her...

Nice one yaar....waiting for ur next part...

Originally posted by: lian

Hi Shabz i hope u didnt mind tht i told u to not to PM me,acttually i dont want to give u presure as u r writing this FF so beautifully&also informing us,We should do some workk also

Itni achi FF agar itni asani se hum dhundle then its not good,The part 3 was superb👏Love HA/PH&SP scene.i wonder where u all FF writers got so unique ideas.ll b waiting for the next part as well😳

Originally posted by: shareen

So premeer had their first conversation.It was short but really cute.The eating competition between SP was very funny.It was an interesting part.