FF: Hum Saath Saath Hain - *completed* - Page 11

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: lian

I cant believe my name in the top😳Thanks Sabz but i think i ll find my way ,u dont have to PM me but u ll get my comments after ur every update😳

Awww Liana....it's cuz you were the first to comment besides Shifz di and shes too busy moderating....so ur first!!! lmao!!! OK then....I'm taking your name off!

Originally posted by: lian

it was toooooooooo good too cute&sweet like u shabz loved it&ll b waiting for the next update😳

That is soooo sweet and nice of you!!! Thanks!😃
Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: amanaranjan

ur ff is ssssssssoooooooo good .pls continue soon

Thanks! Will do!😃

Originally posted by: shareen

I just loved the second part.Great job.Looking forward to some great scenes between the 3 couples.

It's good that u have added our names in the pm list.Now we will know when you have updated the next part.

Awww Shareen! Love your commets!! 😃
YUP! That's the beauty of it!😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
awesome!!i just loved ur ff plz cont fast cant wait for next part........
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Posted: 17 years ago

This FF is simply coollll....waiting for your next part....

Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: mireen19

awesome!!i just loved ur ff plz cont fast cant wait for next part........

Thanks!!!! Next part coming tomorrow!!!😉

Originally posted by: silparavindar

This FF is simply coollll....waiting for your next part....

😎Thanks hun! Means a lot.....it's coming....tomorrow!😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
yay.. am in d list lol.. thanks 4 adding me.. cuz i would probs 4get abt evrithing.. sorri.. dnt feel bad if i dnt recognise u arnd d forum.. i've got memo probs lol.. newai.. will b looking 4ward for d nxt update lol.. wount b veri active as i got tons n tons n tons [u geht d pik ini?] ov wurk tu do sho wount b arnd veri often lol.. newai.. cya arnd.. crnt wait for d nxt part.. shooooooooooo curious!.. lmao.. i jush checked d charector sketch right now n i realised out suki's ridhima =D.. aarwwwww.. she's jush perfect for suki's charector lol.. bless her.. newai.. am out ov here b4 i get bashed by mummy-ji for doing crap on d comp n not finishing hmk lol.. hehehhehhe.. byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee shabo!
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Posted: 17 years ago
I'd love to be PM'd when you've updated!
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: guju_angel

yay.. am in d list lol.. thanks 4 adding me.. cuz i would probs 4get abt evrithing.. sorri.. dnt feel bad if i dnt recognise u arnd d forum.. i've got memo probs lol.. newai.. will b looking 4ward for d nxt update lol.. wount b veri active as i got tons n tons n tons [u geht d pik ini?] ov wurk tu do sho wount b arnd veri often lol.. newai.. cya arnd.. crnt wait for d nxt part.. shooooooooooo curious!.. lmao.. i jush checked d charector sketch right now n i realised out suki's ridhima =D.. aarwwwww.. she's jush perfect for suki's charector lol.. bless her.. newai.. am out ov here b4 i get bashed by mummy-ji for doing crap on d comp n not finishing hmk lol.. hehehhehhe.. byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee shabo!

Awww Radz you are sooo sweet!!! Yea, I understand how it is to fall behind on FF.....! NP...will send PM's!

Originally posted by: .xganga.x

I'd love to be PM'd when you've updated!

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Sunayna

Sure hun.....you are already on the list!😃
Part 3 on its way!!!!!
Posted: 17 years ago

Hey guyz!!🤗Loving the comments, keep 'em coming!

OK school started this week, will be postign reguaraly until my pre-written parts run out...its takimg me longer to write another part though...I've been stuck on Part 12 forever!!!😆
OK enough chit-chat...here is Part 3.....First Prem-Heer Interaction!!!!
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Part 3

Lalit leaned back in his chair, stuffed to the core. Turning to Balraj he exclaimed; "Baas Bhai, aur kuch nahin, arre ye pet hai, itna sara pakwaan nahin samal saktha." Balraj let out a roar, and just shook his head. Leaning in to the table for another roti, he grabbed an extra and put it on Lalit's plate. Noticing the extra food Lalit sighed and resumed eating. Arguing with his friend would just lead to Ballu stuffing his plate even more. At the other end of the table, Gayatri and Teji were blabbering non-stop about this and that. The ladies friendship had been as close, if not closer then their husband's relationship but the two seldom talked when apart.

The middle of the table was certainly a sight to see. One on side you see Ash and Harman desperately trying to get some food in Arjun's mouth, on the other side you see Prem and Heer giving each other sneaking looks and in the middle, it was sight of its own. Preet and Sukhi seemed to be having a Who-Can-Eat-More contest going on. If Preet gulped down a helping of rice, Sukriti would just scoff and eat two more rotis. Both were glaring at each other, piled down helpings after helpings of the delicious food. No words were needed, the hatred in their eyes spoke for them, neither of them was going down without a fight.

Harman winced as another spoonful of rice went flying out landing in his lap. Arjun clapped his hands wildly while Ash giggled. Then Ash patiently filled another spoon and said to Arjun making a pouting face; "Please Arjun, khalo naa? Agar aap khalo toh mein aaj raath ko extra halwa doongi! Please….pretty please? With a cherry on top?" Arjun looked at Ash and exclaimed, "You don't know anything! You can't put cherries on halwa, that's for ice-cream!!" Harman felt an urge to laugh, his son came up with faster replies then anyone! Looking up, his laughter died on his throat as he was seeing Ash in a completely new light, in the roop of a mother. She laughed daintly and held her ear. "Aacha sorry baba, galthi hogi! Aab please khalo?" Arjun glared at her and then gave the smallest of smiles opening his mouth, allowing Ash to feed him. Harman grinned. Mission Accomplished.

After dinner everyone besides Prem who retired to his room early due to jet-lag gathered in the living room to talk and catch up on old times. Heer was politely laughing at some joke Preet made aimed indirectly at Sukhi when she felt someone tap her on the shoulder. It was Teji. "Beta, ye dud zara jaake Prem ko dekhe aa? Becharre kuch kahaya nahin naa…bhook lagi hogi usko." Heer stood up, taking the milk with her. Walking down the hallway she paused in the mirror to fix her hair. Shocked at herself she started taunting herself. She didn't even like this guy She didn't even know anything about him! Why would she care how she looked? She gently rubbed her hair causing it to return to its original state. There! Perfect. She walked down the rest of the hallway slowly, as to not spill the milk. Upon reaching the room, she lightly knocked on the door causing Prem to come out a light sleep and groggily call out, "Kaun?" Heer didn't reply but just entered the room, walking to the bedside table, leaving the glass there. She turned to go but then she heard a small voice say, "Heer."

She shut her eyes, his voice caused goose bumps to erupt all over her body. Still turned away she replied, "jee?" Prem hesitated, cursing himself at not being able to have a proper conversation with a girl that consisted more then 3 words. "Ummm…I was wondering….matlab….uhhhh…..our parents remember reach other, and Bhaiya and Ash di remember each other….I was wondering, do you remember anything?" Prem clenched his teeth waiting for a reply. Heer on the other hand was confused. Still with her back turned she said, "Remember what? About what?" Prem bit his lip before replying, "You know…..anything about……us." Heer smiled softly finally turning to meet his gaze. Their eyes locked and Heer replied, "Well I do remember one thing." Prem nearly jumped he was so excited. "YOU DO…..ahem….I mean…..you do? What?" Heer gave a little laugh, looked at him straight in the eye and calmly replied, "You owe me 6 rupees." With that, she threw her duppata over her shoulder and left the room, closing the door behind her. A shocked Prem was left sitting on the bed, his mind a blank. Then, slowly a grin appeared on his face. He couldn't wait to see what the upcoming days had in store for his and Heer's newly re-founded friendship.


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So whatdya think? Leave your comments/ critisism anything! Oh, one more....will always be updating on the weekend....so you got a week to leave your comments!😉
Shabz
Edited by shabo24 - 16 years ago

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